Secrets of Sealgaire

[jillyson]

Well, you asked for it in small bits, so here it is...
Chapter 1:
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Chapter 2:
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Bonus chapter 2.5:
thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=266377&asset_type=story&user_id=2861792

~Now on LJ~

Chapter 3:
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Chapter 4:
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Chapter 5 (*2-Parter)
part A:
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Chapter 5 part B:
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Chapter Six (*2-Parter)
part A:
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Chapter 6 Part B:
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Bonus Chapter 6.5:
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Chapter 7 (3 parts!):
Part A:
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Part B:
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Part C:
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Chapter 8 (2 parts):
Part A:
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Part B:
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Chapter 9 (2 parts)
Part A:
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Part B:
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Chapter 10 Part A:
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Chapter 10 Part B:
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Ch 11 part A
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Ch 11 part B
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Ch 11 part C
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Chapter 12:
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Sealgaire, the Epilogue:
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Credits/fun pics:
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~Christmas spam~
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Please feel free to let me know where I've skipped letters, misspelled words, or any other errors you catch! My eyes are crossed from as many times as I've read this over, and I'm sure I've missed much!


Enjoy!!!

[Tina ☺]

LOL! I moved this for you. This one goes here since it is a Exchange story.

I'll give you a word of warning: BE CAREFUL if you decide to go back in and edit anything. It happened to me and now Jo has informed me that it happened to Fuzzy as well. What happened, you ask? You remember when I was making edits to chapter nine and it got deleted, right? Well, the EXACT same thing happened to Fuzzy so it was NOT just a one-time fluke. NOW I am terrified to make edits after uploading a chapter because it is a whole big mess and headache to make it ready for uploading again.

Anyway, I'm off to read now! ;D

[jillyson]

Well, I just found about a million missing letters that need fixing, so I'm going to have to give it a try. I'll be back!

[Tina ☺]

LOL.... good luck! Sure glad I got to read it first if something horrible happens.

AWESOME! I know I've read it before, but it was even better with the pics! ;D I only have one suggestion:

plumbbobtoggle off and boolProp showHeadlines off

Those two things are VERY important when taking screen shots for serious stories. I don't know how I ever got along without them. Yea, I noticed a few letters missing and Despair has an 'e' instead of and 'i', but they weren't that noticeable because your storyline is so awesome. Great job! Of course it warranted five stars from me.

[§Haily§]

and i love those cheats too Tina! Call me a cheater because i use WAY more cheats for my stories than just those two! I go to a website called CheatCC.com and that site has every cheat known to man! That's a lot of cheats.My ex introduced me to the site cause he's a cheater too with his games. On grand theft auto(a ps2 game me and him play a lot) you can have flying cars if you have this certain cheat activated.It's awesome!

AWESOME story Jilly! I need to make a fantasy story involving my Winter.She would be happy to be in a story filled with mystical creatures...

no,you don't have to. i was just joking.but Winter does need to be in a story. i made her because i wanted to add her in story but i don't have a good story line for her to be in! it's very annoying.

[Tina ☺]

Oh I use more cheats than those two as well, but those are the ones that are obviously missing in Jill's story. As a matter of fact, there is a link to a list of all the TS2 cheats posted in the links forum for everyone's convenience, although I don't know how many folks have even noticed it.

[§Haily§]

i just go to CheatCC.com because i never noticed that there either.

And the more i look at Niall,the more i think of this character in Twilight....Have you ever read Twilight? any of you? Because Niall really reminds me of one of them.Not the vampire,but the werewolf,Jacob...hmm.

[jillyson]

Well, I fixed a TON of errors, (I really need to clean this keyboard! lOl!) but I missed desire, so I'll get that on the next go-around! I agree, Haily, Winter is in desperate need of a story! You should do it!
I know I added a few things since you read my rough draft. I think it helped the flow. Bruno is the one I goofed up on moving to a different lot without his witch stuff, now I'm struggling to get him turned back into a witch for the next chapter! I've been at it all day, but the witch keeps getting mad at him & won't turn him!

[§Haily§]

Ok,i'm going to do it! Winter will be in one of my stories! WOOT! She's going to be so happy with me!!

And I don't like Bruno.He's stupid.Sorry if that hurt your feelings,Jilly.I know it's just a story but i get so angry with him! I like Niall better.He's cuter! And even in human form he reminds me of a cute dog!

[jillyson]

That's good! You're SUPPOSED to hate Bruno! That means I'm doing my job! Lol! Just wait - he's not even close to his maximum evil!

[§Haily§]

oooooooooooo.More evil.Just what I need.Bruno makes a good role model,you know that right?

and still waiting for that chapt two!

[jillyson]

Still waiting?!? I just put up ch. 1!!! Lol!

[joandsarah]

Well I managed to get it up and read Jilly. I didn't think it was going to for awhile, stupid dial up speed.
Wow that's super serious and scary. But I'll read it just for you. I also have a terrible headache today so I don't know what to say, except well written. Is Bruno a psychopath? I keep expecting him to go on a killing rampage.

[Aussie Karima]

;)You have me hooked girl! I love it,so intriguing, I could not stop reading until there was no more to read(I love that you are putting out the CH one at a time, as I would definitely be in trouble! & get nothing done until I had stopped reading!)so thanks, I throughly enjoyed it, & will wait patiently for more, :-*PLEASE, JILL, I WANT SOME-MORE!

[jillyson]

Thanks, Down Under Crew! Yes, Bruno has some nasty issues - I'm glad that came thru - that there was something wrong with him before he found magic. Also, I like that Haily thought Niall looked more dog-like in human form, too. That's why I changed his hairstyle, (from the original on the credit page), so I'm glad that came thru, too! It makes me giddy that all the little subtlties I threw in there came thru! (although Bruno's personality disorder is about as subtle as a hammer to the head! Lol!)

Sorry about your headache, Jo! I was fighting a feirce one yesterday, too, which made proof reading for errors a nightmare! I hope you feel better soon! I still have it, but I have to go to work anyway. It's busy season & if I miss, I'll be behind forever!

And a small teaser...Bruno WILL be responsible for a death - soon.