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Post by Brianna on Mar 10, 2011 16:11:30 GMT -5
Hahhaa thanks  I dont have a really big texas accent..or do I? O.o But I'm from Houston and no i dont live on a ranch XP But sadly I'm still country haha |
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Post by jillyson on Mar 11, 2011 11:42:38 GMT -5
OMG - she might be connected to this guy???
And this guy is connected to his own mother's murder???
Deep, deep stuff! I can't wait to see what comes next!
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Post by Brianna on Mar 12, 2011 23:10:41 GMT -5
Chapter 6 is up! Since the site is gonna be down for a few day I broke it up into 2 parts so yeah and I was kinda lazy, but there's a reason for the laziness....THERE'S PICTURES!!  ENJOY IT GUYS! Warning there is nudity O.o |
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Post by daijahv on Mar 12, 2011 23:34:35 GMT -5
Autumn is absolutely beautiful, although that was clear not only from your description but the cover art as well. I really LOVE Adrian also! Great job with the images though honestly you didn't need them! You describe everything flawlessly. I can't believe he wasn't just a tad more upset about her having taken the key. If the poor guy wasn't so blinded by her lovely um...assets he'd see just how much he is being played. He knows she is teasing him BUT he can't see passed that! Come on Adrian wake up! The girl wants something from you. Maybe information about her brother's release, maybe to have you tamper with some evidence or at least sneak her in so she can do it herself. If she can easily get that key from him, I wonder just how hard it would be to snag a security badge or other tool she could use to get her way. I just can't trust this girl. She is too into using sex to get her way. I can't wait for part 2, great job! |
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Post by Brianna on Mar 13, 2011 10:00:33 GMT -5
Aww shuck that you  sorry that it was so short. actually last night I could have easily added the rest of the chapter..its not that long...i might actually done that since I'v already took some of the main photos, but my sims game decied to crash when I went to a difff community lot. ...hmmm be on the look out for that. hahaha |
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Post by Brianna on Mar 14, 2011 0:56:36 GMT -5
OMG - she might be connected to this guy??? And this guy is connected to his own mother's murder??? Hahaha oh you can only imagine  |
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Post by sweetdreams25 on Mar 15, 2011 17:40:33 GMT -5
Hahhaa thanks I dont have a really big texas accent..or do I? O.o But I'm from Houston and no i dont live on a ranch XP But sadly I'm still country haha TEXAS in tha house!!! sorry i just always get excited when i see other people from my neck of the woods. i live about 30 mins north of houston i recently read your story and i am in LOVE with it. cop dramas are some of my favorite! and boy is this story sexy! you dont miss a beat with the details. specially with adrian and autumn. (PLZ forgive me if i got the names wrong :\ all i have to say is DONT end this! |
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Post by Brianna on Mar 15, 2011 19:31:06 GMT -5
Lol I'm not but you can read what I posted on the 'Hows you story going Forum' Dont be alarmed/kill me/make wolves attack me!! Sooo I'm putting Four on a small hiatus. Don't kill me! I already know how it ends and the plot is planned and everything so I'll just throw that on the back burner for a bit. It will take nothing to type up the last few chapters! The reason for the hiatus is mainly newest goal in life. My newest project will be *drumroll* The revison of my Exchange story Save Him!!!  So of you may remember it from the exchange or my time at the writers hang out, but I'm rewriting and finishing it! ch's 5 and 6 have been typed already. I was up till four in the morning last night because, my fingers just wouldn't stop. I had typed about five pages in two hours. NON STOP! But yeah I'll redo the pictures with some new/old sets and new faces If you want to look at some of the old chapters, heres a link to ch 1-4 well really is my simpage and you can get to it from there by just going to my uploads. thesims2.ea.com/mysimpage/pod.phpbut 6.2 is out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Post by qui on Mar 16, 2011 0:44:21 GMT -5
Wow! I wasn't expecting her to do that at all! HUGE part of me is glad that she did but at the same time there is a bug in my ear telling me not to trust it. His weakness for her was definitely clear in this chapter! WONDERFUL job! I just hope he doesn't find himself caught up in some mess that will cost him his job or his life. |
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Post by sweetdreams25 on Mar 16, 2011 9:16:35 GMT -5
man the imagery you use it always so perfect! i can see and tate everything!!
one thing im a little confused on. how did he conclude that she's bisexual? did i miss something?
he is definitely going to get himself in trouble. in a way you can just say he's sleeping with the devil...or the devils sibling lol. he is about to let this woman that he still knows very little about jeopardize a lot! its sad that they lost their parents and her brother fell in with the wrong crowd, but crime is crime. if adrian ignores what he did he better go and get ALL the criminals he had locked up out of jail. |
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Post by Brianna on Mar 16, 2011 12:26:26 GMT -5
@qui Yeah we don't want our little Adrian dying on us! @sweet In chapter 5? when she was at the university interacting with that woman. They were just a little too close for comfort lol yeah, that was an important part. LOL everyone is so agaisnt Autumn Sluts never prosper!! |
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Post by jillyson on Mar 16, 2011 12:35:56 GMT -5
Ch 6 part 1: LOVE the pictures! I had a feeling it was her - she's really insinuated herself right into his life. And he's so obsessed, he's not asking himself why! My lunch is over, so I'll have to read part 2 at home.  Now I'm gonna go crazy all day!!!! Edit: OK, I finally got to finish part 2:
Wow, I can't believe she told him. That's a real game-changer for Adrian, that she's gotten to the point of trusting him enough to tell him. I wonder if she told him everything though, and if she's still hiding things?
I missed the bi- thing. Was that mentioned before?
Very visual writing, even without the pics, it's so easy to picture everything by the way you write. I still can't believe you're not from Norway!
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Post by Brianna on Mar 17, 2011 14:05:52 GMT -5
@jillyson Ahhh I have failed! lol thats an important part. But oh well it will make since in the latter of the story. You know when she went into the uni and was interaction with that lady? they were standing just a little to close for comfort! lol I don't wanna reveal to much, but that woman will be important lol and thank you! I wish i was from Normady :/ I'm tired of Texas |
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Post by Brianna on Apr 27, 2011 19:11:16 GMT -5
I put up Chapter 7 but no one has bothered to look at it :/
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Post by jillyson on Apr 28, 2011 7:00:49 GMT -5
I'm sorry! I've been waiting for this and I missed it! I'll catch it at lunch today - promise!!!
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