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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 17, 2009 2:22:30 GMT -5
LOL! Well, I didn't say I didn't notice his 'hotness'!  I just didn't study him to see if I know him from somewhere else.  |
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Post by amylu1988 on Nov 17, 2009 8:00:39 GMT -5
I can't wait to read the new chapter when I get home Holley, bookmarking it and I will be back!  |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 17, 2009 8:06:07 GMT -5
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 17, 2009 10:49:40 GMT -5
Can't wait to hear what you think Amylu.
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Post by jillyson on Nov 17, 2009 13:14:10 GMT -5
I left you a comment at LJ, but WOW!!!! This was definitely your best chapter yet!!! I'll tell ya, you guys are sure raising the bar in the story department over here!
Looks like I missed a few spellcheck errors, I'll PM you with them if you want to go back in.
Now I'm positively DYING for the next chapter - PLEASE tell me we'll get another one before you go back to WYDC!!!!
If any of you haven't read this yet, GO NOW!!! (you'll thank me later! lol!)
The drama in this chapter was off the chart!
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 17, 2009 15:17:34 GMT -5
WOW! thanks for the high praise Jill! I am really proud of this chapter for sure and am glad you all think it is good as well. It makes me want to keep going. i was going to go back to WYDC next, or even go into TS3 and my Homeless Challenge, but I think I'll do another chapter of this first. The story in my head needs to get out. Thank You so much for your help this time around. You'll see over at LJ that some person didn't think you did very good though |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 17, 2009 15:30:02 GMT -5
WOW! thanks for the high praise Jill! I am really proud of this chapter for sure and am glad you all think it is good as well. It makes me want to keep going. i was going to go back to WYDC next, or even go into TS3 and my Homeless Challenge, but I think I'll do another chapter of this first. The story in my head needs to get out. Thank You so much for your help this time around. You'll see over at LJ that some person didn't think you did very good though OMG, get over it woman! I was only picking! I don't always catch everything when I proof read either, and then I get irritated at myself. *headdesk* lol Well, I'm glad to hear you're going to work some more on this next. I know how it is when that story gets into your head. It about drives me bonkers when that happens until I'm finally able to type it out.  |
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Post by jillyson on Nov 17, 2009 15:37:24 GMT -5
See? If you wouldn't write such an awesome story, I could pay more attention to the fine points! Lol! I absolutely love this chapter and can't wait to see where you take it!
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 18, 2009 0:04:45 GMT -5
Maybe I need to hire a new Proof reader LOL!
I got ideas floating around my Cranium for sure. I hope I'm able to get the next chapter out before the New Year.
Thanks Again for all your help Jill.
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Post by gldkelly on Nov 18, 2009 10:08:55 GMT -5
Hurry up holley! Left a comment on LJ. Great chapter! Must have more of Holleys C to F! |
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 18, 2009 12:30:32 GMT -5
Thanks for reading Lynda, and the comment at LJ.
I actually have been working on the next chapter, trying to iron out some snags in the plot I have hit. Hopefully it won't be to long. It definitely won't be 6 months like the last one took.
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Post by amylu1988 on Nov 18, 2009 16:50:34 GMT -5
Read it, loved it, and commented on LJ. You've improved so much in story writing and picture setting Holley, and of course yay for the medieval age! ;D I really enjoyed this, thumbs up.
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 18, 2009 17:46:37 GMT -5
Thanks amylu! I saw your comment at LJ. Good to know I have a new reader.
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Post by amylu1988 on Nov 19, 2009 7:39:11 GMT -5
I saw your comment back but can only access LJ at home, so I'll reply to your reply when I get back from work later. I'm now a new dedicated reader, and yet another one to beg you for another chapter to come out soon! |
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 22, 2009 2:03:30 GMT -5
Well, it looks like it will either be mid December or after the new year. My DH has vacation the next week, so Sim playing time will be limited.
Anyways, thanks for reading. i need to start your story now too.
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