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Post by holleyberry on Jan 7, 2009 19:30:25 GMT -5
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Post by joandsarah on Jan 7, 2009 20:30:00 GMT -5
I pm'd you back Holley. Very enjoyable first chapter, looking forward to the next one. ;D
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 7, 2009 20:35:26 GMT -5
I pm'd you back Holley. Very enjoyable first chapter, looking forward to the next one. ;D Here we go. Already with pressure to preform ;D. I don't work well that way  |
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Post by jillyson on Jan 7, 2009 22:14:43 GMT -5
LMAO! " You, hairy one, feed me...NOW!" And I must say, I think Abel is the most beautiful sim baby I have ever seen! Wow! Can't wait to find out if you get your girls next!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Jan 7, 2009 22:30:59 GMT -5
Glad you finally 'bit the bullet' girl! Welcome to the dark side!  Hehe... Well like I told you in the pm, I enjoyed this first chapter. I think you did a very nice job and am looking forward to whenever you decide to upload another... *no pressure* LOL  |
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Post by joandsarah on Jan 7, 2009 22:42:20 GMT -5
Of course no presure *Finds Mobacy thumb screws*  |
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Post by gldkelly on Jan 8, 2009 16:47:49 GMT -5
I'm sorry Holly, I didn't think you posted it here yet! Bang hand against forhead. I also did not know this is you're first story! You're alot better at it than me!! I loved the god thing, very funny! Lunchmeat sandwiches are making her fat, well that will do it, but it was hilarious with the look on her face! Poor Caine thinks he's so mean, but NOT! Abil is adoriable!!! The heck with no pressure, MORE!!!!!! |
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 8, 2009 21:04:58 GMT -5
I played bit more today and I think I know what I am going to do.
My DH is getting a bit irritated at how much I am on here :-[so, it might be awhile before the next chapter. But I am going to write it.
I wrote chapter one in one night. My DH was away and the kids were asleep, so i had marathon simming ;D
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Post by gldkelly on Jan 8, 2009 21:13:48 GMT -5
George leaves me alone, he has a man room LOL, his own TV, he has decorated it all in Nascar, you should see it, it should be in the Nascar hall of fame. Me I sit at my desk on the computer. I can still see the living room TV so I get to watch TV & type at the same time. I guess thats what happens when you have been with somebody for 16 years! It works for me! LOL ;D |
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 14, 2009 13:16:32 GMT -5
Well Chapter two should be along soon. I am working on it a little bit everyday. I had a bit of personal drama here this past week  Anyways, just wanted everyone to know I am working on it. |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Jan 14, 2009 16:15:50 GMT -5
That's cool Holley!  |
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 15, 2009 21:19:16 GMT -5
I added a bit of Drama this time. I wrote it several ways, mixed the styles up a bit. Just thought i'd experiment. Of course if I don't get the internet up on my computer none of you will ever see it  |
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Post by gldkelly on Jan 15, 2009 21:24:53 GMT -5
Thats horrible Holley! I can't wait to read the second chapter |
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Post by jillyson on Jan 15, 2009 21:30:34 GMT -5
LMAO! See how easy writing a story sucks you in? Before you know it, You'll have 8 chapters in your head, just screaming to get out! Lol!
Good luck with your internet!
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 15, 2009 22:26:22 GMT -5
You'll like it Jilly. I added some "Supernatural" to it |
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