jillyson
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[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Feb 19, 2011 18:52:29 GMT -5
I feel like I know who it is with Lenore, but I'm not sure. I know I can't wait to find out!
I'm worried about Lenore - drinking to the point of not kowing where she's at or who she's with...SO dangerous! She got lucky this time, but what about the next?
I love that STorm and Victoria made things right (and in such a fun way! lol!) And it was interesting to see him interact with his "new brother". I can see he's not going to cover for him, but he does seem to sympatize with the pain his father caused these kids. Maybe there'll be something he can do for him somewhere down the line.
Kendra - I worry about her, too. If she doesn't stop all that partying, she might find out the hard way that her tests were wrong, and end up losing a baby she didn't know she was carrying. Then she'd never forgive herself.
As much as Dean loves her, he needs to have a serious sit down with her and deal with her problem.
Alfie...When Clarisse finds out about you, I'm so afraid she's going to think you were using her to get close to the Chace's. She was SO good for you! (and you for her!) You're going to have a lot of work to do to win her back - will that even be possible if you're behind bars??
What a great update! *Good luck out there, Qui. I think the toxic guys should have to wear an armand with a skull and crossbones to make dating easier. |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Feb 19, 2011 22:51:39 GMT -5
~ Jilly!~ ~ You are exactly right,she was very lucky,some-one she knew,& did not take advantage of her,found her,or did he?............maybe it was a cry for help,that he could not refuse?  ? ~ For an old married couple Storm & Victoria,are still getting to know each other,in very interesting ways! I think they will always have that spark,it is oh so fiery when they fight,but so much more explosive when they make up! ~ Storm would feel sympathy for the twins,as he was brought up by his mother,his father was never around to be one!Storm would be angry to find out that his father actually spent time with his other family!As for him helping Alf with this problem & make it go away,he could not do that,it will be dealt with,by the book!BUT.........you never know what is just around the corner,do you? till it happens! ~ Jilly you couldn't be more right,have you been reading our notes  ~ Kendra really needs to slow down,but you would think Dean would have put a stop to it by now! But he is very scared of losing her,& this is his way of dealing with it! ~ As yet we do not know what the outcome of the files will be for Alfonso,because this is his first time being in trouble with the law,one of his biggest worries on finding out his deep feelings for Charisse was that he would lose her if the files ever came to light,or he got caught 'red handed'!Losing Charisse has caused him to lose sleep,not the files! ~ We are so glad you are liking it,I feel guilty for taking any credit when Val has done most of the work on this! |
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jillyson
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Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Feb 20, 2011 11:41:27 GMT -5
Very well done - The two of you make quite a team! There's just so many layers!
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 17, 2011 9:15:06 GMT -5
I promised myself I wouldn't do this, but after months of internal conflict and debates, I've reached a decision on Book II.
There will be no further updates.
As much as I'd love to continue writing this and seeing it to the very end, I just can't. Sadly we just haven't been getting feedback and our readership has dwindled over the past few months. It seems pointless to work so hard on something that's only read by two people. And not to say I don't appreciate those two people because I do...
From the bottom of my heart, I’d like to thank every one who has read and commented on Unforgettable. Your support meant a lot to me and Karima. I just wish the story wasn’t ending on such a sad note.
Jill, thank you for your proofing services and your guidance.
-Val
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Post by joandsarah on Mar 18, 2011 16:29:40 GMT -5
I only just noticed this! Don't scrap it. I know I'm probably one of the slowest to get around to updates, but I thought this had gone on hiatus. I like to wait until I can read a bunch of updates together so I can keep things straight, it doesn't mean I'm not reading. |
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Post by qui on Mar 18, 2011 16:33:12 GMT -5
I nearly had a heart attack when I saw that message on the blog. I understand and I will truly miss there characters!
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Mar 18, 2011 19:17:44 GMT -5
I'm sad. I love these characters, and I'd love to see what becomes of them!
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 20, 2011 16:36:15 GMT -5
Maybe some day, but for now, this is it  |
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