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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 8, 2009 22:45:39 GMT -5
Cool, then it gave the effect I was going for!
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Post by holleyberry on Nov 8, 2009 23:47:14 GMT -5
I was also thinking when i read it that is was one of your better chapters. Like Jill said, sometimes it just comes together like that.
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Post by Aussie Karima on Nov 9, 2009 6:43:13 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] WOW![/glow] Tina, that was spectacular, all the Honeys in one Chapter,& * Drool* Thomas! YEAH! I was sooooooo missing my puta, I get it back & find some really good stories for me to read!THANK YOU TINA, for your amazing story, I totally loved it..........& it was definitely worth the wait! Now, you have wet my appetite, for more! ;D
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 9, 2009 9:10:48 GMT -5
Thanks Holley, but... I MADE all those things come together. Hey Karima, glad to see you back! Thank YOU for reading the chapter and thanks so much for the wonderful comments! I am so glad you enjoyed it. ;D
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Post by gldkelly on Nov 9, 2009 10:00:08 GMT -5
When are you going to fork out some more? Must no what happens to Shannan!!! Great chapter Tina. I had to laugh when it looked like Thomas was picking his nose! Sasha is an excitable little vixen isn't she! I can't wait to see what Ella does when she gets out of the trouble she's in! Awesome Chapter, I can't believe 12 will be the last one. Your story line has so much involved that there's no way you can accomplish it in only one more chapter! ;D Hint, Hint!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Nov 9, 2009 10:31:16 GMT -5
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Post by valpre1983 on Nov 9, 2009 12:13:50 GMT -5
Am I too late to say WOW? Tina this was truly amazing. I have just spent what I consider to be one of the best 30 minutes of my life reading Chapter 11. I was blown away by your picture quality and it's like Karima said, all the HOTTIES in one chapter...that's a bonus. Is it me, or is Thomas getting more ravishing in each chapter? Shannon is one lucky girl...all these HOT men fawning all over her. Wow, I see the plot is thickening with Donovan and Thomas; I can't wait to see where you take it. Louis seems much more cruel now, and I'm not sure if I like him at all. He's one man I wouldn't want to cross. Again, awesome chapter and the next chapter is out soon soon!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 9, 2009 17:04:52 GMT -5
Thank you so much, everyone! I have to say that I am the one who's blown away by all your awesome comments. I was hoping to make this chapter a good one, but by your reactions, I guess it turned out better than good. As for the picture quality, that is not really my doing, except for a bit of brightness control now and then, but due to the fact that I'm lucky enough to have kick-butt graphics card! Of course, the creative editing is all me. As for a sequel . . . NO WAY, NO HOW! The story is SO done! Stick a fork in it because it is done! Just watch me wrap everything up in a nice, neat little nutshell in the upcoming chapter. Chances are I will miss them when it's done though. *sniff* lol Every story must have a beginning, a middle, and an end. This one is definitely nearing the finish line. The ONLY way it will keep going is if some big Hollywood producer offers me a bunch of money to make it into a soap opera! ;D Thank you again... so much... everyone. You guys are simply the best!
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Post by Crissy on Nov 9, 2009 23:34:30 GMT -5
Wow Mom that was really great! I'm looking forward to the next chapter...
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Post by gldkelly on Nov 10, 2009 12:12:22 GMT -5
@ Tina!!! Stick a fork in it? I haven't heard that in a while! Alright " Holleywood!" At least us stay at home moms will get a good soap out of it!!
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Post by jillyson on Nov 10, 2009 21:40:57 GMT -5
I might have to quit my job and stay home to watch that soap! Lol!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 10, 2009 21:43:05 GMT -5
Y'all crack me up! ;D Aww, thanks Crissy!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Nov 11, 2009 3:11:24 GMT -5
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Post by joandsarah on Nov 11, 2009 8:43:31 GMT -5
My goodness, even I would watch a vampire show if it was written by Tina. ;D
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Post by gldkelly on Nov 11, 2009 16:12:32 GMT -5
@ Everybody!! Well Tina thats the verdict!! It's a must. Now Holleywood, you better get started!
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