holleyberry
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 7, 2011 21:37:25 GMT -5
Chapter Four: Aw! I see why Dana is confused. What a jerk of Silas. The man obviously has commitment issues.
Although I understand wanting to keep Isis protected, not even holding her hand is kind of lame.
So STUPID Jace! Just tell the woman the truth. Keeping it from her is only going to cause problems. She loves you, you just have to trust that. Chapter Five: What a Beatch Leyna's boss is. She's going to ruin her big break if she forces her to push like that.
I hope we get to know that other pair of blue eyes a bit better. That man was too gorgeous to be just a blip in this story. Thanks for thinking I am funny. Hopefully I am as good at the serious stuff and THANKS for reading my CtoF...it's my baby (that i've neglected for a year  ) |
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Post by qui on Jan 7, 2011 21:48:20 GMT -5
Oh no problem! I laughed so hard at Caine and Abel! Especially Caine as a child. Thank you for reading my baby! I think everyone seems to agree that he can't be a half character so we shall see him A LOT more  |
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 7, 2011 22:12:09 GMT -5
Chapter Six: Hahaha! I love the Val cameo.
however, this looks serious. Naslie won't leave the house and she doesn't want Jace to worry about her. Put all her issues on top of Pregnancy hormones...Gah! The woman must be a mess!
Oh My! Older sister? Hmmm, I wonder who that could be. Chapter Seven: My god that man could melt...something that is hard to melt... with just a look. And I do love me some sexy accent. Prince Charming is just fine for me Don't fight it Leyna! The man knows what a woman needs! |
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Post by qui on Mar 11, 2011 18:34:31 GMT -5
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Post by jillyson on Mar 11, 2011 18:59:23 GMT -5
Helloooooo, Gage! Finally a sexy name to call our Prince Charming! I love the way he gave her back a little power.
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Post by qui on Mar 11, 2011 19:03:56 GMT -5
Helloooooo, Gage! Finally a sexy name to call our Prince Charming! I love the way he gave her back a little power.
It does fit him very well, doesn't it? He gave her more than that! He had a leg up on her because he knew more than she did including how to make her tick. She turned her back on him and threatened to walk away from him forever and he couldn't handle it so now Leyna knows that she is his weakness.  |
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Post by Brianna on Mar 11, 2011 21:54:57 GMT -5
Wow! I haven't completely read this yet, but just reading a few sentences and glancing at the pictures, I'm hooked. I will defiantly get back to this when I get a chance! It looks like my kind of story!
P.S. The blonde hair guy is smoking O.o
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Post by qui on Mar 11, 2011 23:30:31 GMT -5
Cool! That's our prince charming, more than just a sexy face! Once you really get into it, you'll see why he is so loved |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 12, 2011 0:49:13 GMT -5
I have a date with this and your End of Night update as I get to work. I must rush now,running late  |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 12, 2011 2:34:27 GMT -5
I think I'm in love with Gage. Leyna is one stubborn, fiercely protective lady. I don't know how she can even think about resisting him. I would have succumbed to his first touch, and the moment I stared into his blue eyes, I would have...eh...eh...eh...had an "O"moment, ya, that. I think you get the picture. |
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Post by qui on Mar 12, 2011 2:48:53 GMT -5
I think I'm in love with Gage. Leyna is one stubborn, fiercely protective lady. I don't know how she can even think about resisting him. I would have succumbed to his first touch, and the moment I stared into his blue eyes, I would have...eh...eh...eh...had an "O"moment, ya, that. I think you get the picture.  It is too early in the morning for me to be laughing this hard! That makes two of us! How she was able to resist, I have no clue! He has only seen her twice before this meeting and read her like a book. LOL I plan to get much deeper into his life and who he is so there shall be more "O" moments lol. |
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 12, 2011 12:47:05 GMT -5
*faints from excitment*
Thanks for the PM Qui because I TOTALLY missed this yesterday. I was patiently waiting for your other story that this slipped through my fingers!
Of course you know I love Gage (GREAT NAME!) I share everyone elses sentiment about him. I have no idea how Leyna resisted him...even when he was just Prince Charming to her.
I guess you could say they both learned to preotect themselves from hurt, huh?
That's a good description of her, I think, feminine but tough.
I can't wait to find out more about Gage.
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Post by qui on Mar 12, 2011 13:10:08 GMT -5
No problem! I figured you might have missed it since I posted both updates around the same time. Why she resisted is still up in the air but she most likely is still feeling some type of way about that "one night". He said nothing happened but in her mind she is still questioning it. He is too charming for her liking. He is still a stranger pretty much but her attraction to him worries her. He did a great job reading! Almost makes you wonder what else he is good at, huh If you think you're in love with him now, you might want to hang on because he has a lot more to show. Some swoon worthy, some questionable. THANKS!! |
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