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Post by Deleted on Dec 1, 2010 22:54:32 GMT -5
yay
Poor Dawn
great chapter
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 2, 2010 0:40:27 GMT -5
I sort of had the feeling Don was lying about not remembering his past. I thought the sims 2 Don was bad, well this one takes the cake. But I'm with Jo on this, he's said nothing about love so far, it seems he just wants to use our poor Dawn as his security blanket!
Run Dawn...and listen to Bebe, mother's know what's good for us. Run Dawn!
OMG, I love the plottiness in this Holley. What a thrilling first chapter for Round. 2 |
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Post by holleyberry on Dec 2, 2010 12:20:05 GMT -5
Thanks for reading Ashley  Val: Don's memory is just fine, and you're right, this Don is a lot worse.Like I said to Jo, have a little faith in our Dawn, she's a smart girl  If you're interested, I used a bit of the back story for him I found here: sims.wikia.com/wiki/Don_LotharioIf you scroll to the bottom it has TS3 info. So supposedly this is a young Don. Like he was plucked out of TS2 right before he either dumped or married Cassie. |
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Post by jillyson on Dec 2, 2010 13:37:09 GMT -5
That was a great find - I had no idea about that little back story!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Dec 8, 2010 0:11:01 GMT -5
Thanks for the reminder! I loved it!  ~ A fantastic start, with lots of plottiness! ~ Well, who would have thought that Don had his sights set on a cushy legacy life!
~ I think our Dawn is a tad smarter than that? but oh! those hormones!
~ Poor Dawn,but I am sure she will see sense before it is too late!I am sure she does not want to be second fiddle to his mistresses!
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Post by holleyberry on Dec 8, 2010 18:59:29 GMT -5
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Post by joandsarah on Dec 8, 2010 19:29:29 GMT -5
I thought you said she was smart!  Don is so dead at my next heirship challenge. I think I will come up with some new torture just for him.  Also she better not be pregnant! |
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Post by holleyberry on Dec 8, 2010 23:54:30 GMT -5
Smart people do dumb things sometimes. Especially if they think they are in love.
I plead the fifth about the other thing. You can totally torture this Don. He's a creep in a half! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 8, 2010 23:56:17 GMT -5
OMG, you should write for Mills and Boon. I'm going to come to you for lessons on the art of seduction. That scene with Dawn and was FIRE! And then he had to be a cad! But a part of me thinks there's been a misunderstanding? Maybe it's the maid who answered the phone? *I can hope, since I want more steaminess between the two Ds* I loved this Holley. But then again I always love your writing. It always leaves me with a naughty smile |
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Post by joandsarah on Dec 9, 2010 0:07:40 GMT -5
I've said before that Holley should write for Mills & Boon!  You should try them Holley, as in seriously, this is the kind of thing they are after. |
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Post by holleyberry on Dec 9, 2010 0:12:53 GMT -5
Aw Shucks guys  i got to let that frustration out somewhere Just kidding  |
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Post by joandsarah on Dec 9, 2010 0:36:11 GMT -5
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Post by amylu1988 on Dec 9, 2010 7:17:26 GMT -5
I read them Holley! ;D Blimey, Dawn's got an interesting one there. I should have guessed Mr Lothario would appear in this, he's brilliant for the plot and there's so many emotions flying around, it's great. I can't wait to see what Dawn does next, and what happens to her love life. |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Dec 9, 2010 8:42:28 GMT -5
Cold shower for me!lol! 
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Post by jillyson on Dec 9, 2010 13:26:10 GMT -5
Wow! That was HOT!!! Mr. Lothario sure knows how to live up to his name! It was sad to see all Dawn's fantasies of what her first time would be like get washed away by the red-hot Don. She may have believed she was in love, because she really didn't know what love is yet, but it looks like she just got her eyes opened in a big way!
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! |
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