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Post by holleyberry on Jan 5, 2011 12:41:52 GMT -5
I'm glad you liked it Val! I agree, Elliot really should talk some sense into her, but maybe she won't listen since her heart is in such shambles now.
Since i am not giving her a "regular" job, i thought I would spend a bit of time explaining how she was going to make a living. Some of the dialog is from actual WA adventures in France. I won't spend a lot of time on it later, just some mention here and there. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 5, 2011 12:47:40 GMT -5
I'm glad you liked it Val! I agree, Elliot really should talk some sense into her, but maybe she won't listen since her heart is in such shambles now.
Since i am not giving her a "regular" job, i thought I would spend a bit of time explaining how she was going to make a living. Some of the dialog is from actual WA adventures in France. I won't spend a lot of time on it later, just some mention here and there. Please don't change a thing. I love detail. It helps lazy folk like me. I never read the game guides and then I discover things 3 years later, so detail helps  |
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Post by amylu1988 on Jan 13, 2011 5:40:33 GMT -5
Finally read chapter 3! Sorry it took me so long, Holley. Agreed, I love Gabe too. There is something different in him to Don, and he's French, so it's more in his nature.  I love how Dawn instantly connected with France and the nectar, her and Elliot's friendship is going to be great fun. Loved it, and can't wait for chapter 4! |
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 13, 2011 11:59:55 GMT -5
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Post by jillyson on Jan 13, 2011 13:34:52 GMT -5
SQUEE!!!
*Straightening my Team Gabe T-shirt...
I love this! How can she be so strong - he has me melting like candy in the sun!
I love how Elliot worked behind the scenes to get her on that date with Gabe before she left for the states. He's such a good friend, and wants her to be happy.
And how sweet that daddy was waiting up for her. AW.
And Gabe, chipping away at her with those little gifts when she wouldn't take his calls, he found a way to keep himslef on her mind no matter how she blocked him. That kiss - wow!!! There's no way she can forget that no matter how far apart they are! Plus, he's drop dead gorgeous, which doesn't hurt!
Take THAT, Don Lothario!!! Lol!
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 13, 2011 16:48:55 GMT -5
Thanks for commenting Jill and for all the proof reading. Will we have to make shirts? Team Gabe or Team Don?
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Post by joandsarah on Jan 13, 2011 17:28:51 GMT -5
What, what, what?! Someone is for Don?!?!  Lol a porcelain pig. Just as well Elliot is around, he's a good friend. Then all the busy bodies come along. That was some date. *fans* Oh no Don is coming tomorrow?! I'm hoping Gabe will turn up and give him a bunch of fives. |
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 13, 2011 18:47:55 GMT -5
What, what, what?! Someone is for Don?!?! There might be!  I have no idea what a bunch of fives are, but thanks for reading Jo! |
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Post by jillyson on Jan 13, 2011 19:22:29 GMT -5
I'm guessing it's like a knuckle sandwich - or more like several. I think we may need T-shirts...Can't wait to see what happens when he shows up! |
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 13, 2011 20:53:17 GMT -5
I'm guessing it's like a knuckle sandwich - or more like several. ! Oh! That makes sense. I wonder who would win in a fight between them   |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jan 13, 2011 21:03:33 GMT -5
~ Great update, I think she will not be able to forget him,& I have a strong feeling he will follow her to the ends of the Simearth!
~ Now all she has to do is repel Don on every turn!But I think the KISS with Gabe will keep her strong,with out it I think she would fail! And Don will have what he wants!
~ But we don't want that, we want GABE! To win!
~ I loved it Holley!!!(",) ~ It means a knuckle sandwich! (a bunch of fives!) ~ Absolutely love it Holley!
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Post by jillyson on Jan 13, 2011 23:09:59 GMT -5
Another Team Gabe member...I wonder who Jo would choose???
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Post by joandsarah on Jan 14, 2011 8:33:45 GMT -5
Oh Jo would choose Don of course! ..................... For the knuckle sandwich! Lol 'bunch of fives' must be one of my Aussie expressions. |
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 14, 2011 10:17:30 GMT -5
 Oh Jo would choose Don of course!  
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Post by jillyson on Jan 14, 2011 12:54:45 GMT -5
I knew it - she protests too much... |
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