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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 27, 2010 1:18:12 GMT -5
Jill, I had a few issues with slideshare when I was still writing Unforgettable. Sometimes I couldn't access it, and the slides would take forever to load for readers with slower connections and they'd e-mail me frustrated that they can't view the chapters. The first few chapters are short but hopefully the longer chapters will be longer, depending on how much inspiration I have of course  |
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Post by jillyson on Mar 27, 2010 8:58:50 GMT -5
{sending inspiration for 3-thread chapter posts}  |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 29, 2010 1:48:02 GMT -5
You asked for it...don't say I didn't warn you when you have to scroll through 100 screens  |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 29, 2010 5:54:42 GMT -5
Thank God you were teasing about 100 frames!  LOVE the chapter! I'm so glad I have the proof reading rights to this story!  ;D
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 29, 2010 6:40:42 GMT -5
Thank God you were teasing about 100 frames! LOVE the chapter! I'm so glad I have the proof reading rights to this story! ;D Nah, I couldn't do that to you :-) I didn't think you'd do it so soon. Now, I just have to wait until I get home so I can get my thrashing. I'm busy biting my nails here. By the time I get home my fingers will be gone too. I wonder what I did wrong this time  But thanks for looking at it for me |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 29, 2010 6:50:13 GMT -5
LOL.. you worry too much! This chapter was in pretty good shape, actually. I did fix up a couple of sentence fragments, because no matter what, I don't believe those are a good thing...lol. There was also a missing word here and there, which is one of my most repeated mistakes when I've written a chapter. |
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Post by jillyson on Mar 29, 2010 11:41:55 GMT -5
I'd gladly scroll thru 100 frames! (cuz I'm messed up like that!)
Now hurry home and get this posted!!!!
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Post by amylu1988 on Mar 29, 2010 12:58:54 GMT -5
Val! I am so, so sorry it's taken me so long to get round to reading your stories, this was excellent so far and I just devoured the two chapters in minutes, brilliant and I can't wait to see what happens next. Your writing's so observant and natural, I really did enjoy reading it. ;D More soon? |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 29, 2010 15:39:30 GMT -5
I'd gladly scroll thru 100 frames! (cuz I'm messed up like that!) Now hurry home and get this posted!!!! Scrolling through 100 frames is one thing, but proof reading it is another, so . . . hush up! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 30, 2010 1:20:54 GMT -5
Val! I am so, so sorry it's taken me so long to get round to reading your stories, this was excellent so far and I just devoured the two chapters in minutes, brilliant and I can't wait to see what happens next. Your writing's so observant and natural, I really did enjoy reading it. ;D More soon? Thanks for reading Amy and yeah, I know the first two chapters were short and chapter three is ready, just waiting to be uploaded. And it's bit longer, all thanks to Jill and Karima's for longer chapters. |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 30, 2010 6:22:58 GMT -5
Don't Val! Your new chapter is the perfect size! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 30, 2010 6:30:10 GMT -5
Don't Val! Your new chapter is the perfect size! Okay okay, since you asked nicely I'll keep it at that length |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 30, 2010 6:41:18 GMT -5
Cool! ;D That's right around the size to which I try to limit my chapters.
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Post by jillyson on Mar 30, 2010 20:35:49 GMT -5
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Post by Aussie Karima on Mar 30, 2010 20:42:39 GMT -5
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