Chapter Ten is UP!

[maegnas]

wow I missed that one, I'm going to read that RIGHT NOW! (lucky me has no school this afternoon so it is perfect ) I'll come back later to say what I thought of it

[Tina ☺]

Yay! I'm glad you're able to read it now. I'm DYING to know what you think!

[maegnas]

already posted it in the good thread and what I wrote is kinda far from what I think. I mean I am thrilled right now and all rated 5 stars I forgot to tell you that

[Tina ☺]

Hey that's cool! Thanks Mae! So, how is what you wrote different from what you think. I want to know what you really think!

[maegnas]

I know what I want to say but I can't find the good words. I hate it when things like that happen But I think I did it well in the other thread. Yes I think I finally found what I wanted to express

[Tina ☺]

Yes... you did very well! I'm just glad everyone is enjoying it. I swear I was scared to death that everyone would find it boring or something.

[maegnas]

I say you worry too much because your story is so interesting it's impossible to stop reading it. Well that's not true because we have to stop because you didn't finish it yet hehe but I remember when I read an immortal's dream I had to unglue myself from the comp because it was hard

[Tina ☺]

It sucks to have to stop when you wanna know what happens next, doesn't it? lol That's the way it is with these sims stories though, unfortunately. *whispers* Now I need to figure out what happens next so I can tell you...

And... thank you! I'm just a worrier and just can't help myself. Maybe I don't give myself enough credit. I don't know.

Wow... you even liked 'An Immortal's Dream' that much? That one was a lot of fun to write, even though it took me two years to completely finish it...lol

[maegnas]

I'd say it's not your finest maybe but yeah I really loved it. Poor Ludwig I really felt sorry for him! it was sweet, funny and interesting to read

[Tina ☺]

Yea, it was my first real sims story. I had no clue what I was doing at first and a lot of it was mostly me playing the game and taking pics. I didn't start posing the pics until the last few chapters. Also I goofed at first and left some walls down in the pics, etc. I liked the story too, but the REAL stuff didn't begin until 'Shadows Linger'.

I got that one out quickly because I pretty much had the WHOLE story in my head before I ever started writing it. All I had to do was add in some little extra details to make complete, but I knew how it was going to begin and end.. almost. The ending actually changed slightly a few times before I decided on the final ending.

[maegnas]

When I started to read your stories Shadows was already over so I didn't have to wait hehe

[joandsarah]

I swear I was scared to death that everyone would find it boring or something.

But Tina you're such a good writer. Even in that help thread you just slung down some words about Joe Blow and we all found it good
So how much better is something you gave thought too. I wish I could write half as good as that.

I probably didn't leave a very good comment. I find it hard to comment on plotty stuff. Having the power go of half way didn't help.
Like Mae

I know what I want to say but I can't find the good words.

[Tina ☺]

"slung off some words about Joe Blow" ROTFLMAO!

Maybe I'll have to write a short story to let y'all know what happens with Ol' Joe....

Well, thanks for the compliment. *blush* I'm just happy you guys are enjoying the story. ;D

[maegnas]

wouldn't it be nice if we had the power to show people what we mean by only thinking of it?? gosh I wouldn't have to say clumsy things hehe I know, I live in my little fantasy world

[Tina ☺]

Knowing my luck, I'd up letting them see the things I'd rather keep to myself as well.