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Post by 11daisies on Apr 23, 2011 10:50:02 GMT -5
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Post by daijahv on Apr 23, 2011 14:03:35 GMT -5
Quick note: To remove their thought bubbles, enter the cheat console by ctrl+shift+c and type: hideheadlineeffects on It also gets rid of the green plumbob.  Off to read Chapter 2: OMG that was sad! That is just a horrible chain of events for them  A promotion, a beautiful little girl, a move to the country they married in and then tragedy struck HARD! I can't believe they lost their son! It's just terrible. David is a very strong man to be able to mend his family after that. He is really taking on a lot of responsibility and not wearing his heart on his sleeve just so he can be there for them when they need! I'd be a wreck and I love him for that. Poor Alissa has no idea she lost her little brother either. That was just awful! With that said, you did an incredible job! I love this story. Your writing is vivid and emotional and I can't wait to see what happens to them on this island! That was some intense stuff with that cruise ship! Great job! Chapter 3: WOW! Yep...that's it WOW!!! You're very talented! The way these two have built their lives on the island is remarkable! I'm so happy Alana was able to heal finally and wanted to continue growing their family! That was great to see! There are alot of A names  I love "Aidan" though, very nice name! I'm glad David has a son to carry on his name though I am still sad about Jr. Their home is gorgeous and I love the way you decorated (the furniture especially looks great!) But then I read this: ...that was very ominous!!! The poor family has been through so much and sadly there is more in store! This story is edge of your seat already and I am loving it to bits! Great job again!! I can't wait for more! P.S. Is there a name you prefer being called? I feel kinda weird calling you 11, Hmm Eleven...maybe El. Ok nevermind, I'm calling you El  |
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Post by 11daisies on Apr 23, 2011 21:39:18 GMT -5
daijahv
I keep forgetting to remove those thought bubbles! I'm glad you like Alana and David's journey. I"ll post the next two chapters tomorrow. Calling me El is fine. LOL
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Post by daijahv on Apr 23, 2011 21:51:54 GMT -5
Two chapters more tomorrow really? Wow you work fast! I can't wait to see what's hidden on that island! David said they were alone, but somehow I REALLY doubt that's the case! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 24, 2011 2:14:47 GMT -5
Ch. 1 I just started this and it was a great read. I like that David stood up for her when that guy kept harassing her. But wow, to get married straight out of high school? They are so young. Now I understand the title of the story. Love def endures. Or does it? LOL. Going to check out Ch. 2 now.
BTW, Alana is such a beautiful sim. Ch. 2 Wow, that's so sad what they went through, losing their baby like that and being stranded Lord knows where. I hope David's employers are at least looking for him, they must have had his travel itinerary?
Alissa is such a cute baby! Ch. 3 Beautiful. The house looks amazing. I’m thrilled they seem to be adjusting to life on the island. What beautiful babies they have too. |
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Post by jillyson on Apr 24, 2011 10:55:58 GMT -5
That twist was just mind-blowing!
What looked like a nice, "high school sweethearts fall in love" story did a complete 180! These two are so great for each other, and the life they built on the island is just amazing! Your set building skills are as good as your writing - and that's saying ALOT!!!
The kiddies are so sweet, and I'm glad they were able to move on and have another child after the loss of David Jr. It was reall cool that he gave his name to his lost son. *sniff
As for your ominous last line - I can't wait to find out if they'll find trouble from other inhabitants of the island, or in the form of someone else discovering it by sea!
I love this story!!!
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Post by 11daisies on Apr 24, 2011 14:25:49 GMT -5
Freedom, I've played that couple before. They always have the prettiest babies. I'm glad you liked their house. I tried to remember that they were castaways, but I always end up over decorating. Thanks for reading! Jillyson, I had a hard time deciding where to take the story next, but then when I saw the first picture posted in Chapter 4, I couldn't resist. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Any suggestions are appreciated. I have posted Chapter 4 11daisies.wordpress.com/123-2/ Chapter 5 11daisies.wordpress.com/chapter-5/ |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Apr 24, 2011 20:14:41 GMT -5
 Ch 4 ~ Wow,this guy has Alana in knots! ~ And playing with her mind like that, after the tragedy they just endured,may just push her over the edge! ~ I finally caught up with this,I saw it posted on DD’s,but was in the middle of doing a few things at once,lol! but now that is sorted,I can catch up on stories I have neglected! ~ Long story,short, I will be back for more! loved it BTW!(“,) ;)Ch 5 ~ At least Alana has figured him out, and the memories,so she will be fine,if she can just out-smart him! ~ David,is, understandably upset,but at least he should know that that thing would not hurt Alana! that she is safe,for now! ~ I can understand his confusion! ~ More please!(“,)
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Post by 11daisies on Apr 25, 2011 10:04:25 GMT -5
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Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 25, 2011 11:35:14 GMT -5
Hey Daisy! May I call you that instead of 11daisies? I am way behind on my current reading and haven't begun any new stories yet, but I have noticed you haven't been adding your links to the first post in this thread... You should ALWAYS add your links to the first post so that they will be easier for people to find because they will, eventually, get lost in the pages of comments within the body of the thread. I will go ahead and do it for you this time, but please remember to add the chapters to the first post as you have them ready in the future. Hopefully by the time I am starting to read more new stories, and I get around to yours, I will find all the chapters ready and waiting for me in the first post. I really am looking forward to getting around to reading it someday. |
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Post by 11daisies on Apr 25, 2011 21:37:28 GMT -5
Thanks Tina,
I'll make sure I start posting updates up front!
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Post by jillyson on Apr 26, 2011 19:25:19 GMT -5
I'm behind again - I read ch's 4 and 5 and commented on your blog, but
Tarquin - how intriguing! I just love this story and all the completely unexpected twists! I'm glad to see her fighting his influence, but I wonder how long she'll be able to do it?
And poor David - he can't put the kids in danger by coming after her - he must be beside himself! I can't wait to see what he's going to do - he doesn't seem like the sit around and wait kind of guy. I'm at a complete loss as to a plan.
I'll get the next chapters at lunch tomorrow!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Apr 26, 2011 21:12:13 GMT -5
Just call me Karima! And sorry my replies are short,I'm handy capped at the moment!lol! 
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Post by jillyson on Apr 28, 2011 20:11:03 GMT -5
Finally all caught up!
I'm so relieved! I was afraid David would be too late! Sounds like Tarquin got the end he deserved. I'm so happy Alana gets to come home to her family. I can't wait to see what other surprises the island has in store for them!
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Post by 11daisies on Apr 29, 2011 13:56:23 GMT -5
Jillyson,
I'm glad you got caught up. I started on Chapter 8, but my laptop is acting up. So Chapter 8 is delayed.
Thank you so much for answering my question about spoilers.
Hopefully, I can post an update next week!
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