Villa Le Duvall

[jillyson]

And don't forget poor Gabriella's hair, frizzing away in that dungeon! Lol! Harley needs to design you a computer and chair that tilts to prevent swelling feet...Go, Harley!!!

[Tina ☺]

[holleyberry]

Oh my! That was well worth waiting for!

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Poor Gabrielle. Louis has messed with her mind so much she is blaming Donovan for her situation even though he saved her life!. I hope the damage, physical and mental, isn't permanent.

I am glad Lucinda is starting to take a more ACTIVE role in trying to straighten up this mess. If anyone can solve this problem, it's her! She is so strong and compassionate. She would be a great leader for that family.

Donovan and Sasha are getting a bit closer. I hope they can find happiness with each other.

Great cliff hanger with Shannon!!!!

[Tina ☺]

Thanks Holley! I'm so happy you liked it! ;D I really tried to get a bit more into 'the meat' of the story this time as well. I figure it's time to start answering a few questions and wrapping some things up.

[joandsarah]

Well I did have a reply typed out on the other thread but that has gone.
So great job! Nail biting as always and you leave us on another cliff hanger! For some reason I thought this was the last chapter!
I pm'd you the typos.

[Tina ☺]

LOL! I'm sorry. All I saw there was "I'm the first am off to read!" You must have been editing when I was deleting.

Thanks Jo, I'm glad you like it! Thanks for pointing out the typos you found! I HATE Word for not catching things like that! I guess that's what I get for sort of rushing to get it out and then not proof reading quite enough.

Whatch wanna bet that someone else will point out some more junk that we missed.

[joandsarah]

I thought you might appreciate those typos so you could fix them up pronto. But I'm sure we all know what is meant and stick the word in anyway. Now you should go to your simpage and put up a link..maybe we will get some new members.

[Tina ☺]

Yeah, I was planning on doing that for anyone who follows, but doesn't come here. I don't that equals too many though.

Hehe.. you should brag up my stories to those folks you know who're not members. You know... about how horror really isn't your thing, but you can't resist reading mine?

Someday, I think I will link to them on LJ... just in case some few folks are looking for a decent read.

[joandsarah]

Well I have said on my credit line on my stories about your stories. But maybe not for awhile. I'll do it this time (See pm)

[Tina ☺]

That's good because I need all the exposure I can get!

[joandsarah]

Your stories should be way more popular Tina, people just don't know about them.

[Tina ☺]

Awww, thanks Jo!

[jillyson]

WOW. WOW. And, uh...WOW! That was amazing, Tina! I loved everything about this chapter! And, I just have to say...

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Go Thomas, it's your birthday! Go Thomas, it's your birthday! Lol!
I love how the other DuValls finally gathered the wagons - it's about time, peeps! Lol!

I really think this is one of the best chapters you've written!
And that "blooper" at the end was hysterical!!!

More more more!!!!

[Tina ☺]

Aww, thanks Jill! I am thrilled that you enjoyed it! You know, I was also thinking that this may have been my best chapter yet...lol. I'm glad to know I'm not the only one who thought so.

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And yeah... I've had that meeting in my head for a LONG time now. As I told told Jo earlier, I actually have the whole rest of the story, roughly, in my head now. Soon, we will see the light at the end of tunnel!

Thanks so much for reading and for the wonderful comments! ;D

[jillyson]

It just has so many wonderful elements - they all came together in exactly the right way. That's a rare thing, but when it happens, it's magic!