The Early Life *May 25* Can you Believe it?

[Nicole]

Ok, so I've come up with a new story, yet another one, I know. But this one isn't a legacy or a challenge so anyways:

Look into the lives, the early life.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Enjoy.

[jillyson]

Such drama, right off the bat! I left comments at LJ.

[Tina ☺]

TWO chapters already? Wow, I really MUST catch up on my reading! As soon as I do, I will read this one.

[holleyberry]

Oh cool! Something to read tonight!

[Nicole]

I got your comment Jilly.

Yeah, Tina, two chapters already.

I hope you enjoy it Holley!

[Tina ☺]

Okay, I caught up, read both chapters, and I'm really liking it so far! Nice job! ;D

[Nicole]

Thanks Tina.

Replied to both of your comments.

[Tina ☺]

Hey, you're welcome! Sorry I neglected to repy to this earlier, so that you could announce the fact that you've updated!
But, there is the trick of copying your first post, deleting it, and pasting it into a new one while also announcing your update.

It's what I did just now to tell you I read it and commented at LJ.

Wow, lots of drama and it's very intriguing. It does make one want to know what will happen next.

[Nicole]

Yeah, I used to do that all the time in SWG when we had that mod installed, lol. Obviously it slipped my mind in my excitement of a new chapter, lol.

I hope it's not too much drama... But I'm glad it intrigues you... We'll see what happens next... Not that I'm 100% sure of what happens next either... I think of the plot as I take pictures. *whistles nervously*

[Tina ☺]

I have sort of done it that way before too, but then I began thinking up the plot and then going in to get the screenies I needed.

Well, I think it has the makings of a good story, as long as you don't keep us in the dark about the main two characters for very long at a time. Sometimes the main idea of a story can get 'lost' if you veer too far away from the central plot, which in this case I believe is the pregnant girl and her husband. I'm stupid and can't recall their names right now and I'm feeling too lazy to go look.

[Nicole]

You're right. Liana and Greg are the main characters... And there were Flashbacks in the most recent chapter, I don't know how clear that was, lol.

[holleyberry]

I read the new chapter and commented over at LJ.
So intriguing. I made a guess about what is happening.

[Nicole]

Replied, thanks! And it was a well educated guess.

[Tina ☺]

LOL! Okay, I get it now. My brain may be very slow, but I had no clue that was a flashback. Sorry about that. I guess I did miss something, somehow.

Well, Holley did have the benefit of seeing the 'hint' before she commented.

[Nicole]

It's ok. I probably should've made it clearer... Perhaps blurring the photos a bit to make them stand out?