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Post by Nicole on Nov 28, 2009 2:20:59 GMT -5
I just finished chapter 3, how riveting!  I can't help but notice a Criminal Minds... Themeish in there, lol. I'll keep reading more tonight, but I'm lett you know, I'm reading and I cannot wait to see what happens to Victoria! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 28, 2009 2:44:58 GMT -5
I just finished chapter 3, how riveting! I can't help but notice a Criminal Minds... Themeish in there, lol. I'll keep reading more tonight, but I'm lett you know, I'm reading and I cannot wait to see what happens to Victoria! Hey Nicole, You're right about the Criminal Minds theme; Statham Island's BAU is based on Criminal Minds and it's my fav show! P.S. Chapter Thirteen is up. Enjoy the delectable Storm! thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=274710 |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Nov 28, 2009 13:22:13 GMT -5
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 28, 2009 13:45:48 GMT -5
Wow Karima, you read it so quick, guess you were dying for your Toria & Storm fix huh? Thanx for the great review!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Nov 28, 2009 13:54:20 GMT -5
;D ;D ;D You got that right,Val! ;D ;D ;D
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Post by jillyson on Nov 28, 2009 17:45:27 GMT -5
I was so busy playing in the other threads that I almost missed this! Well, Val. I hope you're ready for some feedback...
OMG That was FABULOUS!!!! I'm doing the happy dance - la la! Doing the happy dance - la la! That was Freakin' AWESOME!!!!
And I hope you don't mind me saying so, but
I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!
I hope you don't mind me putting my two cents worth in. Carry on! |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 28, 2009 18:28:56 GMT -5
Oh yeah.... I haven't read it on the Exchange yet, but this chapter was definitely an awesome one! Like I said in an earlier post, you got those emotions down pat! I really did enjoy having the privilege of reading it first! ;D
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 29, 2009 0:19:31 GMT -5
Anything to see you do the happy dance Jill...thanks for your awesome feedback. I knew the Toria & Storm get together will make a whole lot of people happy, but I just didn't think it would make you want to do the happy dance ;D And Tina, you're much too kind. I know it can't be easy proofreading all our chapters with your busy schedule but you are always such a spot, so here's a kiss for you  |
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 29, 2009 2:38:10 GMT -5
About to start chapter 5!!!
I am liking this story so far Val!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 29, 2009 22:32:11 GMT -5
Awww, back atcha, Val! It really was a pleasure to proof read your story for you. I'm ready for the next chapter!  I'm also ready to find out about this mysterious project of yours.  |
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 30, 2009 0:50:41 GMT -5
I'm also ready to find out about this mysterious project of yours. Patience Woman!  |
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Post by jillyson on Nov 30, 2009 13:11:59 GMT -5
I'll have patience later! More Storm & Tori! (and a close up or two of Drake wouldn't make me sad!)
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 30, 2009 15:22:26 GMT -5
(and a close up or two of Drake wouldn't make me sad!) Mhhh, that can be arranged |
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Post by jillyson on Nov 30, 2009 21:00:59 GMT -5
*Shifty eyes - rubs hands together...*
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 1, 2009 1:00:36 GMT -5
*Shifty eyes - rubs hands together...* LOL...Jill, you crack me up...LOL |
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