Chapter Ten is UP!

[joandsarah]

"slung off some words about Joe Blow" ROTFLMAO!

See that, I can put down a line that makes you laugh, without even trying, while you put down lines that intrigue. Individual style, ain't it great. ;D

[Tina ☺]

Yes. Yes it is! Well, at least I got off one line in my chapter you found amusing, even if it was Louis who said it!

[joandsarah]

Actualy I think there were two. I found some of that Elle stuff at the end amusing as well. I'm warped.

[Tina ☺]

You found Ellie's scene... amusing? Hehe.... it was fun for me to write, but I didn't know anyone would find it amusing.

[joandsarah]

I don't know, the whole brother sister fighting thing even if she doesn't know it. Plus the I look terrible and can I fluff your pillow bit made me chuckle.

Ok for whatever reason I don't see any change to the toddler pics and it still says 3.89 even though I have clicked that rating 5 times.

P.S I also went and rated your page at a 5. It's down to 4. That didn't seem to help either. Sometimes I don't think the rating thing over there works. I'll try again later.

[Tina ☺]

Thanks Jo, but my page has always been a four. There is NO change to the toddler pics. I said to READ the toddler scene. The text is what I changed.

[snazzyhack]

Tina, I loved it! By the time I finished reading, I felt like, wait, this didn't have enough pages... then I realized how engrossed I was in reading it. :-D Sorry I haven't been here enough, I have been a busy mama. I have missed this forum! Do yawl have facebook?

[Tina ☺]

Hey Snazzy! Like I said in another thread, it's great to see you! ;D I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Something really stupid happened the other day when I was trying to make some edits and it got deleted somehow. Then it wouldn't just reupload, so I had to go through all the crap of reorganizing it and putting the text back into place. It's a darn good thing I had saved a copy so all I had to do was copy and paste the text back...lol But... it was one helluva a job! Ack! Then it lost the five-star rating it had gained and I had to ask everyone to rate again. LOL What a hassle! Anyway...

I don't have facebook, but I do have a MySpace... which I rarely ever check. My girls have gotten onto me about it because they'll leave me comments to which I never reply because I don't go there. I spent most of my online time right here. Chances are if you pop in and don't see me, I'll be here shortly.

[Sarie]

Oh my gosh!

That was GREAT! I want more! Seriously you have one heck of a creative mind.

[Tina ☺]

Hey thanks Sarie! I appreciate you saying so because it sometimes actually 'hurts' my poor old brain to conjure up this stuff.

[Sarie]

Take some advil and crank out those stories!

I really do enjoy your writing, and you as a person. To say the least, you are a great inspiration to not only me but to everyone who followed you to this place.

[Tina ☺]

Awwww... *sniff*.... I don't know what to say to that, Sarie. Thank you. That was such a sweet thing to say.

Tylenol is my drug of choice, so I'll pop a handful get busy!

[Aussie Karima]

;)Tina, I finally finished reading your new CH yesterday morning, but every time I went to leave a'Pat on the back!' something else distracted me, but here I is! that was awesome ,I love the tension going on in so many levels, & as I said in another thread Thomas will always win my heart, though he did come across as being a bit of a wimp lately, but I think he may have something up his sleeve ???Can not wait to find out what!

[Tina ☺]

Thank you Karima! I don't if Thomas is really 'up to' anything or not...lol. I just knew I needed to give Jilly her 'Thomas Chapter' and this was what I came up with for it.

I do have lots of ideas floating around in my empty skull though. Hopefully I'll be putting them to words soon.

[Aussie Karima]

;)Tina you would not tell me,even if he was! RIGHT! but, I, do agree with Jill he is hot! even if he is a bunch of pixels!