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Post by holleyberry on Nov 14, 2009 21:50:15 GMT -5
It was subtle Tina, so don't feel bad. I actually had to go back and skim the first two chapters.
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 14, 2009 21:53:01 GMT -5
LOL... I did that too! But, it didn't help me with the teens business. Like I said in my edit above, you did have the benefit of seeing the hint first.   |
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 14, 2009 22:04:51 GMT -5
What hint?
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 14, 2009 22:10:02 GMT -5
Nicole's reply to me at LJ that said look closer at the teens.  If you tell me you didn't see that, I'm going to feel even more stupid so.... *raises eyebrow* Don't say it! Well, I probably missed it because of the lack of sleep and taking too many pain meds the last few days...lol |
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 14, 2009 22:13:37 GMT -5
Ok, I won't say it then |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 14, 2009 22:15:19 GMT -5
I appreciate it.
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Post by Nicole on Nov 14, 2009 22:18:27 GMT -5
Lol, very nice guys.  |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 14, 2009 23:22:37 GMT -5
Hey Nicole, I just thought of something. When you said, No, it's not getting bored... I think I didn't read the details closely enough and I found myself scratcing my head saying "huh?" LOL. It's not your story at all.  I should have said, Maybe it's not you. It could be the story..lol. A LOT of crazy, wild, fantastical things happen in 'Shadow of Doubt' because of the kind of story it is. It isn't based on reality...lol. So, you may have a confusing part or two, but it does all eventually get explained, even it isn't until you get to 'Villa Le Duvall". As a matter of fact, after the final chapter, Jillyson I think it was, said in her review that I wrapped everything up beautifully and that I left no stone unturned. That is exactly what I was trying to accomplish. ;D Parts of the the story are shrouded in mystery, because, well... it's a mystery! Anyhow, sorry to go off in a tangent in YOUR story thread about mine, but I wanted to make sure you saw this and with it here, I know you will...lol. I just wanted to let you know all that just in case you decide to start reading it again.
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Post by Nicole on Nov 14, 2009 23:50:28 GMT -5
Lol, thanks for the explination, Tina. I will pick up reading the story probably on my christmas break. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 18, 2009 8:01:49 GMT -5
Such drama, right off the bat! I left comments at LJ. I love drama, so I'll have to check this out when I get home. They've blocked off LJ here at work  P.S. Hey Nicole, just wanted to let you know I've read all three chapters and I enjoyed them all. Chapter Three was much more intriguing though with the build up of Katharyn's character. I can't wait to see how you develop the characters. I'd like to see more of Liana's character come out though. Greg's such a sneaky one hey, cheating behing his pregnant wife I know karma's gonna pay him back for that one  . I haven't read your other stories yet and I think I'll hold off on that until you're done with The Early Life. I don't want my focus to shift from there. Hurry with chapter 4! |
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Post by Nicole on Nov 18, 2009 18:35:38 GMT -5
Chapter 4 should be posted withing the hour... Withing 30 minutes, lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it, I found chapter 3 much more enjoyable too. Katharyn's such a fun character, lol. Hopefully chapter 4 lets you see more of Liana's character. Thanks Valpre! |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 18, 2009 18:43:08 GMT -5
Cool, I can't wait to read it! ;D
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Post by Nicole on Nov 18, 2009 18:49:21 GMT -5
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Post by jillyson on Nov 18, 2009 19:20:39 GMT -5
Left a comment at LJ! These characters are something else! I'm dying to see what's happening with the blonde girl! (i forgot her name!) Hurry!!! Lol!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 18, 2009 19:39:32 GMT -5
Ooh me too, Jill! Wow, Nicole, nice update! I left comments at LJ as well. |
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