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Post by qui on Dec 28, 2010 10:56:38 GMT -5
 Series Warning: adult language, mature themes, sexual situations, nudity, and sensitive situations.The one anniversary of the incident, the lives of Jace, Naslie, Dana, Leyna, and Tony have taken a turn for the better, or so it may seem. With the return of an unexpected player in the game, new comers, and old flames, their lives are twisted and turned back into a web of lies, mysteries, and revealed secrets. prologue chapter 1 chapter 2 chapter 3 chapter 4 chapter 5 chapter 6 chapter 7 Chapter 8 |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Dec 28, 2010 12:16:17 GMT -5
 Great start, Qui! (I will leave a better comment later I'm tired & need to have some shut-eye!)
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Post by qui on Dec 28, 2010 12:26:50 GMT -5
Thank you! Night!
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 28, 2010 13:44:21 GMT -5
You know how I feel about this... LOVED IT. Already the prologue was intense, so I'm guessing there's more tension and drama where that came from. I worry for Leyna, her sadness, and loneliness is too profound, and drinking will only help for a few hours  I can't wait to see how Jace adjusts to being a family man, or is it Nas I should be worried about? How is she taking being the other half in a relationship? |
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Post by qui on Dec 28, 2010 14:08:57 GMT -5
Your response made me smile! Those are all good questions that I have been asking and developing while rebuilding for this story. We've seen what drinking lead Tony, this one night will impact Leyna differently.
Jace wanted that. Already saw them as his family. He just needed Naslie to go with it. Now that she has, you can expect some challenges on both ends. Her need to still have a wall up around her heart and his need to show her that she can let that wall down.
I hope you'll be up cause I am writing chapter 1 now and it will be up in a little bit.
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Post by Aussie Karima on Dec 28, 2010 22:44:24 GMT -5
;D Qui,when you wrote the above would have been bed time for Val,& seeing I was already asleep I missed this,...................so were is it?  ?? ;D   ~PS~ It is OK, I found it!be back!Okey Dokey! |
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Post by qui on Dec 28, 2010 22:52:55 GMT -5
LOL I know! Ended up posting it later because I let RL Wilson fix a issue with my laptop. but here it is just in case chapter 1 |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Dec 28, 2010 23:10:37 GMT -5
;D Seriously, I am sorry about the lame comment, I am REALLY busy at the moment Writing up a certain CH,(it is just about done & Val has just about two more CH done in pics!lol!) & some other things I am doing! so I am sorry,till I get the CH done the story swirls around in my head!(& it is hard to concentrate on anything else!)lol!  |
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Post by qui on Dec 28, 2010 23:30:48 GMT -5
no need to apologize! you know we'll discuss it when you can! no rush! I appreciate you stopping to read it though!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Dec 29, 2010 0:27:50 GMT -5
I needed a break, I did something stupid in PaintNet, & I lost all the work I had done from last night! I could kick myself, I was so tired & had a headache brewing that I made a big mistake,& to top it of I had forgot to save, & it was perfect,too! so back to the drawing Board!lol! 
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Post by qui on Dec 29, 2010 0:32:41 GMT -5
Oh no!!! No more distractions from me. I promise!
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 29, 2010 0:33:47 GMT -5
That Angelo is a piece of work. How dare he come back after 8 years and decide he wants a family now. Jace should have punched him in the face!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Dec 29, 2010 0:36:47 GMT -5
Oh, but I NEEDED the distraction,so I did not get angry with myself!
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Post by qui on Dec 29, 2010 1:01:30 GMT -5
Well that makes me feel a little better Karima!
LOL Val! I know right? The nerve of him to even think he can just walzt back into her life and expect her to fall into him arms! To even think he can build a relationship with Jael after all this time. He has known Jace to be there. Known Jace was his uncle but more like his daddy.
That *side* of Jace that we saw with Tony in the first series will reappear. Hopefully Daddy won't be around to stop it this time!
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Post by dblondepimpett on Dec 29, 2010 2:49:58 GMT -5
He is fine!! You can fall in love with those eyes!! Wo0t !! As for Angelo I don't think I am going to like him... grrr men who leave their families behind and think they can just walk right back like nothing happened. |
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