A Cop's Legacy

[darkenedfantasy]

I've only just read the first chapter of your legacy, and I must say, I'm envious of your storytelling. I love the narrative voice you've chosen for this legacy, with all the detail involved and whatnot. I'm excited to read more about this family and getting all caught up. ^_^

[NoReins]

Thanks! Feel free to leave comments on my LJ on the chapters. I'm always looking for tips or comments about the characters, etc. They're great encouragement to continue the legacy.

[darkenedfantasy]

All caught up, and my comments and suggestions are on lj~

[NoReins]

Guess what? Here's another chapter update! I'm half way through the second generation. ;D This is the farthest I've made it in a legacy before. I'm pretty stoked about it.

Follow the link below for chapter 2.5:
noreins94.livejournal.com/3913.html

[NoReins]

Here's another chapter for everyone to enjoy. I feel like this one isn't my best, but hopefully suits as a transition chapter. There's 2 more chapters until the heir vote and a spare update and final chapter where the heir will be announced for the 3rd generation.

noreins94.livejournal.com/4149.html

Feel free to comment here or on my LJ with any constructive criticism, questions, etc. They're much appreciated.

[NoReins]

One more chapter until the heir vote! Well, after this chapter anyway.

noreins94.livejournal.com/4562.html

[joandsarah]

Reading and catching up!

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Oh my gosh Dakota went from plump and ordinary to a ripped hunk! I didn't know they could do that. Gee, sure wish I could have a birthday and lose weight like that! Pays to never pick before they age to young adult.Elijah doesn't seem interested in being heir even if he did get a girl friend first, so I'm guessing you want one of the two elder boys picked?

Can I vote now? I'm voting for Dakota, and not just because he's ripped. he seems nice and responsible.

[NoReins]

Jo, thanks for your comment!

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Elijah's interested. He's the middle child. Forrest is the youngest and not quite so interested in continuing the legacy. But his sweet girlfriend would make a wonderful momma and as you'll see in the next chapter Dakota may not be completely fit to be an heir...but I'll leave you guessing on that one!

[NoReins]

Here's the second to last generation two chapter of A Cop's Legacy! I'm freaking out with excitement that I've made it this far.

noreins94.livejournal.com/4949.html

[esmeiolanthe]

I voted over on LJ, but I'll comment here. Just because.

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Uh-oh, a love triangle! That's not good.

Uh-oh, TWO love triangles! With the same person in both of them! I can see why you said "trouble." Now, how is this ever going to get resolved?

Fun chapter!

[NoReins]

Thanks Esme! I'm not really sure how I'm going to pull off the resolution of these issues...didn't think that one through.

Also, for all readers, anyone curious about what happened to Aly and Bennett? Here's a spare update! noreins94.livejournal.com/5587.html

[amylu1988]

Hi NoReins, I'm all caught up now, sorry it's taken so long!

I've left my comments on LJ so I can see what I've read, hope that's ok. Looking forward to seeing who your heir will be!

[NoReins]

Hey, sorry to disappoint everyone whose been reading this legacy but due to my lack of interest in the story as well as busy college schedule from this past semester I've decided to discontinue the legacy. I'm hoping to possibly start a new one that will actually hold my interest and if anyone has some tips for that I'd love to hear them.

Happy Simming,
NoReins94

[joandsarah]

We understand. I have lots of unfinished things that I have no time or motivation for any longer myself. Moving this to the dead story area.