A Pleasantview Novella (updated 4-1-11)

[holleyberry]

Jo

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Yes, what Don did to Bella was not nice, but what Cassie said was true. He's upset that he is no longer the most important man in her life and is having a hard time accepting that.

I am glad you felt sorry for Donnie. Just remember he's heart broken when you read about his time at Uni.

About Marsha...well, I guess you'll just have to wait and see.

That skirt is horrible. I wouldn't mind a replacement.

[joandsarah]

dhearest.livejournal.com/ I've put a number of her defaults on now. Meadows skirt is just below the bed.

[jillyson]

I could see Meadow wearing that at Uni...

[amylu1988]

Omg, loved it! ;D

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So much drama! I feel for Bella, having Don for a doting Dad and finding the perfect man he doesn't want her to have, the tension was so high! George was a champion about it, and I loved his way of handling it, just letting Don get his anger out. Don always seems like the doting dad who doesn't want to let his kids go, and you really got that across.

And Donnie. Bless him. Meadow did the right thing for herself, but wow has he now got a lot to deal with! I'm guessing he'll want 20 lovers at college now then? The ending was written so well, and I really didn't know that's what she was going to do until they got in the car. Poor Donnie.

Nicky does look a lot like Don, and he and Marsha are so cute together!

Lovely to hear about the families again and I really enjoyed reading it Holley.

[holleyberry]

Thanks for reading Amylu!

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Yes, Don is dotting and possessive...of his daughters. Bella especially because she was his first. He was so upset he didn't stop to think how his actions would hurt Bella. It's the selfishness coming through.
George is Awesome and Bella's savior. She picked a man that can handle Don's crap for sure.
Donnie will definitely be trying to mend his broken heart in a way that isn't the healthiest, but luckily his wish isn't 20

[jillyson]

17? 18? Lol!

[holleyberry]

Nov 19, 2010 16:44:43 GMT -5 jillyson said:

17? 18? Lol!

Something like that!

[jillyson]

Awwww. If only I could go to uni...

[holleyberry]

Chapter 11

[amylu1988]

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Aw, such a lovely wedding for Bella and George, and Don turned up! Wahey, hopefully Bella's talk and her warning about the wedding have started to change his opinions. Well written argument too, I love your writing style Holley.

Gina's got an interesting relationship going on there with Orlando, can't wait to see how that pans out!

And Tosha and Alex having more babies, bless. Bet they'll all be cute like the first two.

Great chapter Holley, and a lovely read as always.

[holleyberry]

Amylu:

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I am glad you liked George and Bella's wedding. I had so few pictures to work with. I'm glad it turned out okay for the story.
We'll have to wait and see about Don. He's very selfish and stubborn. All Bella required of him was to be polite, so I doubt his opinions will change much.

There will be more of Gina and Orlando (thanks Maxis for all the townies having the same names), as well as Danielle and her Orlando next chapter.

Alex and Tosha aren't done yet! She would have had 10 kids if I would have let her.

Thanks for reading Amylu!

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Holley:

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What a fun chapter. Yay for babies. I will read all the other chapters soon. Great work

[holleyberry]

Thanks Ashley

[jillyson]

I love this chapter.

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I want to meet a George! I love the way he handled Don. I'm glad Don did the right thing and showed up, even though he missed walking his daughter down the ailse. I hope he eventually sees what a good man his daughter married.

Poor Gina, she's so confused, while everyone else seems to know more about her than she does! I hope she figures out what she really wants before she breaks poor Orlando's heart! Maybe Donnie can help her out once they have their talk.

I like the new couple in town, how fun that they're from Ireland! It's great that Victoria & Simon stand up for her, and it looks like Simon has a little crush!
I can't wait to see what Tosha and Alex have next - they're such good parents, and so in love!

Looks like the happy couple had a wonderful honeymoon!
And you never have to thank me for encouraging you - you do that and so much more for me!

A really great chapter, so full of wonderful things!

[Tina ☺]

OK... now I have forgotten again which chapter I left off on the last time I read this! Damnit, I have to get my act together and finish catching up on things!

Soon, Holley... soon I will be back on track!