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Post by nygirl on Feb 23, 2011 17:43:31 GMT -5
Ok so I am now working on my last little side project and will be going full time into it once I wrap The Lost Gardens up. Yes I am using the awful sims 3 storyboard  I just didn't want to make another website at the moment  ***I have moved this over to a blog now for those who have trouble reading the storyboard***I got an idea for this story pretty randomly and wanted to get a start on it while the ideas were fresh in my head! This story I guess could be classified as Romance/Drama/Mystery/Suspense...a little of everything all rolled into one.  Synopsis:Abby Reid is your typical over-achieving girl next door who was always destined for great things. When her parents mysteriously die, she drops everything in her life to fly back home and tend to family matters. While making the funeral arrangements for her parents she meets Christopher Hartman, the lead investigator on her parent’s case. After learning of Abby’s situation Detective Harman hires Abby to work for him and what starts as professional courtesy quickly turns into infatuation. Yet, how can the revelation of a dark secret threaten to tear them apart? Chapter GuideNewest Chapter:Chapter 9 |
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Post by qui on Feb 23, 2011 18:46:13 GMT -5
What a great start! Hartman intrigues me already! Abby is very strong for the way she contained herself for the most part. Can't wait for more! |
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Post by nygirl on Feb 23, 2011 18:56:26 GMT -5
What a great start! Hartman intrigues me already! Abby is very strong for the way she contained herself for the most part. Can't wait for more! Thank you so much! Abby is a very strong woman, but she does have her weaknesses and those will show as the story progresses. BTW Love your new siggy haha! |
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Post by qui on Feb 23, 2011 19:06:11 GMT -5
Lol thanks! She is very strong! There is no way I would have been able to stay on my feet that long! My grandfather's funeral, I cried so hard that my eyes were nearly swollen shut! I just hope she can get pass the pain soon! |
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Post by nygirl on Feb 23, 2011 19:57:57 GMT -5
Lol thanks! She is very strong! There is no way I would have been able to stay on my feet that long! My grandfather's funeral, I cried so hard that my eyes were nearly swollen shut! I just hope she can get pass the pain soon! She reminds me of how I am now...holding it all in...but at my fathers funeral I did the same thing...I cried so much my eyes swelled shut and then after that I turned it all off again. Abby hasn't really come to terms with it all just yet...to her right now it is surreal. |
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Post by qui on Feb 23, 2011 20:20:20 GMT -5
I can relate! Once the funeral was over, I shut down and refused to even talk about it! That's kind of unhealthy. Hope she doesn't keep it in to the point of exploding. |
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Post by jillyson on Feb 23, 2011 23:29:36 GMT -5
I just caught this - I'll read it tomorrow during my lunch!
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Post by valpre1983 on Feb 24, 2011 1:11:11 GMT -5
Love the sound of this from the synopsis, but the storyboard doesn't work for me. I'll check it out when I get a chance though.  |
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Post by nygirl on Feb 24, 2011 2:39:20 GMT -5
Love the sound of this from the synopsis, but the storyboard doesn't work for me. I'll check it out when I get a chance though. Sorry the storyboard doesn't work for you...I just didn't really want to have to make another website...but I suppose if i have time this weekend I will post it on a blog too so that you are able to read if you would like to still. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Feb 24, 2011 5:38:47 GMT -5
No, it's cool, really. Please don't go out of your way because of me. I'll read it when I can on the storyboard, it's just that it may take me some time to get to it. I'm having such a hard time reading Leah's Infinite Night on the storyboard, as it is, that's all |
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Post by jillyson on Feb 24, 2011 19:31:51 GMT -5
I can't get it to come up, either. Seaweedy posts there, and hers always show up for me eventually. I'll keep popping in on it until I get lucky!
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Post by jillyson on Feb 25, 2011 13:05:54 GMT -5
Got it to show up here at work!
I can't believe the didn't leave Abby the house! I don't know what to make of Rita - I'll have to hold off judgement on her.
The detective showing up like that & watching her at the cemetery? Creepy! Something's up with that! Great start - can't wait to see where this one's going!
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Post by nygirl on Feb 25, 2011 23:18:53 GMT -5
Got it to show up here at work!
I can't believe the didn't leave Abby the house! I don't know what to make of Rita - I'll have to hold off judgement on her.
The detective showing up like that & watching her at the cemetery? Creepy! Something's up with that! Great start - can't wait to see where this one's going!
Thank you so much! I am in time probably going to add it to a blog I just didn't have the time to do it right this moment. And having it all written out while the thoughts were in my head...it was nearly killing me not to share it somehow! hehe.
~ I can't say too much about Hartman's motives at the moment as it will give too much of the storyline away at this point. But he isn't trying to be a creep.
~ The house was left to Rita for the soul fact that their daughter would not be able to tend to it as she was halfway across the country attending school...
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Post by seaweedy on Feb 26, 2011 8:51:17 GMT -5
Just started reading, great story as always. I hope she gets to that envelope soon, I am very curious.
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Post by nygirl on Feb 28, 2011 22:38:19 GMT -5
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