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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 12, 2011 2:02:28 GMT -5
Amy, thanks for letting me know. I must have missed your comment. I'm bracing myself for the massive comment. Holley, you are too kind Jill, Exactly, she's been through a rough couple of months and she deserved the downtime.
She'll be sober and disorderly in the next update. She's really determined to give him a taste of the honeypot, and he keeps denying himself. When he finally gives in, she'll have her way with him. LMAO.
He is taking it hard, but you're right, he made the bed, so he must enjoying sleeping on it. She definitely does respect his respect and honesty and I think he's realized that.
He'll need it.
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 12, 2011 8:17:52 GMT -5
Fallen updated Warning: shirtless Uriah up ahead Ch. 48
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Post by holleyberry on Apr 12, 2011 9:22:07 GMT -5
I love waking up to Fallen updates Especially a shirtless Uriah I wish I had time to leave a proper message, but I got to get the kids ready for school.
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Post by qui on Apr 12, 2011 11:46:38 GMT -5
Oh Uriah Ha! I knew she'd joke about his age! That was cute though! Calling him grandpa! At least he got a laugh out of that! Now bring on the old man jokes about aching backs and falling asleep everywhere lol.
Glad he got everything out in the open! Now all he has to do is explain that Rolene chick so Alexis can allow any and everything she says to roll off of her back.
I'm glad they got this cleared up! Alexis isn't giving up and me likes! She has a good point. They are Twin-Flames and as one of her soul mates, there will never be another man (other than Jared) that will understand her the way he does. The first time should be with someone you love and trust so everything seems to be there. Maybe not on the timing but it's there.
Keep these chapters coming!! I am so loving this!
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 12, 2011 12:17:24 GMT -5
LOL @ Qui, So he's droolworthy Ha! You knew cos you planted that idea in my head. So like Alexis to be playful. He'll be hearing a lot of those jokes from her and Brenna. It was about time they cleared the air. I needed to move the storyline along back to the vampires. True, true, the will have to talk about Rolene at some point. Nope, she'll only give up once she's had her way with him. Like how you slipped in "other than Jared". I love, love that guy. Yeah, she's ready to embrace being a "woman" with the right man, but you're right, the timing isn't right, there's too much going on with her magical awakening and the vampires. But soon...I just need to clear up a few things and end few storylines. Glad you aren't sick of it yet, after 48 chapters Thanks for reading.
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Post by holleyberry on Apr 12, 2011 12:20:52 GMT -5
Everything Qui said I loved the "grandpa" joke too. that was funny. Alexis' personality is so lovely. Uriah was worried about her for nothing. It shows how much they love each other. I don't think she feels obligated at all. She just knows she is Uriah's and Uriah is hers. So beautiful there relationship. I sense a hot passionate love scene coming! I can't wait!!!
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 12, 2011 12:30:26 GMT -5
Holley, Aw, that makes me so happy to hear, about Alexis' personality. He was stressing for nothing, she's got a very good understanding of what they are both about. As much as he wants to be selfish and keep her all to himself, he knows she's still way too young to be even in a position to think about such a long term commitment. But yeah, he needs to stop stressing, and enjoy the here and the now, since tomorrow's not guaranteed. Oh, easy on the pressure there. I don't do love scenes well
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Post by jillyson on Apr 12, 2011 12:35:32 GMT -5
Same as Holley - I don't have too much time for a comment, since lunch is over, but I'm so glad I got to read it, and you know you can't go wrong with shirtless Uriah!
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Post by holleyberry on Apr 12, 2011 12:47:18 GMT -5
@ Jilly and her dancing bananas!
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 12, 2011 12:48:05 GMT -5
Same as Holley - I don't have too much time for a comment, since lunch is over, but I'm so glad I got to read it, and you know you can't go wrong with shirtless Uriah! Jill, no problem, I understand Yeah, they are well on their way to being A-OKAY. True, now that she knows how he feels and why he kept stuff from her, she can start forgiving him. I like that, what you said about her choosing him out of love. LOL, really, a banana dance I don't think he needs any more convincing that it's time he put out for her. The banana dance sealed the deal. It's on ;D
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Post by qui on Apr 12, 2011 12:49:58 GMT -5
LOL I did? I can't wait! I think I'll crack up the whole time! I can see them both ganging up on him with the jokes. He better stop paying and just DO HER as Jilly said! LOL I mean really, it might help them both. Right now they both want it and have to fight off the thoughts just to think about the issues ahead. I really might help them to do it and at least have the good images in their heads as something to look forward to. Just saying! I sense a hot passionate love scene coming! I can't wait!!! I sure hope so!!
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 12, 2011 13:06:50 GMT -5
Qui, LMAO, you really, really want that love scene don't ya Funny part is I haven't even worked it out in my head I think Krisis' love scenes have sucked out all the creativity from me Or maybe it was that one comment about me being raunchy that's putting me off
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Post by qui on Apr 12, 2011 13:30:38 GMT -5
Qui, LMAO, you really, really want that love scene don't ya Funny part is I haven't even worked it out in my head I think Krisis' love scenes have sucked out all the creativity from me Or maybe it was that one comment about me being raunchy that's putting me off LOL I really do! Well, you know I am full of ideas! Just channel your inner Uriah. He is OLD ( ) and romantic. He would "woo" Alexis and make it the most memorable experience ever. Nothing about any of your scenes is raunchy! Trust me, we've both read raunchy and you've come nowhere close. As I was telling Daijah, there is a line and no one on this forum has ever crossed it. Don't let that throw you off. I'm on yahoo if you want ideas.
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 12, 2011 13:36:58 GMT -5
Cool, I might just take you up on that ideas offer don't tempt me Qui ;D
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Post by amylu1988 on Apr 12, 2011 13:54:37 GMT -5
Val: *Beware, very long comment ahead* Wow, where to start? Well, firstly, I finally looked up Nadia’s theme like I always remind myself to when I read about Ivan and Riley and it’s beautiful; it’s on my mp3 player already. I love Ivan and Riley’s relationship, when I last read Fallen it was right as Riley was brought back and Arianna did her hilarious search on Google; it made me smile that even sim vampires can’t get Google to search properly. But yeah, the following chapters made me feel so much for Ivan and I was crying like anything at the end of chapter 45, what a sad and heartfelt way for her to go. Wonderfully written Val, I was so moved by it. Ah, and Alexis and Uriah. ;D It’s so difficult, I can see why Uriah is keeping things from her, and why he wouldn’t want to bombard her with everything all at once; but omg I feel Alexis’ frustration at almost being lied to, at having half truths and cover ups to cope with. Uriah needs to be honest with her, and fast. Oh, and Uriah needs to know that Matthew’s anger will still be worth it if he gives in to Alexis. Twin flames are meant to be together. *nods sagely* And Jared and Alexis are such a cute friendship, I hope he can get over his crush on her and see her as a great friend rather than a love interest. Jared needs a nice girl who loves him for who he is. They were so sweet catching up in the background while Uriah tried to heal Riley. Talking of that moment, the shot of Uriah getting smited for trying to help Riley was epic, you got the angle so perfectly on him being flung backwards. The whole scene and the argument outside afterwards was so fraught, it was filled with tension. Loved the brightness filters on the shots with the rogue whitelighter, Ivan really looked as if he was in shadow in comparison. And her opinion was so succinct on the matter, it really summed up Riley's zombie condition. I also loved the bit with the three cousins, seeing their abilities and how they interact. It’s a shame that the other two girls aren’t as keen to keep the contact up like Alexis is; maybe they’ll change their minds as time goes on. It was also great to see all the paintings and add up all the meetings and glimpses of them over the chapters, and see some of the future. The war looks so scary! The vision Zachariah threw at Alexis was creepy and no wonder she was drawn to fight, anyone would want to stop all that taking over the Realm! And yay for Matthew being free, even if he isn’t happy about how it came about. And Rolene, she’s an interesting one, I wouldn’t have put her down as Uriah’s type! She really knew how to get Alexis riled up though; she should have been on fire with the emotions running through Alexis. Heh, didn’t think killing Xaphan would be that easy, but poor Drucilla, having to put up with him again! She’s going to cause trouble when she doesn’t want to, and all because she can’t get rid of him and his darkness. I’m not sure who I feel most sorry for in this story, her or Ivan. That scene of him on the beach with Riley’s urn was so heart-wrenching, poor guy. Aw, and chapter 48 was great, with Alexis and Uriah finally getting all their problems aired and talking things through. They’re going to be in such a better place because of it and hopefully their relationship will endure the war and they’ll be in the same happy state after it as they were at the end of 48. Really, really loved reading this Val, and my sincere apologies that I got so behind. Wonderful stuff, and amazing shots and brilliant writing as always!
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