Amelia Leigh
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Nightmares are dreams too.[ss:Luscious Lavender ]
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Post by Amelia Leigh on Dec 8, 2012 23:56:23 GMT -5
The name is a work in progress. It might change or it might not. It's new. Just started it today. Read the introduction and tell me what you think, please and thank you. "Forest Smith has a questionable past with an even more questionable heightened sense of the mind. As her oncoming mistakes tackle her and force her to remain put in the dark, will she ever learn to turn her curse into a gift?" Not too sure of the genre of the story. I know there'll be drama. And I know there'll be romance. But it's not going to be particularly centered around those two things. I like to mix it up with my stories a lot. Introduction: ameliacorneredsims3.blogspot.com/2012/12/cornered-introduction.htmlAll Sims made by me. I didn't use any premade models, so if you like them, I'll consider finding a way to put 'em up for auction It's short. But I want to know what people think :3
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amylu1988
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Post by amylu1988 on Dec 9, 2012 11:50:56 GMT -5
I like your writing style, and it's an interesting plot, too! When you say she has heightened senses, do you mean hearing, sight, etc, or emotions as well? It's definitely a great start, and I'm looking forward to seeing what's next.
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Amelia Leigh
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Nightmares are dreams too.[ss:Luscious Lavender ]
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Post by Amelia Leigh on Dec 9, 2012 13:31:16 GMT -5
Thank you! (: And as far as heightened sense go, she's empathic. She can sense people's character just by looking at them. She does not know their thoughts, but in the way of feelings she's very sensitive to. Also auras or "vibes". So she is emotionally heightened to things around her, and later in the story you'll come to find out that because of this she may not make very well decisions and will sooner or later find out how her emotions had created her downfall. Working on chapter two.
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