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Unforgettable Apr 13, 2009 12:06:16 GMT -5

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Tina ☺ Administrator Chillin' [M0:42]Oh yea....bite me![ss:Black/Purple] Posts: 21,029	Unforgettable Apr 13, 2009 14:24:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 13, 2009 14:24:45 GMT -5 People should remember you, Valpre, because your thread, 'What are you up to right now?', has become one of the hottest threads here. You already know I loved your first two chapters! I'm reading chapter three right now. ;D
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valpre1983 Guest	Unforgettable Apr 13, 2009 14:27:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by valpre1983 on Apr 13, 2009 14:27:26 GMT -5 Hey...I was starting to get real lonely here...not fun being alone! How's it going?

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Unforgettable Apr 13, 2009 14:37:45 GMT -5

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Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 13, 2009 14:37:45 GMT -5

Yea... it gets lonely here sometimes...LOL Going good, except I'm tired as hell today...lol. How about you?

I have to tell you.. at first I was totally caught off guard by the beginning of chapter three. It confused me a bit, but... once I got into it, it was GREAT! I actually love how you pulled it all together and I love the mystery and intrique of it all. Great job! ;D

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Unforgettable Apr 13, 2009 14:46:44 GMT -5

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Hey, you read it? Great! Glad you enjoyed it...I must admit, the mystery part and the intrigue caught me off guard too. When I started Chapter One and Two, it was supposed to be a simple, straight forward romance, but then you sort of said something the other day, about how DD needs romance writers and I thought, hell, I don't wanna be just a romance writer, I want to try something else. So, thanks to you, you've inadvertently challenged me to move out of my comfort zone and explore with other styles of writing...Still have a long way to go with horror and all that, but writing mysteries is interesting. I can't believe how huge the the thread 'What are you doing right?' has grown.

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Unforgettable Apr 13, 2009 14:51:04 GMT -5

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Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 13, 2009 14:51:04 GMT -5

hehe... yea, it's a nice, generalized thread that everyone can feel comfortable just posting what they're doing in it.

It can't possibly go 'off topic', although most threads here wind of 'off topic' eventually anyway. :-X

Well, you are doing a good job with it so far, although there is nothing wrong with a good, straight foward romance story now and then.

You sure did spice things up quite a bit!

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jillyson Diligent Librarian Twozaks in Other Realms [M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender] Posts: 9,634	Unforgettable Apr 13, 2009 22:05:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jillyson on Apr 13, 2009 22:05:13 GMT -5 Wow! What a turn, Valpre! Way to have a comeback!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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valpre1983 Guest	Unforgettable Apr 14, 2009 10:07:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by valpre1983 on Apr 14, 2009 10:07:47 GMT -5 Hey Jillyson, glad you liked it...Working on chapter four...should upload soon soon

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Unforgettable Apr 15, 2009 22:07:54 GMT -5

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Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 15, 2009 22:07:54 GMT -5

Awesome update, Valpre! Wow.... *wipes brow* It was very intense. I should have read it earlier instead of waiting for my bedtime. Now my dreams may not be so pleasant...

Of course I slapped five stars onto it and I can't wait for chapter five! ;D

Oh and.. thanks so much for that very nice plug at the end! *HUG*

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Unforgettable Apr 16, 2009 10:02:07 GMT -5

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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 16, 2009 10:02:07 GMT -5

Aaah Tina, you really know how to flatter a girl. Thanks so much for reading and the 5 stars. Well Desirable Discourse is a pretty awesome place to hang out...I've referred a couple of people, they are good story tellers and I hope to see them here soon, if you don't mind me spreading the wors of course

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Unforgettable Apr 17, 2009 10:22:06 GMT -5

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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 17, 2009 10:22:06 GMT -5

Hey aussiekarima, thanks so much for reading Unforgettable and your nice comments. It's always great to get positive feedback. Well, chapter five

I don't know...to be honest I'm stuck. Chapter Three and Chapter Four just surprised me. It was supposed to be a love story but I found myself changing the plot a little and now that I've gone the mystery route I don't know if I should stick with that or if I should get back to the love story...Right now, I'm taking lots of Pics and I guess chapter five will write itself from the pics.
BTW I read the intro to Zero and I liked the way you introduced your characters and gave background info on them. I think you should get back and write chapter one soon...I look foward to reading about Imogen and Zero...interesting name. Is it a real name or did you make it up?

And Tina, thanks for adding the link to Chapter four...I was about to add it when I saw it's up there already...for a second I thought I was going bananas.

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Tina ☺ Administrator Chillin' [M0:42]Oh yea....bite me![ss:Black/Purple] Posts: 21,029	Unforgettable Apr 17, 2009 11:45:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 17, 2009 11:45:15 GMT -5 LOL! You're welcome, Valpre! And.. by all means, spread the word about DD! It's always great to have new members! I'm glad to see you coming around more often as well! ;D
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jillyson Diligent Librarian Twozaks in Other Realms [M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender] Posts: 9,634	Unforgettable Apr 17, 2009 20:32:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jillyson on Apr 17, 2009 20:32:00 GMT -5 AAAAHHHHH!!!! The agony of a ciffhanger!!! Val, this story just gets better and better! I've given you 5 stars, and I'm chartering a plane to Britian to make sure ch. 5 hurries along! Lol! AAAAHhHHHHHH!!!!!!!
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