jillyson
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[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Dec 31, 2010 19:31:45 GMT -5
I spoiled it for myself - I looked at the comments! But I still can't wait to see who the "she is", so it's all good!
DH is crabbing about "Together time" on New Years Eve with me sittng here pecking at the keyboard. (I almost finished ch 5 of Clockwork), so I have to shut down & pretend I'm enjoying thingy Clarks' New Years ROCKIN eve! Lol!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Dec 31, 2010 19:37:25 GMT -5
Loved it, no matter how short!lol!
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Post by qui on Jan 1, 2011 11:37:02 GMT -5
thanks!!! Don't worry Jilly, there may still be a little bit of surprise in it
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jillyson
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Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Jan 1, 2011 19:22:50 GMT -5
Yay! I read it! I'm so happy!
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Post by dblondepimpett on Jan 2, 2011 2:04:08 GMT -5
she is preggers!!!!!!! Oh my!!! Poor Jael he is going to be torn when he find out about his "true" father... I say this because I have family who went through something similar he was raised to believe his father was one man then when he was 6 his real father came back into the picture and instantly it was like "I am your father he isn't here is your new and real last name" Things worked out in real life but I can't say that the boy didn't suffer because I don't know how he coped but his father wasn't a bad man either like Jaels' is. Poor Jace all worried. This is a crazy situation.
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Post by qui on Jan 2, 2011 3:06:47 GMT -5
she is preggers!!!!!!! Oh my!!! Poor Jael he is going to be torn when he find out about his "true" father... I say this because I have family who went through something similar he was raised to believe his father was one man then when he was 6 his real father came back into the picture and instantly it was like "I am your father he isn't here is your new and real last name" Things worked out in real life but I can't say that the boy didn't suffer because I don't know how he coped but his father wasn't a bad man either like Jaels' is. Poor Jace all worried. This is a crazy situation. That is sad! I too can relate to that and as you said, coping comes into play and is the key factor in how they turn out. chapter 4
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 2, 2011 3:24:15 GMT -5
I just logged back in to find an update. Do you guys believe me now when I say I'm psychic?
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jan 2, 2011 3:49:55 GMT -5
Hey that's my line!..................give it back!lol! ~ Qui ~ Men are so thick at times! Don't they know that towards the end RINGS DO NOT FIT! ~ I think Tony is a big part of Dana sticking up for herself,but really she is right,the way she is treated is not on,he has to sort him self out, instead of using his daughter as the excuse, I do agree that protecting a child from the people that come & then leave is wise,but there is more to this than that,after a year!And he needs to see it as it is!! ~ Loved it Qui!
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phoenixfg
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Post by phoenixfg on Jan 2, 2011 6:42:33 GMT -5
OMG! Sooo sweet! Loved it!
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Jan 2, 2011 9:52:31 GMT -5
Poor Jace - so worried and rattled by his evil brother's return that he's borrowing trouble. I hope Nas gets to tell him the real reason the ring was off before he leaves! They're so sweet together, I hate to think of anything coming between them. Especially something so small, when there's something so much bigger coming down.
Dana...You've got to change her hair - I always think Nas when I first see her! Lol! I'm all for keeping the kids out of the pic until you're sure, but if he's not being upfront with the kids after a year, something's wrong. Dana's right to move along. It looks like neither one of them is really ready for the next step - Silas for his own reasons, Dana still with Tony issues.
Love it!!!
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Post by qui on Jan 2, 2011 11:48:09 GMT -5
Val LOL I do! believe that! Karima Men go through nothing but their voice changing and when it comes to pregnancy, they just do the fun part so he is clueless! Tony put her through so much that she left him with a backbone which did help her stand up to Silas. There is another way to protect Isis without hurting Dana!
Phoenix Thanks! Jilly You'd think that the baby would be reason enough for him not worry but then again, there is still fear of the unexpected.
LOL changing it asap! You're right! They both has issues that need working.
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Post by dblondepimpett on Jan 2, 2011 12:12:57 GMT -5
Awesome Awesome Awesome! I think Dana is right because he does have un-resolved issues. If Isis is taken with her and if he plans on being with her for a while then it shouldn't be a problem. As for Nas and Jace awe poor Jace is worried that she has conflicted feelings. Man does he look hot in a uniform though!! He should tell her about Angelo though... before it is too late.
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Post by qui on Jan 3, 2011 12:32:44 GMT -5
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 3, 2011 12:59:11 GMT -5
OMG
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Post by qui on Jan 3, 2011 13:06:51 GMT -5
LOL you like?
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