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Post by holleyberry on Dec 10, 2010 0:49:00 GMT -5
It was sad to see all Dawn's fantasies of what her first time would be like get washed away by the red-hot Don. Is it sad? I rather think she enjoyed it  |
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 4, 2011 21:27:34 GMT -5
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Post by jillyson on Jan 4, 2011 22:07:04 GMT -5
I absolutely love what you're doing with your chapters! To have Dawn go to France and work the nectary is just a wonderful, unique idea. It's really good to see her learning how to handle herself, to know what she wants and to go after it. It's sad to see that Don may have really scarred her to the point of dissing a hot Frenchman! (In uniform, no less!) I'm completely in love with Elliot, and I want one! After her conflicting emotions at the cafe, she's going to need someone to vent to, and I know Elliot will be there for her, with a wonderful bottle of nectar! You know my favorite part - the conflicting emotions that shot thru her when she met Gabe. Very well written. (even if my faulty proofiness passed it by the first time! Lol!) I sure hope Gabe doesn't let all that man-hating stop him from showing Dawn there's still good guys out there! Let me be the first to say it...TEAM GABE!  Bravo! |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jan 4, 2011 22:22:38 GMT -5
 We have quite a few new peeps that would (maybe) like to read this,will they have to join the LJ DD's page to read it?  ~Holley~ ~ I loved it, I loved your description of Elliot!  ~ I also can not believe she turned her back on a man in uniform,cute to boot! ~ But the tell-tale looking back has me thinking yes,she is not totally against it!lol! ~ Love this idea,ingenious!
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 4, 2011 22:26:38 GMT -5
We have quite a few new peeps that would (maybe) like to read this,will they have to join the LJ DD's page to read it? Well, technically no. If they are mutual friends on LJ I posted to my page too. I'm not sure if they can read without joining. |
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Post by jillyson on Jan 4, 2011 22:51:38 GMT -5
If I remember right, they'd have to sign up for the lj community. I'm pretty sure it's set up that way.
It would be great if some of them not only signed up to read, but decided to take a round, too! We have a bunch of empty spots with the drop outs!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jan 4, 2011 23:19:51 GMT -5
I know for a fact that you have to join that page & be a LJ member to join it,once I sorted my E-mail I was able to sign on for the DD LJ Branch page! ~ I have been mentioning around the threads about that Jilly!  ~ We, do indeed have a few slots vacant! 
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 4, 2011 23:50:48 GMT -5
Thanks for reading Karima! We'll see if Gabe can win her over. That would be GREAT if someone wants to take a empty slot. About the DDLJ, I think you just need to WATCH the community to get posts, but have to join to post on it. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 5, 2011 0:12:12 GMT -5
Holley I started reading this but now I have to head out for work. I wanted to download it so I can read it at work? Did you turn off the download option?
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 5, 2011 0:14:27 GMT -5
Did you turn off the download option? I have no idea |
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 5, 2011 0:16:41 GMT -5
I think so, it's on Slideshare, it's one of the options you have to check/uncheck when you're still uploading it. I download Amylu's and Jo's sometimes  |
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 5, 2011 0:18:41 GMT -5
I'll go look now. It is set to public, I know that. edit: I just checked the option is selected, so I have no idea why you couldn't download it |
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Post by joandsarah on Jan 5, 2011 0:53:05 GMT -5
Yah I'm glad I came back when I did. Yes I am much happier with this chapter! I had half suspected Don might follow her to France.  So I'm very glad she had a nice change of scene. Working in a vineyard sounds right up Dawn's ally. A good place to heal her hurt and find someone else... like a dashing French police man. |
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 5, 2011 10:34:12 GMT -5
I am glad you liked the chapter Jo! Especially after what I have put you through. I told you to trust Dawn. She knows what she's about. Hopefully she won't be too stubborn about that "dashing French police man"
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 5, 2011 12:18:08 GMT -5
OMG *swoons at Gabe*
That man is to die for. Okay, maybe not, but I love him already. His determination, his suave smile, the charm, everything! Damn Don for doing a number on our girl, now she'll push away every hot specimen she comes across. Not good. She must run home to Eliot, and hopefully he'll talk some sense into her. I loved the detail you put into this Holley, with the nectar making, and Dawn and Eliot's friendship. |
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