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Post by jillyson on Apr 4, 2010 11:23:29 GMT -5
Well I sure don't blame you for ditching the subtitling - I could see where that would be a giant pain after awhile trying to write it & convey the translation as well!
And now I understand why I kept going back into the story to see what she was talking about in her post & couldn't figure it out! Lol!
Don't worry - we love the story we were given, and I'm sure we'll continue to do that!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 4, 2010 21:43:41 GMT -5
I'd hate to have to do subtitling as well. It was hard enough for me when I allowed Gustav to say a few sentences in French in my story...lol. I wanted him to slip into French during his 'trauma', but I had to make sure it was understood what he said. It's not an easy thing in a written story.  I think you're doing an awesome job, Val! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 10, 2010 14:32:51 GMT -5
Life in Lake Witchyka is about to take a surprising turn when old friendships are rekindled, new alliances are formed and some dreams come true...I come bearing the final characters of Fallen. DruWill she be a friend or a foe? I just couldn't help but show her off Karima. I think she looks damn pretty, doesn't she? Arianna-who is she and what business does she have in Lake Witchyka? Ralph- What secrets does he hide behind those smouldering eyes? IvanThe deceptively gorgeous twins. But are they really twins? In depth character bios will be added on my site soon soon... |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Apr 10, 2010 15:54:26 GMT -5
 WOW! new characters! I think Ivan, looks like an angel............but, is very, very, bad!  ~ All of them a gorgeous, & the twins, really are not twins, are they?  ?? ~ I can not wait for the next CH! I am so hooked on FALLEN! 
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 10, 2010 17:50:52 GMT -5
WOW! new characters! I think Ivan, looks like an angel............but, is very, very, bad! ~ All of them a gorgeous, & the twins, really are not twins, are they? ?? ~ I can not wait for the next CH! I am so hooked on FALLEN! Karima, I love a guy who looks like an angel but is very, very bad.... grrrr |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 10, 2010 18:41:59 GMT -5
Ralph and Ivan both are HOT! |
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Post by jillyson on Apr 11, 2010 1:18:07 GMT -5
Your simmies are gorgeous, but you pulled a Tina on me and psyched me out! Lol! I thought there was a chapter!
I don't mind though, since we get to wonder about these awesome new characters until we get their story!!
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 12, 2010 12:44:13 GMT -5
Sorry Jill  The pics I took for the next chapter don't seem to come together. I just can't bring myself to work on it right now for some weird inexplicable reason, so it will be a wee while before the next update. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 24, 2010 13:51:52 GMT -5
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Post by Aussie Karima on Apr 24, 2010 14:52:02 GMT -5
;D I am totally blown away, I love it!  |
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Post by jillyson on Apr 24, 2010 15:07:51 GMT -5
This was awesome!!!
What a wonderful surprise to come home and find a chapter of Fallen waiting for me!
Wow – where to begin…
I don’t think Riley is dead at all, I think she may be the vampire who attacked Nancy…and what’s more, she resembles our Alexis a little bit, especially with her new straight hair. Wonder what Ivan will make of that when he hits town???
And Finally Uriah makes his appearance as someone who’s in her real life, not just her dreams! Yay, Uriah!
Dru seems friendly, but as we all know, looks can be deceiving! And I wonder where Jared is?
Great chapter, Val!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 24, 2010 21:31:40 GMT -5
It is awesome, Val! She may have had it up sooner had I not taken so long to proof read it for her.  I fumbled the ball on that one and totally dropped the ball on the one for you, Jill, as you well know.  I suck lately...  Anyway, the chapter was awesome and I'll try to remember to head over your sight and comment there as well in the next few days, Val. I really can't wait to see what happens next! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 25, 2010 0:52:41 GMT -5
Thanks guys for reading. Karima, no speculations this time ? Did it leave you speechless. I'm wondering if that's a good thing Jill- right now I can safely say Riley is not the one who attacked Nancy and she really is dead. And her resemblence to Alexis, I never thought of it until you mentioned it. So, yeah Uriah seems like he exists in her dreams and real life too so Alexis can't be really loony afterall. And the redhead does seem a little too perfect and you know what they say, if it's too good to be true then it's definitely not true ;D Tina, let's just say we can't be on the ball all the time and you're forgiven for taking the occassional day off. I appreciate you proofreading my stuff, no matter how late ;D |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Apr 25, 2010 4:08:36 GMT -5
;D I was being diplomatic! As I could say something & give certain things away that I already know, like Dru & who the true person was that did the dead!(her true identity,even though we have all seen her!As she has been introduced!) So that is why I am closed mouth on the subject! EDIT: I meant to put deed, not dead, but you get the meaning! 'The person whom killed!' |
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Post by joandsarah on Apr 25, 2010 6:59:36 GMT -5
Good chapter Val, although I'm somewhat confused with some of the characters, those vampire guys. I'm not connecting them to the story at all, sorry. My head, it's probably forgotten some earlier reference. Hopefully I will connect those dots next time or just go back and read it again. There is something to be said for starting intricate stories once they are finished.  |
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