Creation to Future (updated 2-14-11)

[Deleted]

Holley-I will read your creation to the Future chapters soon. I just wanted you to know that I read the first chapter-it was very funny.

[holleyberry]

Thanks Ashley!
It starts kind of Corny, but I turned it into something a bit more Dramatic in later chapters.
Let me know what you think when you read it.

[valpre1983]

As promised, I've read chapter 4 of CTF and I enjoyed it a lot.

I was so sad when I thought Joseph had died I liked the interaction between father and daughter, it's so sweet, easy and comfortable. He and Meadow seem to have a very special relationship.The pics are so cool also. How did you make the lightning and rain look so realistic? Tomorrow I'll go over chapter 5.

When I read the first two chapters of CTF I couldn't help but think of Milton's Paradise Lost (don't know if you've read it). Your Adam and Eve seemed so innocent, humble and seem to have immense adoration for each other, just like Milton's Adam & Eve when Satan catches a glimpse of them in Paradise.

I will not ask what happens in Chapter five because I want to be surprised so, no comments please!

[valpre1983]

Just finished chapter five. This was an awesome chapter Holley. I like Ivah's character. Sort of reminds me of Alice's character in Twilight, you know, the seeing the future thing. I can't wait to see what you do with her character. Cain and Meadow are so sweet and innocent in their love for each other. I also liked the snippets you did on Jill, Tina and Sawyer. Sawyer's def the man! I've also left these on LJ so don't think you're having a touch of de ja vu when you read the same comment again, on here on or on LJ. Tomorrow I'll look at chapter six.

[holleyberry]

Hey Val! I totally missed your first comment. Thanks for trying to catch up on my story. I am glad you like it and the characters I have created.
Meadow and Joseph, her Father do have a special bond. I don't want to say more than that right now.
I have not read Paradise Lost, but I do know of it. Glad you like Adam and Eve. They are very good for each other.
Ivah is a bit like Alice, huh? I had never thought of it that way, but your right. There is more of Ivah in chapter 6.

As far as the lightening and rain, Tina did those for me. I thought I had thanked her at the end of the story. If not I better go add that now.

I have got up to chapter 7 of Unforgettable. I swear I'll catch up soon. I'll go leave a comment on your thread to let you know what I think.

[jillyson]

I heart this story and these characters so much.

[valpre1983]

No no no! A cliff hanger? Cain can't be dead! No! *sniffs* and *cries*

Okay, now that I'm slightly over that cliff hanger I must say this was an awesome chapter. I liked the way you've blended the creation family with the other guys's simselves and how you've made their lives run concurrently with each others.

I was a bit confused with Tristan's story line and I had to go back to the start of the chapter to make sure I was still reading CtoF. But you tied it in nicely with Ivah's storyline and it made more sense. Do I sense a love connection between Ivah and Tristan? Wow, imagine what a powerful couple they would make.

It's like Tina said, now you're under pressure to release chapter seven soon soon. If I could give you 5 fat stars here I would. I loved your pictures in this chapter also.


now where's chapter seven..gimme more, I'm ready

[NoReins]

Holley, your doing an amazing job with this story and the challenge. I like how you've managed to make the legacy into more of a story than most people do. I hate cliff hangers and cannot wait until chapter 7 gets here!

[holleyberry]

Thanks NoReins (I'm sorry I don't know what your name is )

Actually, it's not a legacy, at least I don't think it will take 10 generations to finish the challenge.
I'm glad you are enjoying it and hopefully i can get the next update out soon.

[holleyberry]

Chapter 7 is Up!
holleyb76.livejournal.com/13842.html

[Aussie Karima]

;D Holley, when this is not finished until the space age, I would say it is a legacy, as I see it taking that long to complete, my C to F, is in storage, but I do not think mine will be half as good as your amazing story, mine would be going through the Challenge & basic! Yours on the other hand is so much more, it has turned into an awesome story, that always leaves me craving MORE!
~~~~~~~~~~~~Keep up the excellent work, Holley!

[Tina ☺]

Awesome stuff, Holley! I commented at LJ.

This was a great diversion from writing my own. Seems I'm looking for any excuse lately.

[holleyberry]

Thanks Guys!

Karima, I really hope this doesn't take me 10 generations. I was thinking more around 5. Glad you like the story, cause I work really hard on it. I might be PM'ing you soon about that thing we talked about. i might need a tribal tattoo.

Tina, thanks again for the cover page. It is absolutely PERFECT!!!
Of course, I feel bad I have distracted you from Nellie...no I don't!

[Tina ☺]

You're welcome! I'm glad I could do the story justice.

Well, I actually did manage to write a couple more frames and got through to a scene change.

I can't wait to see where you take this story next!

[holleyberry]

Feb 11, 2010 0:40:13 GMT -5 Tina ☺ said:

I can't wait to see where you take this story next!

I actually have the next 2 chapters planned!
Jilly knows some of it, maybe you could bribe her and find out