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Post by Pixx on Jun 6, 2010 13:19:53 GMT -5
I'm reading the new chapter now, for a minute I was getting the characters confused but I sorted that out now. Did you change Ivan's eyes? I don't remember them being so intense.
Oooo Adrianna changed Jared...she's in trouble!!!
"presumptuous arrogance" I love that!
Okay, this was totally worth waiting for. It's like an appetizer before the main course, I can't wait to see Vampy Jared or see Ivan's revenge...whatever it's going to be and who it's going to involve. This chapter was great, I can't wait for the next one!!!
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Post by valpre1983 on Jun 6, 2010 13:47:11 GMT -5
I'm reading the new chapter now, for a minute I was getting the characters confused but I sorted that out now. Did you change Ivan's eyes? I don't remember them being so intense. Oooo Adrianna changed Jared...she's in trouble!!! "presumptuous arrogance" I love that! Okay, this was totally worth waiting for. It's like an appetizer before the main course, I can't wait to see Vampy Jared or see Ivan's revenge...whatever it's going to be and who it's going to involve. This chapter was great, I can't wait for the next one!!! I didn't change Ivan's eyes. I don't know why they look intense now  Mayb he's hungry and he needs to feed. Care to be his meal Pixx  I don't think Arianna realises the world of trouble she's in  Thanks for reading ;D |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jun 6, 2010 14:03:26 GMT -5
I'm reading the new chapter now, for a minute I was getting the characters confused but I sorted that out now. Did you change Ivan's eyes? I don't remember them being so intense. Oooo Adrianna changed Jared...she's in trouble!!! "presumptuous arrogance" I love that! Okay, this was totally worth waiting for. It's like an appetizer before the main course, I can't wait to see Vampy Jared or see Ivan's revenge...whatever it's going to be and who it's going to involve. This chapter was great, I can't wait for the next one!!! I didn't change Ivan's eyes. I don't know why they look intense now Mayb he's hungry and he needs to feed. Care to be his meal Pixx I don't think Arianna realises the world of trouble she's in Thanks for reading ;D ~ Didn't you know Val, Pixx (Simself!) is a dab hand at feeding,Vamps! And not just any Vamps for Miss Pixx,no it was the cream of the crop! And two very good looking Vamps at that!  |
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Post by Pixx on Jun 6, 2010 14:55:34 GMT -5
I'll LOVE to be his meal >  LOL yeah my simself was a meal for Louis once. It'll be an honor to be dinner for Ivan ;D |
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Post by valpre1983 on Jun 6, 2010 15:58:12 GMT -5
I'll LOVE to be his meal > LOL yeah my simself was a meal for Louis once. It'll be an honor to be dinner for Ivan ;D Should I be worried  |
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Post by Pixx on Jun 6, 2010 18:05:11 GMT -5
....Just a little ;D
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Post by holleyberry on Jun 6, 2010 20:46:33 GMT -5
This is the THIRD time I have tries to comment  Anyways... Loved the update! I am going to go out on a limb and say she turned Jared! Too bad we didn't get to see a Hot Vampire Jared this update, but...
...we did get to see a hot Uriah. Too bad he is such a Douche! Argh! No wonder Alexis is trying to avoid him. Could he get any colder? Why did he bother coming over? |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jun 7, 2010 0:30:22 GMT -5
Have you been have troubles with the site too! Holley! I thought it was just me,at my end!
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Post by valpre1983 on Jun 7, 2010 0:56:37 GMT -5
This is the THIRD time I have tries to comment Anyways... Loved the update! I am going to go out on a limb and say she turned Jared! Too bad we didn't get to see a Hot Vampire Jared this update, but...
...we did get to see a hot Uriah. Too bad he is such a Douche! Argh! No wonder Alexis is trying to avoid him. Could he get any colder? Why did he bother coming over? Lol @ Uriah's doucheness And you're right about Jared. Now, Uriah on the other hand is like his sister said, Uriah. I think he's more on the quiet side than anything else really. But then again Alexis is an assignment for him. He's not out to make friends and he came to get the job done hence his distance. But sooner or later, as Alexis' handler he'll have to find a way to be more...natural with her. But his 'sister' on the other hand is trying to so hard to fit in, hence the party she's going all out to make happen. Uriah tagging along was really something that just had to be done. No major change to the plot, but a huge revelation for Alexis. Thanks for reading Karima, I've also been having problems with the site |
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Post by valpre1983 on Jun 7, 2010 4:55:20 GMT -5
Okay, I wasn't going to do this but since Jo pointed out she's a tad confused about some aspects the story I thought I should clear up some things. This was initially a scene from Chapter Three, right after Alexis is recued in St. Sulpice but the whole scene sounded lame so I cut it out. I know, I know, not the best writing and pictures, but it should do the job of explaining Uriah and Brenna's roles. To understand this scene you might have to go over the last bit of Chapter Three and piece everything together from there. I didn't bother with getting this proofread since its just a backdrop of the story so, please do bear with the imperfections. 1st Prelude (explains a bit of Uriah and Brenna)fallen-valpre1983.blogspot.com/2010/06/1st-prelude.html2nd Prelude (takes place just before Uriah meets Alexis in her dream in Chapter Four)fallen-valpre1983.blogspot.com/2010/06/2nd-prelude.html |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jun 7, 2010 6:46:00 GMT -5
;D Wow, anything to do with Fallen is fine by me,more to read,even though I have a clear picture already!  ~ Of what is happening & I'm reading the same as everyone else! EDIT: I did try to leave a message on Blogger,but got an error code! sorry!  |
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Post by joandsarah on Jun 7, 2010 6:46:10 GMT -5
Thanks Val, hopefully I will remember whose who. |
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Post by Pixx on Jun 7, 2010 8:15:04 GMT -5
I *heart* the preludes!
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Post by amylu1988 on Jun 7, 2010 13:22:26 GMT -5
;D Yay for preludes, they're both so good Val, it makes me want to read more! Your characters are so interesting and complex, you get everything across really well though, thanks for sharing these. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Jun 7, 2010 13:33:31 GMT -5
Another scene that never made the cut but explains queit a lot. This was meant to be the start of chapter five. And it focuses on Jared and Arianna quite a bit. If you can't stand blood and fangs then skip this one. Again, sorry abt the crappy pics and writing. I'm not good with this vampire stuf :-[f. Now give me romance any day, I'm your woman ;D 3rd Prelude: Jared Hurlfallen-valpre1983.blogspot.com/2010/06/3rd-prelude.html |
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