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Post by Aussie Karima on Mar 25, 2010 9:36:38 GMT -5
;D This is what she looked like last time I was in the game!  Now the green skin has gone!(third time uploading the game!) HP, said she had fixed the problems with the skin, & this is the only way she could fix it!  Them having a green face is apparently how they keep their spells, she had previously taken all the green skin away & then they could not cast spells!or had spells missing!  |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 25, 2010 14:15:07 GMT -5
So, my first day at the new job went well without any hiccups and to celebrate, I come bearing chapter two. I know, the weekend came way too early for ya'll ;D
And I've added a plug in for the font. It's on the right hand side menu bar underneath the "meta" functionality. You can increase the font or decrease it to your heart's content. The dafault fault is set at 14.
The link to chapter two is on the 1st page of this thread.
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 25, 2010 17:36:52 GMT -5
I commented at your site.  |
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Post by jillyson on Mar 25, 2010 21:50:13 GMT -5
Oh, Man! I was just going to log off for the night, and I find out ch 2 is up???
I am weak...I must read! (I probaby won't comment until tomorrow though!)
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 25, 2010 22:00:32 GMT -5
*off to read*
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Post by jillyson on Mar 25, 2010 22:05:15 GMT -5
I lied. I left a comment!
I'm glad your new job is going well, Val, and I'm glad you were able to get the chapter posted! Now you know what I'm gonna say next...MORE!!!!
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 25, 2010 22:12:40 GMT -5
Well, the plot thickens! It looks as though Daddy knows something Alexis doesn't! All you've done is wet my appetite for MORE! More! More!  |
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Post by joandsarah on Mar 25, 2010 22:21:06 GMT -5
That is too short! *Demands moar!* ;D Well when you are able to. |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Mar 25, 2010 22:54:40 GMT -5
;D Fantastic, I only have one complaint, it was too short! (Val don't mind me, I just want MORE!)  ~PS~ Jo, did you see the Witch with the green face? above in the spoiler!  |
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Post by joandsarah on Mar 25, 2010 23:42:04 GMT -5
Yes I did karima. I didn't want to flood Val's thread too much, is why I didn't reply. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 26, 2010 0:27:32 GMT -5
Don't worry about me guys, flood away Jo. Thanks everyone for reading. I knew you all might have a problem with the length but I made the chapters short because I'm not using slideshare and I thought it might be a bit too much since you have to scroll down now to read the chapters. I don't know about when the next one will be out though, but you'll obviously be the first to know  @ Holley,Daddy definitely knows something his daughter doesn't but whether or not he'll tell her in time remains to be seen. @jill, let's hope Alexis is smart enough to realise the roadblock has been removed so to speak :-) @karima,I'm so relieved you love it. At one point I really felt like I was leaving out a large chunk of detail. @tina, I just hope I can keep the intrigue going with the plot |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 26, 2010 6:12:01 GMT -5
I'm sure you can do it, but if you get stuck, you are welcome to ask for advice. With this kind of story, leaving out a large chunk of detail is what keeps the intrique/mystery going. All that is usuall filled in as the plot moves forward. |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Mar 26, 2010 10:23:30 GMT -5
;D What Tina said is correct, I will use a painting as a example! (it's what I know!) OK, the artist is looking at a blank canvas, to you & I it is blank, to the artist he can see colors & shapes,Shading & light,some whimsy or happiness tinged with sadness,each painting has a feeling & a message, but you & I can not see those things until the whole painting is complete,on completion we all have or own feelings on that finished painting, it touches use all in different ways,but the artist from the beginning saw the whole painting,with subtle changes along the way, the finished painting is as the artist portrayed! were you & I started like the artist, staring at a blank canvas,.................only the artist saw its truth, in his mind he saw the finished painting & knew what emotions he wanted to portray,he saw what we could not see in a blank canvas! ~ I have many a blank canvas............waiting to be filled! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 26, 2010 11:32:18 GMT -5
;D Thanks Tina and Karima, your advice has made me feel so much better.
And Karima, I love your illustration about the canvas and the artist. Are you sure you're not a teacher im hiding? I know if I had you for a teacher in high school my grades would have been so much better ;D
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Post by jillyson on Mar 26, 2010 18:42:25 GMT -5
Wow, Karima! You need to get back into your stories and write for us again!
I was going to ask why no slideshare this time - any reason?
And pleeze. You were afraid it would be too long to scroll down? ReallY??? When I make you all scroll through 3 posts to get 1 chapter???
Honey, I will gladly read through 40 posts to get thru this story ANY DAY!!!
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