The Taylor's Random Legacy - Updated 4/18/11!

[joandsarah]

Took awhile to find, might have helped if I had checked the TS3 legacy board instead of the TS2 one. Had some trouble seeing the text for the second update, it's kind of sitting over the picture.

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I had a laugh at Lilly-Bo Chique lol she sure is colourful and stuck up to by the looks of it. I think a paper bag over her head might be a better look.

I agree they do look much more alike after Maria had her hair cut.

Good going on the garden, my TS3 gardens don't fair nearly so well.

I'll be looking out for the next chapter.

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Wow, thanks Jillyson , you even cleaned it up some too!!

As for the poofreading post, yes i found it, but i haven't posted there yet. I want to wait until I'm finished typing out chapter 3 before asking for proofreading help.

joandsarah That garden has Maria exhausted all the time, and bound to the house. Hard work, but once the harvest starts coming in its well worth it.
I just had to get a picture of Lilly-Bo. Even though Bella doesn't see much in her, i rather like her. She is so bold to come out of the house with so many colors on. lol

Thanks for the comments and critiques everyone. It was much needed and would love to hear more advice.

Next chapter I plan to take my time giving more details for each screenshot, and adding more dialog to bring the characters to life.