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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 15, 2009 8:25:58 GMT -5
Wow, VERY nicely done! I'd say you cleaned this one up very well.   I really enjoy your writing style and I found this chapter much more entertaining than the last. You did a really good job of dipicting Storm's feelings about everything. The exchange was loading ignorantly for me, but I managed to slap five stars on it anyway...lol Keep up the good work and... don't leave us in the dark too long. I want MOAR! |
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Post by jillyson on Nov 15, 2009 9:43:47 GMT -5
Hey! What a surprise! I love it, of course, gave it 5 stars, of course, and am drooling for the next chapter, of course! Lol! Now I'm REALLY excited, because all of the build up is done and next chapter will have to get in there and deal with the fallout! Go Storm and Torie!!!!
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 15, 2009 10:17:29 GMT -5
Thanks Tina and Jill...I'm glad you guys enjoyed it. Thought it'd be too tedious and boring cos it's focused more on guys. Tina, you wouldn't say it's the same chapter I asked you to proofread right?  |
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Post by jillyson on Nov 15, 2009 10:52:06 GMT -5
Oh, I forgot to mention Drake's hunky goodness! Yum!
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Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 15, 2009 10:53:12 GMT -5
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 15, 2009 11:17:59 GMT -5
Oh, I forgot to mention Drake's hunky goodness! Yum! Hey Jill, I've actually gone back and looked at the screenshots again and I have to agree with you there...especially where he's lying on the hammock. I never really noticed Drake much...I'm still crushing on Storm and something about Hugo fascinates me so! But Drake on the hammock def has potential! |
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Post by catmania80 on Nov 15, 2009 12:04:16 GMT -5
I have read this story on the sims 2 exchange and it really rocks, and someone is right, I need more info on when Storm and Victoria will get back together. Sometimes I wish Victoria could just accept Storm's job, but that would be too easy, not enough drama. Hey Valpre, I made it, I'm on here, as catmania80  ;. I will never go back to the Sims2 exchange. I love this Story. I know you all don't know me, I new to this site, it's going to take a while to learn my way around.Catmania80 |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Nov 15, 2009 12:30:27 GMT -5
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Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 15, 2009 15:21:21 GMT -5
Well hello Catmania! Welcome to the site! Just have a look around, make yourself at home, and don't be afraid to jump right in and gab with us! We have a nice story board where plenty of cool stories are posted, including my own... *wink* lol If you have written any stories you'd like to share, just post your links in a thread in the appropriate category, and we'll be happy to read them.  Again... it's good to see you! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 16, 2009 3:15:44 GMT -5
Yeah, Catmania you'll have fun on here...this place's starting to feel like my second home :-)
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 17, 2009 2:04:30 GMT -5
Well, I have to say, Val, that I'm ecstatic to see you around more often! ;D Hey, did you notice your TS3 story thread you posted in the TS3 section? I finally read one of your stories and I think it's great! I'm ready for chapter two! I'm thinking I should move that thread over here to the story section so that more folks will know there are story links inside.  |
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 17, 2009 10:24:48 GMT -5
Well, I have to say, Val, that I'm ecstatic to see you around more often! ;D Hey, did you notice your TS3 story thread you posted in the TS3 section? I finally read one of your stories and I think it's great! I'm ready for chapter two! I'm thinking I should move that thread over here to the story section so that more folks will know there are story links inside. It's been so long since I played TS3 and I haven't had a desire to write. I'm still getting used to the story boards there and with Unforgettable taking so much of my time I don't know when I'll be working on Chapter 2. I even forgot I posted that thread here  Has the writing bug hit you yet? |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 17, 2009 16:40:32 GMT -5
Well, if you do get back into writing it, you have at least one eager fan waiting for more! ;D No writing bug for me yet. I've been enjoying actually getting back into playing TS3 a bit. Shoot, I paid a bunch of money for it and have hardly played since I got it. Now I have a house with a husband and THREE toddlers and my stupid sims want MOAR kids!  I do have a tingle of an idea brewing in my head for something to write about next. However, I don't know when I'll actually bite the bullet and go for it, if I do.
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 18, 2009 13:43:18 GMT -5
I just read chapter one of your Unforgettable. So Good!!! I can't wait to read more!
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 18, 2009 13:48:01 GMT -5
I just read chapter one of your Unforgettable. So Good!!! I can't wait to read more! Ahh, thanks Holly...hope you catch up soon so you can get lost in Toria & Storm's saga  |
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