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Post by jillyson on Mar 21, 2010 18:55:19 GMT -5
la la la la la I can't hear you....
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Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 21, 2010 21:56:14 GMT -5
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Post by catmania80 on Mar 21, 2010 22:11:17 GMT -5
Tina I can't remember if this where I am supposed to do this, but I am going to write your review here. First off, I knew that Gustav was a nut case, because he reminded me so much of my ex-husband who is legally mentally insane. So I figured he's be up to something,just not sure what. Although I understand why he is like he is from his crappy childhood and his mother basically not taking care if him like she should have and putting herself before her son, sticking a five year old in a closet to listen to his mother having sex. How disgusting and how awful for him to grow up like that! Some people however do overcome their childhoods, his marked him for life unfortunately. So I understand why he made Nellie do the things he wanted her to do, mostly I think he just wanted someone to love him and only him, but his kind of "love" is twisted and he would not understand that. Tough subject to handle and you did it well.  The part where Youssef was injured and almost killed upset me. I'm team Youssef you know. Although I did like the pic of him laying on the floor naked, that didn't pass by unnoticed.  He'd better be Alive and Recovering!  Nellie went through alot in this part and I kind of thought that with three men from three different countries liking her and she slept with two, she was going to have to make a decision, I thought ,between Youssef and Ho Sung. Gustav, was not even an option as she didn't seem to really be drawn to him. There were alot of issues in this chapter to deal with and you handled them all very well. I also understand Ho Sung's reasons for why he did what he did, but as far as I can see he blew it big time. He should have explained things to Nellie in the beginning and none of this would have happened. Cliffhanger! Is he Alive or dead? Also, Nellie has to settle down and decide whom she wants to be with. Personally I am in favor of her friend Zahn. He seemed to be the one she turned to whenever she needed help and questions answered. Or if she needed sometime away she went to see him. I remember Shen Su thinking that she would make a good wife for his brother and also a good member of their family. In any case I can't wait until chapter 21! You did an awesome job with this chapter as always!   Waiting on Chapter21! ;D |
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Post by jillyson on Mar 21, 2010 22:14:43 GMT -5
Yeah, what she said! Lol!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 21, 2010 22:34:00 GMT -5
LOL! But . . . what about what I said?  Thanks Cat! This is exactly the right place to put your review!  Don't worry, I've been working on chapter 21, but it isn't easy because I want to make sure it's able to hold everyone's interest until the end. After the last few chapters, I am terrified that the next chapter will be boring.  |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 22, 2010 3:04:05 GMT -5
LOL! But . . . what about what I said? Thanks Cat! This is exactly the right place to put your review! Don't worry, I've been working on chapter 21, but it isn't easy because I want to make sure it's able to hold everyone's interest until the end. After the last few chapters, I am terrified that the next chapter will be boring. Boring? I don't think so? Not with Youssef fighting for his life and that cliff hanger you left us with the last time  Die Youssef die... NOT...Jill will definitely kill me |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 22, 2010 4:10:25 GMT -5
Thanks Val, but I'm still worried...lol. I have the plot in my head, I only hope I can put it into type effectively. |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Mar 22, 2010 5:44:09 GMT -5
;D Your so Wicked Val!  |
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Post by jillyson on Mar 22, 2010 5:52:00 GMT -5
Ain't she, though?
I wouldn't worry about the boring. It's resolution everyone is looking for in this chapter!
*Live, Youssef, LIVE!!!!!
*What will happen with Ho Sung???
*Zahn...Zahn???
Answering these burning questions will most certainly NOT be boring!!! After hanging from all these cliff hangers for so long, you could simply type the answers in 3 frames and no one would be bored! Lol!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Mar 22, 2010 5:56:27 GMT -5
;D What She said  Boring....................................never!  |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 22, 2010 9:05:05 GMT -5
Answering these burning questions will most certainly NOT be boring!!! After hanging from all these cliff hangers for so long, you could simply type the answers in 3 frames and no one would be bored! Lol! Hmmm, maybe I'll just do that, then! It'd sure be a lot simpler. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 22, 2010 9:38:44 GMT -5
Answering these burning questions will most certainly NOT be boring!!! After hanging from all these cliff hangers for so long, you could simply type the answers in 3 frames and no one would be bored! Lol! Hmmm, maybe I'll just do that, then! It'd sure be a lot simpler. Don't you dare! *warning finger* I want all the climax of the story's finale. 3 frames will not satisfy this reader |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Mar 22, 2010 10:08:12 GMT -5
;D Can I borrow that *Warning Finger*( now I have it!) ~WHAT SHE SAID, TINA! Thanks for the loan Val! |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 22, 2010 11:46:46 GMT -5
OK Ladies, I promise I'll write more than three frames. How about five?
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Post by catmania80 on Mar 22, 2010 15:05:54 GMT -5
Tina how about more than five? Like a COMPLETE ending to this story! BTW, you do not have to worry, your stories are never boring no matter what chapter you are on. The fact that you are working so hard on this latest chapter and having trouble already proves what a perfectionist you are. YOU would not be satisfied with 3 frames, now would you, seriously? I will tell you that I am patiently waiting, with ants in my pants. J K! ;D Also, Youssef better be alive and Recovering! |
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I'm afraid it's going to be anti-climatic after the last couple of chapters. 
