jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Mar 22, 2010 19:05:06 GMT -5
This chapter doesn't have a lot of thrills & chills, but the next one will more than make up for it! (it's already written, so I know I speak the truth! lol!)
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holleyberry
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 22, 2010 21:56:37 GMT -5
Just saw at LJ. Hopefully I get time tonight. If not, I will read it for sure tomorrow morning.
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Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 22, 2010 22:03:27 GMT -5
I read the first part, but my eyes won't allow me to continue right now. This will definitely be good over coffee in the morning. It's awesome so far and I"m loving it! ;D
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Mar 22, 2010 22:08:11 GMT -5
Thanks guys! I've been on a download spree for ch's 8 and 9 - never a good thing! Lol!
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Post by catmania80 on Mar 22, 2010 22:49:33 GMT -5
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holleyberry
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 22, 2010 23:21:25 GMT -5
I finished it! Commented x3 @ LJ!
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 23, 2010 0:17:28 GMT -5
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Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 23, 2010 7:25:46 GMT -5
Awesome, Jill! I loved it and I commented at LJ.
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Mar 23, 2010 11:39:49 GMT -5
Thanks, Guys! I've already got a few pics for ch 8 (ch 8 is already written) and I'm starting to write ch 9 today. Ch 8 will bring some big drama (sorry, Jo! ) and I'm hoping to have everything resolved by Ch 10. (I HOPE!!!) And Cat - you're right! There's a bunch of characters in here - probably too many. I should've probably just said "A pack memeber" instead of giving them all names! Since Polina had all the dirty work, I wanted to do something nice for her in this chapter. Poor Cyd just can't get a break! (I'm glad you liked that, Holley! It seemed right to me) Thanks for reading, everyone!
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 23, 2010 12:12:10 GMT -5
I read it and commented on LJ but I can never say too many times now can I? This was by far my favorite chapter. I read it at work without pics but it the words alone kept me hooked. Now hurry with Chapter Eight. I understand how you are already writing chapter nine. That's what happens to me at times. I write now and take pics later and then I'd have to change the words to suit the pics. But at least when you have a rough outline, you sort of know where you want the story to go. I really can't wait for the next installment.
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Mar 31, 2010 12:50:08 GMT -5
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Post by Aussie Karima on Mar 31, 2010 14:58:02 GMT -5
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Post by amylu1988 on Mar 31, 2010 15:00:01 GMT -5
Left some of my comment at LJ but it was getting a bit long winded and spoilery, so here's the rest. I hope they all get there in time, Bruno still makes me growl and frown, he's such a cruel and heartless bad guy, perfect for the story. Grrr. And I have to admit, I feel sorry for Marta. Being a pregnant zombie must be rubbish, but Giselle is handling the whole thing far too well... Balin though! Maybe he could be saved? Somehow? Poor guy, he was immortal not so long ago. Your writing is wonderful Jilly, so descriptive and compelling, I really feel like I'm on the good guys side and there willing them to win! Great chapter Jilly, can't wait for more and to see what happens next! ;D
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Mar 31, 2010 15:21:03 GMT -5
Thanks guys! Ch 9 is about half way done, and I have a 4 day weekend coming up, so who knows???
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 31, 2010 15:43:24 GMT -5
Seriously! What can I say? Such a great story! And it's heating up good! All those brave women and one brave little girl! Bruno doesn't know what he's gotten himself into. He better watch out!!! I don't want to say anything else in case I say something I shouldn't!
Go Werewolves!!!...and Good Witch Cyd!!!
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