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Post by amylu1988 on Apr 12, 2010 13:19:37 GMT -5
Another brilliant chapter! Yay for Balin! Immortality rocks. ;D
I did wonder early on if Raule's temper would be his undoing, some wolves just never learn. But at least the temper helped Niall to finish off evil Bruno, I hope that's the last we'll be seeing of him!
Interesting about the ring, and it looks like we have a new baddie for the next (did I see you say last?) chapter, Frances is still a force to be reckoned with, even with Cyd and Polina (totally cute couple) on the good side.
This was immensely enjoyable and just as action filled as you promised, yay for Sealgaire! ;D |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 12, 2010 14:25:43 GMT -5
Wow... I must say this chapter has left me a bit speechless. Awesome story, Jill! Although... It looked liked Niall was tearing Bruno's eyes out instead of his throat!   |
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Post by jillyson on Apr 12, 2010 15:10:40 GMT -5
I knew if anyone noticed that, it would be you! Lol!
Was it good speechless, or bad speechless???
Glad you liked it Val & Amylu! I don't know when I'll get ch 10 finished, with all the packing I have to do! The writing is the easy part, and I mostly do that at work on my lunch hour. I hope I can squeak it in there before the move!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 12, 2010 17:02:58 GMT -5
Hehe... I am one of those who likes to have my pics in sync with what is happening in the text as much as possible. A good speechless, of course! ;D |
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Post by jillyson on Apr 12, 2010 18:20:26 GMT -5
I wish I could write some tonight - I've got ch 10 bouncing around in my head now! Lol!
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Post by joandsarah on Apr 12, 2010 18:47:54 GMT -5
Dang I see this is up just as I have to start school. I will read and comment later today Jilly.
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Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 12, 2010 19:08:28 GMT -5
I wish I could write some tonight - I've got ch 10 bouncing around in my head now! Lol! Doncha' hate it when that happens and you aren't able to get to it? I wish it would it happen to me about now...lol |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Apr 12, 2010 19:09:50 GMT -5
;D I loved every word,but then you know I am a die-hard fan of yours & your writing!  I see big trouble brewing,...........but with Heather's new found insight, & connection with her past,I see that the ring has passed to it's true owner & to someone whom would never use the ring for EVIL!But we all know she will have to fight for that right! Frances will never let that go, after all is said & done, she "IS" an evil witch!
~ I am glad that that necklace did it's forseen intended job, as Balin did indeed help with this all!Yeah! for long ago help! |
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Post by joandsarah on Apr 12, 2010 20:48:59 GMT -5
Great chapter Jill! This cat is making it hard to type though! So Balin is dead, but not dead? That ring seems to be nothing but trouble! Poor Herbie though, hope he pulls through. Now I am also wondering what Frances will do, would she give up what she thought was hers so easily? |
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Post by holleyberry on Apr 14, 2010 9:35:03 GMT -5
Great update as usual Jill. I just <3 this story so much. I am happy Bruno has been taken care of and Yay! for Balin not being dead.
Hopefully Heather can help poor Herbie.
*squee* for Cyd and Polina's growing love. I would love to see more of them later *hint hint*
I wonder what Frances will do next! |
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Post by valpre1983 on May 15, 2010 14:32:39 GMT -5
Someone's been slacking off  and I won't say who but she's just Jilly |
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Post by jillyson on Aug 18, 2010 19:31:28 GMT -5
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Post by holleyberry on Aug 18, 2010 22:31:01 GMT -5
First of all...It's Great Jill! Awesome! Stop worrying. You've written a fabulous story! LOL! I'm sorry, those pictures of Niall and Heather hugging at the clinic... while they are "awwww" they are, strange too. All that hair! *shudders* So brave of Heather to risk her life for Sebastian. Such a "queenly" thing to do. Good Riddance Midir. Now the King and Queen can live happily ever after. OoLala! Love me some smexy scenes  Hahaha! That's what you get Frances! Stupid Zombies! Good to see Lance again. |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Aug 19, 2010 1:42:14 GMT -5
;D Fantastic Jilly! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Aug 19, 2010 2:02:40 GMT -5
Nooooooo I want to read this now  But I have to wait till I get home. Not fair  |
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