jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Mar 31, 2010 18:04:35 GMT -5
No bribe-taking, Holley! Lol! Poor Holley got stuck being my sounding-board on the upcoming chapter, so she knows...things. Lol! She was a saint - I was really struggling with a decision and she got me thru it! Lol @ Go Cyd!
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Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 31, 2010 18:35:07 GMT -5
Part A... wow! I have to let my eyes rest a bit, but then, look out part b, because here I come!  |
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 31, 2010 21:01:21 GMT -5
If by "sounding-board" you meant me making you rewrite the whole thing...LOL!!!
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Mar 31, 2010 21:46:04 GMT -5
Lol! Nah, that part was only in my head, I hadn't written it yet!
Take your time, Tina. It's not going anywhere!
I still have to take a look at it myself - I haven't read it since posting, so if someone finds an error, let me know! I thought this one was shorter and I wouldn't have to split it up, but LJ said no way! It still ended up taking my whole lunch period, so I didn't get to check it over.
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Post by joandsarah on Mar 31, 2010 22:24:59 GMT -5
Good but  Ok I'm off to read something happy now. Please let the next part be out soon! |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 31, 2010 22:27:48 GMT -5
I have finished both parts and I love it! I'd love to comment more, but typing is a serious PAIN right now! Hurry up with the next part, Woman!  |
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 31, 2010 23:18:57 GMT -5
Can't wait! However, maybe Jo should sit the nexy chapter out.
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 1, 2010 0:20:44 GMT -5
Yay, I'll read this when I get home. Plus I have Amylu's story to catch up on, so much reading for me this long weekend. And I'll do my best and stay away from this thread incase I get tempted to read yall's comments  |
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Apr 1, 2010 5:55:35 GMT -5
Thanks, guys! I'm looking forward to a long weekend of writing and simming! (and dh beating, if he tries to stop me! lol!)
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 1, 2010 12:55:37 GMT -5
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Post by Aussie Karima on Apr 1, 2010 14:04:41 GMT -5
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Apr 1, 2010 17:23:35 GMT -5
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Apr 12, 2010 11:45:46 GMT -5
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 12, 2010 11:52:05 GMT -5
Whoa! Update! Yay!  Edit- JILLL, I almost had a heart attack when I read the first pic. Okay, actually my heart stopped but miraculously jumpstarted again when I scrolled down. Okay, now I'm off to read more. No more nasties I hope  Another edit- I loved the chapter Jill. *sniff* Raul is gone *sniff* Am I a bad person for thinking better him than Balin though?
Whoa, so Bruno's finally gone huh? Now I think the story with the ring is about to take a surprising turn. Clearly Frances still wants the ring, so my question is how far will she go to get it? |
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Post by jillyson on Apr 12, 2010 12:27:49 GMT -5
I believe ch 10 will be the last one, if I can wrap it all up. (I think I can!) Very interesting question, Val. But you know the answer...  |
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