Colliding Stars (completed)

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Hello, people! Jillyson suggested that I post my story here at DD, so here goes! (Thanks, Jilly!)

This is my first time writing a sim story, or a story of any kind, so criticisms and feedback of all kinds will be greatly appreciated! You can visit my site at Colliding Stars.

Chapters:
Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4 | Chapter 5 | Chapter 6 | Chapter 7 | Chapter 8 | Chapter 9 | Chapter 10 | Chapter 11 | Chapter 12 | Chapter 13 | Chapter 14 | Chapter 15 | Chapter 16 | Chapter 17 | Chapter 18 | Chapter 19 | Chapter 20 | Chapter 21 | Chapter 22 | Chapter 23 | Chapter 24 | Chapter 25 | Chapter 26 | Chapter 27 | Chapter 28 | Chapter 29 | Chapter 30 | Chapter 31 | Chapter 32 | Chapter 33 | Chapter 34 | Chapter 35 | Chapter 36 | Chapter 37 | Chapter 38 | Chapter 39 | Chapter 40 | Chapter 41 | Chapter 42 | Chapter 43 | Chapter 44 | Chapter 45 | Chapter 46 | Chapter 47 | Chapter 48 | Chapter 49 | Chapter 50 | Chapter 51 | Chapter 52 | Interlude | Chapter 53 | Chapter 54 | Chapter 55 |
Final Chapter | Epilogue + Surprise!

[jillyson]

Thanks for posting here, Ning! Now all my favorite writers are in one place! (plus I'll see the updates sooner here - lucky me!
Don't be discouraged by the high chapter count, everyone! They're short (always too short in my book - I always want MORE!) and vital, beautifully written and photographed. You will love this story!

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Hey, I should the one thanking you! XD And you over-flatter me! I'm not even half as good.

[Aussie Karima]

I agree with Jilly, I have just started to read your story, & I am coming back for more, I would leave a message on LJ but I think I would be more of a bother! I will leave one when I catch up OK!







EDIT: I am up to 16 & still hanging on every word, I like the longer CH's I miss Zae!

EDIT: finished & it only took seven hours!!!! I needed something to occupy my mind, but WOW! it totally blew me away!I am now one of your fans waiting for the next installment!

[gldkelly]

Hi ning,
I just started reading it myself. I'm on chap 3, BTW they are very good, but it's about my bed time. Thanks for the good read. I can't wait to see what happens to Kismette!!

[jillyson]

See? Would Jilly steer you wrong?

[leapsbarnes]

Gosh Ning, why are you so humble? Lol, it just makes me love you more! As always, you know I adore your story. And ZAE! and KISMETTE! And more importantly: ZAE + KISMETTE!!! lol

[jillyson]

Yeah! What SHE said! Lol!

[Aussie Karima]

Yep! I can't wait for those two to sort it out,Ning's response "it ain't going to happen too soon with Zae's commitment issues!"

[leapsbarnes]

Ugh, silly Zae. I am so impatient and he needs to sort it all out so I can have my ooey gooey love story! lol

[jillyson]

I think Kismette is due for a birthday soon - that should make her a little more tempting for him!

[leapsbarnes]

lol >.< I agree one hundred percent, lol. Really though, he's totally in to her. It's so obvious

[Aussie Karima]

Why would he be found in her hall way (hers is the only door in that corridor!)what she did not know was that he was there to ask her to the ball & hidden behind his back was a single rose, for her!Something like a single rose would mean so much to Kismette!

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LOL!! Omg you guys! XD

Thank you for the comments on LJ, Karima! I don't know why you would actually say you are more of a bother. Lol at the scrolling kisses! XD And yea, you know what I would say in response to this ABRUPT COUPLING of my characters! lol

I should be thanking you for reading this, gldkelly!

I'm not being humble, I really ain't that good, Jessie! No ooey gooey love stories for you! >) And he's not 100% into her okie! He doesn't even know what he really feels! (gosh, I'm the only one standing at my side of this war D8 )

LOL Jilly! Omg, I'm laughing so hard at that. Ahem, her birthday would change more than that. It would make get free of any bonds with Jeremy. SERIOUS CONSEQUENCES OKIE, GUYS. XD

[Aussie Karima]

That cause we all love ZAE!!!!!!!