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Post by valpre1983 on Jul 22, 2010 11:58:36 GMT -5
So much happened in this chapter I hardly know where to start. Damn. I really thought Eric and Bella would be together forever. Guess daddy Don was right about him  Dina's dead? Nooooooooo *runs screaming from the thread* Okay, I'm back. But why? *runs screaming from the thread again* I'm back for good now. Yeah, that was sad. Somehow I thought Dina would live forever. She's one of those Pleasantview people who never age or die, in my mind. It's so admirable of Alex to take his sister in, but I'm sure he'll soon learn it's not easy raising a teenager. He should get tips from Don. Now Don, that's another story! He still has his groove on. I'm just surprised he still has energy to do other stuff, between Nina and Cassandra and two families. How the heck does he do it? And how can Nina and Cassandra still put up with it? 'nuff, said. Awesome chapter. BTW, Donnie's his father's spitting image. I see another casanova in the making  Another BTW, Don's love scenes really press my buttons  |
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Post by holleyberry on Jul 22, 2010 12:13:09 GMT -5
Another BTW, Don's love scenes really press my buttons [/spoiler][/quote] I seriously don't know what to say about Dina. I killed her kind of spur of the moment. I'm not sure if I would do the same thing again. It adds a depth to Danielle's character though, her losing both her parents so young, but still having Alex and Tosha there for her. Yeah, Donnie was just as much fun to play with as Don was |
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Post by joandsarah on Jul 23, 2010 2:54:59 GMT -5
I read it last night. This was a big chapter to remember, but these stick in my mind: Dina is dead?! What killed her? Alex's reaction to the birth of twins-none.  Orlando and Danielle sweet. Poor Belle. |
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Post by holleyberry on Jul 23, 2010 9:49:05 GMT -5
Dina is dead?! What killed her?
Well, in my game, I think I killed her by disease. Karima said green ghosts mean poison, but I seriously don't remember it's been so long.In the story I had her die of a brain aneurysm. Some of the symptoms are headache (foreshadowed in last chapter) and some bleeding in the ear.
You're right I didn't specify clearly enough. I'll address it next update.
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Post by jillyson on Jul 23, 2010 11:59:11 GMT -5
I can't wait for the college years!!!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Jul 28, 2010 14:59:56 GMT -5
Wow... nice job once again, Holley! I replied at LJ.  |
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 16, 2010 18:37:54 GMT -5
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Post by Aussie Karima on Nov 16, 2010 20:02:18 GMT -5
I left a comment on LJ,but it was a very good read,with a lot covered, good job Holley! 
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 16, 2010 20:32:51 GMT -5
Thanks Karima! I am glad you liked it. As I have more pictures to work with it won't be so "all over the place"
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Post by jillyson on Nov 16, 2010 22:20:12 GMT -5
Holley, this was such a great update - so many important things happened!
The part with Tosha & Alex was so cute - they're really so good together & made such a good home for Danielle & their own twins! (I know where you sleep...lol)
Young Gina looking at her future and being so determined not to end up like her mom. I hope she finds some joy at Uni!
Little Nicky - a carbon copy of his daddy in the looks department for sure! And his first kis - awww!
Bella finding such a wonderful man in George - who knew he was waiting in the wings all this time! Good riddance to Eric! George knew how to handle Don's crap, and how to handle Bella, too! Lol!
And poor Donnie. He finally found that real love was worth more than all those loose girls, and love ended up biting him! My heart just broke for him! He's going to be something else on campus now! I'm still secretly hoping that after college, there may be a chance for them to find each other again... *sigh
I'm emotionally rung out from reading this! Lol!
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 17, 2010 0:31:09 GMT -5
Holley, I'll catch this when I get home. I'm dying to tear into it. |
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 17, 2010 10:08:15 GMT -5
No Problem Val. I hope you like it.
Thanks Jill. I am glad you liked it. You know how much grief this one gave me. Thanks again for your proof reading.
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 17, 2010 10:19:46 GMT -5
Read it and loved it The Lothario boys are growing up to be decent boys, not skirt chasers like their dad, and I like that. But who knows what university will bring? Maybe that will unleash their true Lothario nature  I just heart Bella and George. They look so cute together, and I'm glad George is not faint hearted, and wasn't deterred by Don's attitude. |
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 17, 2010 10:47:22 GMT -5
Thanks Val! I'm glad you liked it.
Well Nicolas, at least, seems to be growing into a respectable man.
Donnie...we'll see what happens.
I am glad you like Bella and George. I like them a lot too!
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Post by joandsarah on Nov 17, 2010 16:58:02 GMT -5
Well you can guess that I dislike Don even more after what he did to Bella.  And poor Donnie, I hope Marsha doesn't do the same to Nicolas. Seeing meadow reminded me, I just found an awesome default for her skirt if you are interested, looks really nice in game. Turns that booted thing into a cute three tired peasant skirt, with ballet flats and an ankle bracelet. |
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