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Post by Nicole on Nov 18, 2009 19:43:04 GMT -5
LOL, Jilly! She was mentioned in the very first paragraph, Danielle Shaw!  I'm glad you enjoyed it. Danielle should come around next chapter, can't ignore her for too long, can we? I'm glad you enjoyed it Tina! I'm so happy everybody seems to be enjoying it.  I have replied to both of your comments. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 22, 2009 11:26:35 GMT -5
Just finished chapter four. Greg never ceases to amaze me...It's like has a bag full of secrets and nasties and every time Liana turns around, he rips out the secrets...Fascinating indeed.
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Post by Nicole on Nov 23, 2009 20:17:04 GMT -5
 I love a hint of mystery, it's my second genre passion next to horror. Greg is most definitely an interesting man, wait till you see the next chapter! It's already written and ready to go, I just am waiting till the 25th. Thanks Valpre! |
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 23, 2009 22:23:07 GMT -5
Left a comment at LJ Nicole.
Good Update, can't wait to read more.
So happy Greg and Liana seem to be working things out.
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Post by Nicole on Nov 23, 2009 23:19:47 GMT -5
Thanks Holley! I'll go reply to that now. |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Nov 24, 2009 0:28:45 GMT -5
 Wow! what a mystery you present, each chapter certainly makes me think!putting what little you give out,like a puzzle, together.........it is totally intriguing & I will be back for more! 
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Post by Nicole on Nov 24, 2009 1:19:00 GMT -5
That's what I strive for, Karima. And teachers always say I never explain myself *rolls eyes* lol. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 24, 2009 10:19:50 GMT -5
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Post by Aussie Karima on Nov 24, 2009 13:08:57 GMT -5
Val she said the 25th,it's already the 25th here,but I still have to wait another day! 
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Post by Nicole on Nov 24, 2009 19:38:11 GMT -5
Sorry Val!  It'll be out in... 6h and 20min. |
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Post by jillyson on Nov 24, 2009 20:33:33 GMT -5
tick...tick..tick...
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Post by Nicole on Nov 24, 2009 21:52:57 GMT -5
UPDATED... Chapter 5Enjoy. I couldn't wait and be that mean to you all. |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Nov 25, 2009 0:35:04 GMT -5
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 25, 2009 1:02:41 GMT -5
Happy to see greg may be an OK dude after all!
Great Update, but too short.
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Post by Nicole on Nov 25, 2009 1:35:50 GMT -5
Thanks Karima, for the comment! I couldn't leave you all waiting till the next day, it's not fair. Holley, just every story is too short for you. Thanks for the comment though! |
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I really thought this was updated when I saw the last comments were from you. When's chapter five coming out 
