Villa Le Duvall

[Pixx]

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I finally got to this chapter!!! (I'm home at my mom's place by the way, where I have internet <yay>).

Okay, this part "the man he had once admired had become nothing more than a vengeful, bullying monster" That sums up Louis perfectly, couldn't have said it better myself lol.

....I feel so sorry for Ellie...She looks so pitiful...*sniff, sniff* I think she learnt her lesson a million times over.

Donny and Sasha are so cute together...I go AAAAAWWWWWW at ever picture of them. So I did quite a bit of AAAAAWWWWWWing in the last minute or so.

OMG who came through the door...*dramatic pause*

LOUIS!!!! And he's smiling? I think my heart just stopped!!!

Oh...he scowled, all is right in the world now *phew*.

[random thought] I think the writers of the Vampire Diaries read your story Tina, did you ever watch it? Damon has a little bit of Louis in him....he likes to kill things but Louis is still the Supreme Evil in the world [/random thought]

AAAHHHH! Louis laughed!!! Only Donovan can have that effect on him but it's freaky for Louis to do anything but freak out and try to kill people.

I think if i were in Donny's position I would have fainted...I mean, that's a lot to take in. My emotions are conflicted, I like Louis being crazy but when Lucinda told the story about Penelope I felt sorry for him.

Okay, how smart of Thomas to confront Stephen about Sasha's feelings IN FRONT OF HER BEDROOM DOOR!!! Awww, poor Sasha...

AAAAAWWWWWW!!! Donny-Boy thought it was his fault.

AAAAAWWWWWW!!! Love confessions.

AAAAAWWWWWW!!! Kissy face.

Ooooo...what'd they do...LOL. Well at least Louis didn't burst into the room that time.

AAAAAWWWWWW!!! Donny found his mommy...*sniff, sniff*

....Wait, what happened to Louis...did his heart like...burst or something?

TINA!!! You made me cry! Donny gave up his mother...*cry, cry, sob*

AAAAAWWWWWW!!! For Joseph & Shannon

Oh lol Louis lost his mind ha ha.

LOL @the Out takes and Donny perving at Sasha while she bathed.

[Tina ☺]

Pixx!!!!! ;D First things first... *BIG BEAR HUG* It's GREAT to see you back!

LOL... your reviews never fail to amuse me. I love them! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. ;D

[random thought] I think the writers of the Vampire Diaries read your story Tina, did you ever watch it? Damon has a little bit of Louis in him....he likes to kill things but Louis is still the Supreme Evil in the world [/random thought]

LOL... of COURSE I watch it! I've never missed a single one. I ADORE Damon! As a matter of fact, that show (and Damon) is what inspired me to begin plucking away at my keyboard again to get this story finished after a seven-month hiatus...lol

Actually, this story came out a LONG time ago in book form, even before Twilight was written, so they most definitely didn't copy me. The good thing is I didn't copy them either because I'd never heard of it until after the series began. But, thank you! That is an awesome compliment!

LOL... I thought that perving shot was a good one too.

Thanks so much, Pixx! You have made my day by popping in to finish reading and do your review of the story. I hope to see you around a bit over you break.

[amylu1988]

;D I finally finished reading this today!

Loved it, loved it, loved it. The ending, the plot, the characters, the romances, everything. It's such a great story, with everything you could possibly want in it. Sorry it's taken me so long to read, but it was well worth it. Big thumbs up from me Tina! ;D

[Tina ☺]

Thank you so much, Amylu! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! ;D It was a LOT of work, but also a LOT of fun from 'Shadows Linger...' to "Villa...', so I am overjoyed when folks like it!

Thanks for reading and thanks for the great comments! I think that someday I will move the series over to LJ on Slideshare, but... that will be a lot of time-consuming work...lol


Wow... I just noticed that the links to the prequels on the first page of this post have been broken for MONTHS, ever since I moved the stories into the library. Sheesh, how stupid of me! lol Well, it's all fixed now and everything is up and running again, so if anyone wants to have a read... please go for it and tell me what you think! Lord knows I could certainly use the encouragement....