acid
Studious Secretary
[M0:17][ss:Black/Purple]
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Post by acid on Aug 8, 2011 3:59:48 GMT -5
I start reading the first three chapters and I can tell that this is going to be one interesting story. You really grabbed my attention from the first chapter.
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Post by symphony on Aug 11, 2011 4:34:02 GMT -5
Thanks Acid!
I am so thrilled everytime I see a new reader - I'm glad you liked it - thanks for taking the time to read it.
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Post by symphony on Aug 23, 2011 4:02:06 GMT -5
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jillyson
Diligent Librarian 
Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Aug 25, 2011 20:59:21 GMT -5
Man, this looks like trouble! I love her new look, but picking up a stranger and then going home with him...so dangerous! And what if he isn't a bad guy - the way she's already attatched herself in her mind to him.
It would be wonderful if this turns out to be a good thing, but with him watching her for hours, I'm afraid she looked like easy pickin's - there alone, looking to get drunk.
She clearly needs to keep seeing her doc, and I hope she makes an appointment soon!
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Post by symphony on Aug 26, 2011 1:37:08 GMT -5
Jilly ;D you're back! You're so right. What Annabella is doing is very dangerous - getting all liquored up and going home with a stranger goes against everything you're mother told you not to do - (except for Annabella's mom of course) - in any event common sense should tell her this is probably not a good idea.
Let's hope he is one of the good ones though and doesn't end up taking advantage of her - Thanks for reading! |
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Post by symphony on Aug 29, 2011 2:00:25 GMT -5
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amylu1988
Diligent Librarian
Keeper of the Psychologists
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Post by amylu1988 on Aug 29, 2011 4:31:51 GMT -5
All caught up, awesome stuff Symphony! ;D I love all the twists and turns in this, the absolute lows to the unexpected happiness in the new chapter. Oh the irony of Chris being from the narcotics bureau, perfectly placed to help her. He's a great character, and would be wonderful to help Annabella through the next stages of her life. All her back story made so much sense and it was all shot beautifully in your game! I get the feeling her father might be back though, trying to get her out of town before his election campaign. Lets hope he doesn't cause as much grief for her as her mother did! And aw, Graeme. They left it just that little bit too late, everything seemed to happen at the wrong time for them, her being too young to move with them, him coming back already engaged then seeing her...let's hope Chris can sort out her love life for her!  Great story Symphony, sorry it's taken me so long to catch up. |
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Post by symphony on Aug 29, 2011 5:59:03 GMT -5
Hey Amylu! ;D
I'm glad you liked it and thanks for taking the time to catch up - I know how difficult it is sometimes to keep on top of your most favourite stories - there are so many to read
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Post by symphony on Sept 12, 2011 7:34:18 GMT -5
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