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Post by dblondepimpett on Dec 27, 2010 2:22:33 GMT -5
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 27, 2010 3:03:58 GMT -5
Yay, Kristen, so glad to see you posting here  I didn't think you'd take me up on the invite. Hop on over to the Welcome thread and introduce yourself. Shout if you need any help with anything, everyone here is friendly and always willing to help |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Dec 27, 2010 7:20:38 GMT -5
 If Val recommends it, then I give it a go, I loved what I read so far, & left comments for you!  ~ I hope to read more,as you define your characters more,it, so far has my interest,plus I have writers block & needed a break! lol!  ~ So thank you for the break & sharing with us!
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Post by jillyson on Dec 27, 2010 10:28:58 GMT -5
Welcome! I just got all caught up, and I'm kind of pressed for time, so I only left a comment at the end of Ch 3 - I hope that's OK! I also copied it here:
Wow! I just got all caught up with all the previous chapters, and...wow!
With such pain and tragedy in their pasts, it was great that Kraig and Naomi had each other to fall back on. I'm surprised it took them this long to fall into each other's arms!
It was great to see Kraig basically admit his feelings, but then instead of Naomi realizing she felt the same, it sent her on a 180 and shoved her into the wrong pair of arms!
Jake is just as much of an unstable party animal as Naomi, and that can't be good for her. He's also in denial about how bad his own problem is, so he thinks it's OK to dump all over her about her problem with drinking.
Even with him trying to sober up and get to know her better - wanting a real relationship...I hope it doesn't take her too long to realize the only spark she has with him is an alcohol spark. She can't feel love for him, because her heart lies with Kraig!
Maybe having the new baby in the house will grow up and sober up this whole crowd!
Can't wait to see what happens next! |
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Post by dblondepimpett on Dec 27, 2010 12:05:44 GMT -5
Valpre- Thank you for sending me here I like to try new places It's a good way to expand readers because not everyone is one TS3 and not everyone is on LJ. It's also A great way for me to read others cause I'm a reader just as much as I am a writer Aussie Karima- Thank you for taking an interest in it! I just realized from this comment that you are a writer as well I would love to read your work . I'll have to find em Since I don't think they are on LJ cause I looked lol. I'll look tonight when I get off work and I know all about that writers block business. I also write novels but right now I'm stuck so the novel is on a small hold. But the sims stories help me. I always recover from my block because of sims. yay sims! Jillyson- Thank you!! I am really glad you liked it I also posted on my LJ comment back to you. Basically saying that I went and checked out your page and noticed you were a writer and when I get off work tonight I'm going to start on it to read it Hopefully finishing tomorrow. Update Chapter 4 is scheduled to be out Tomorrow evening or Tomorrow Night |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Dec 27, 2010 12:44:22 GMT -5
Well if you like finished stories then I have to tell you that at this time(even though it has been a looooonnnngggg time!) Zero is still on hold as my PC went & blew up on me, I lost everything,also I can not post on the Sims 2 EX anymore because I have M&G installed which basically broke the EX, I intend to finish it,but have decided to maybe re-formate it on Blogger! ~ We have some really good writers here, & you could not make a better start,than Jilly & Val,both very good writers, I am so proud to call them friends,you will find we are one big reading writing family here,& we can always do with one or two more! ;D 
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Post by qui on Dec 27, 2010 13:49:00 GMT -5
Welcome! Just read all 3 chapters Kraig seems like a really good guy! He loved her before they slept together! You can tell by the way he has always taken care of her! I don't know why but I get a bad vibe off of Jake! I need more of this! I have to see why I have this feeling about Jake and when Kraig will do when he finds out about this relationship!! |
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Post by dblondepimpett on Dec 28, 2010 12:39:08 GMT -5
Thanks I am working on the next chapter as we speak. I am hoping to have it up by lets say 7 or 8 (central time). But who know's it might even be sooner than that. Reason it may be later is because for xmas I got a walmart gift card and I got Late Night hehe. So I am going to try it out and everything first. Also considering I don't want vampires trying to take over my story is there anyway to be sure they don't infest the neighborhood in which they reside? I use Twallans story progressor and his MasterController. I am also using a downloaded neighborhood. I don't know if that helps. I haven't popped the disc in yet because I'm afraid that I'll go into my neighborhood and everyone will be vamps! lol |
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Post by jillyson on Dec 28, 2010 13:17:14 GMT -5
I use a different hood than the LN hood of Bridgeport, which cuts down on the base number of vamps. Also, I have story progression turned off in options. This makes sure nothing you don't play yourself happens while you're playing a different lot.
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Post by dblondepimpett on Dec 28, 2010 14:29:07 GMT -5
Would that make it to where it is only in that neighborhood and not in another? Reason I ask is cause I have a legacy in a different neighborhood but I don't want it's SP turned off.
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 28, 2010 15:06:04 GMT -5
Damn, I thought there's an update  I think story progression turns it off for all the hoods or saved games? I've turned it off for Bridgeport, and it works like a charm, but I haven't checked the other hoods  |
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Post by dblondepimpett on Dec 28, 2010 15:29:52 GMT -5
sorry didn't mean to fool you!! lol I am working on the update right now |
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Post by dblondepimpett on Dec 29, 2010 1:15:53 GMT -5
bump fro chapter 4 |
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 29, 2010 1:18:51 GMT -5
Awesome, awesome update. Whoa! What a way to end a year, and start a new one. Jake's quite mature for his age, I love the way he handled their breakup.
I'm doing a happy dance now because Naomi and Kraig can maybe start exploring their feelings for each other.
That Blaine, I hope he gets hit by a truck. Like really, he wants custody? How's that gonna work? Does he even know how to take care of a kid. If he wants to be such a great dad, why doesn't he take Dean right now while he's still a baby and see how tough Denise has it? He's a jerk! |
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Post by dblondepimpett on Dec 29, 2010 1:45:31 GMT -5
Val I love your comments lol "i hope he gets hit by a truck" haha its so funny |
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