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Post by joandsarah on Jan 14, 2011 16:03:36 GMT -5
 It better be Gabe or I'll be putting on my stompy boots and swimming on over!
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 14, 2011 16:20:09 GMT -5
It better be Gabe or I'll be putting on my stompy boots and swimming on over! Wow! that sounds like you are telling me how to write my own story. Is that what your doing?  |
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Post by joandsarah on Jan 14, 2011 17:00:39 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2011 17:04:21 GMT -5
Holley: I loved both of the chapters. Dawn is adorable! |
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Post by jillyson on Jan 14, 2011 20:30:08 GMT -5
Uh-oh, Jo! Looks like you did it now!  |
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Post by sb on Jan 14, 2011 21:02:06 GMT -5
I'm just loving this whole storyline! Dawn is so sweet. Got me a Team Gabe t-shirt too!
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 14, 2011 21:07:56 GMT -5
Thanks for reading sb/Beth!Which do you prefer. I am glad you like Dawn.
So far no Team Don, huh?
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Post by sb on Jan 14, 2011 21:51:58 GMT -5
ha! Beth will do just fine.
Don is a fascinating choice for a lot of reasons. Not sure Dawn would find him all that interesting in the long run though...
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 14, 2011 22:03:44 GMT -5
Ashley! Sorry, I didn't see your post before. Thanks for reading! Have you named your new birds yet? Don is fascinating. I adore him, despite his roguish ways  I guess that makes me team Don then, huh? And it's my story so... |
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Post by jillyson on Jan 14, 2011 22:12:05 GMT -5
Aww, quit teasing us and post the next chapter! Lol!
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 14, 2011 22:16:27 GMT -5
It is done |
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Post by jillyson on Jan 14, 2011 22:21:15 GMT -5
I know!!!! That's why I'm dying to see it posted!!!
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 15, 2011 0:17:09 GMT -5
-Holley you really know how to lay on the romance. Dawn's reaction is understandable, considering what she's been through with Lothario. I'm glad Eliot pushed her in the right direction, and he didn't let her back out her lunch with Gabe. Gabe has won my heart hands down. Not that there was competition.
-The man knows sex, I mean, the art of seduction.
-How can Dawn keep saying no to him? He's perfect in every way. Better yet, how can she no to a cute little pig, and balloons? I'd grab them and run, and then go back to Gabe to steal a kiss, and and and...MORE.
-Now that Dawn's back home, I have a feeling that Lothario will come swooping in and confuse our Don further. I hope Gabe jumps on the next plane to Riverview. |
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 15, 2011 1:19:49 GMT -5
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 15, 2011 7:21:58 GMT -5
Oh dear, I didn't see that one coming. Dawn is in a pickle now, isn't she?
I LOL when Don said "gotcha!" somehow that's so like him. |
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