holleyberry
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 22, 2011 12:43:51 GMT -5
Warm: I can't wait to see the baby! What a perfect time for her to go into labor. LOL! Krisis is too funny. He seems more worried about Michaela's boyfriend then her own Dad! Looks like Devon is never going to be okay with Leigh wanting to become a vampire. At least he seems open minded about his future niece and nephew. And now he's going to be a father! Cold: Trust your instincts Devon! Don't let that bitch get your baby! Shade: The woman is mentally disturbed and very dangerous. You have done such a good job showing us that Freedom. I really hope she doesn't pull it off, but she's just crazy enough to do it I'm afraid. Holiday: OMG! OMG! OMG! I knew she'd pull it off! Some how I knew the crazy woman would do it! The only hope is that both Devon and Eloise felt like something is/was wrong. I'm sure they will figure out who took him quickly! Argh! I don't have time to read anymore! So upset!
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 22, 2011 12:53:05 GMT -5
DJ, your comments always leave me speechless. But speechless good. Yeah, sorry about the ambush, but I seriously didn't see the point in prolonging the inevitable end *evil smile* Warm: Yeah, I've never been more proud of Dev than in this prompt. As much as he wanted to have it out with Leigh, he held back. He's right too, no point in getting agitated on "what ifs". Chances are Krisis might not ever turn Leigh Def, it will be hard for him to let her go. LOL, Krisis is really warming up to his role as daddy dearest. I'm hoping the next season Krisis and Michaela's relationship will be shown more. And he's killed before, he won't hesitate for his kids. Cold: I think everyone wanted to make Devon turn around and take a long good look again. He'll trace everything back to that moment when everything comes undone. Outside: LOL. I think you should have waited till you got home. Mhh, I should have put up a warning Shade: Words of doom. I couldn't have said it better. At least he got to hold his son Holiday: Nah, Tamsyn's worked so hard to get to where she is, she wasn't about to ruin it over some offish comment. Besides, her revenge is much, much sweeter. Revenge is really a dish best served cold. Spring: LOL. Wish I could say next Season is in the works, but I've got a block. Can't write. Can't think. I'm brain dead. So while I'm waiting to get back into writing, I'll be taking a hiatus or working on Fallen.
LOL. Your response to that quote made me laugh. Go get 'em tiger. Grrrrr! Overall: LOL. You and your books . Oooh, I hope not too overly complicated you want to hide under the chair in embarrassment for me? Did that even make sense? Hey, lay off on the pressure I haven't even started thinking about Season 3, if it wasn't for all your guys' ideas I wouldn't have anything to work with. Oh, come on, Tam isn't that bad. She's just misunderstood that's all. Crazy people deserve a chance too Thank you. I'm glad you liked Season 2 and the web of lives. At one point I was getting so scared there were too many characters and too many threads going on at once. "Top Seller", NOT. Still have a long, long way to go. Still have to work on my imagery and descriptions and prose and nice lines. All the best sellers are made of. You know, when I wrote that "Warm" prompt, I kept thinking about the Last Supper. But your description fits better. It def was the calm before the storm, and I'm so thrilled you picked up on that irony with later prompts. It was intended to be sort of like an omen of bad things to come. And that was actually the first time all the main characters were in one room, with the exception of Tamsyn and Beau. They should have such get together often. The next one will be at Krimsyn and JD's penthouse! Damn, I never thought of that. Now you scared me, but she'd better not go do something stupid. JD will kill somebody if his daughter gets into things she has no business getting into. You sound like you enjoy Devon's "future rage". I hope he doesn't disappoint. But Tamsyn will wish she hadn't taken Blake if and when she gets caught. Krisis and Leigh do seem to be in sync now, it seems having that blowout helped their lines of communication. Mhh, parenthood, *cringes*, I'm not really looking forward to that I foresee lots of diaper changes in their future. No, thank you
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 22, 2011 13:18:15 GMT -5
Spring: Oh Hell No you didn't! You get your butt back in front of that computer right now Missy and start writing! Don't make me come over there.
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Post by qui on Mar 22, 2011 14:03:18 GMT -5
I 'm here Jilly but I am still laughing over Krisis and the "Mickey Mouse" comment! He couldn't have picked a worse time to say that!!! That is stuck in my head so heavy and for good reason.
I'm with Holley on that, Krisis was more concerned about them getting touchy-feely than her parents. I wonder if it's because they're ok with this young man...
PMing you Free!!
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Post by nygirl on Mar 22, 2011 14:19:22 GMT -5
I left all my comments on the prompts and didn't want a long list of comments for you to reply to so with that said you know how I feel about the last handful of prompts!Just as I thought that this story couldn't get any better...It did!
The second season was even more intense than the first. And if the past two seasons are any indication of how the third season will go...I might have to strap myself to the chair and duct tape my mouth shut before everyone in my house really thinks I have gone insane!
Excellent job Val, can not wait to begin reading season three!
Hope all is going well on the home front...
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Post by daijahv on Mar 22, 2011 14:41:47 GMT -5
Um Ny...would they not think you were insane if you duct taped your mouth strapped to a chair? Interesting but I share the sentiment Qui I just messaged her too! I wonder if it was the same idea?!
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Post by jillyson on Mar 22, 2011 18:32:40 GMT -5
Ladies, If the idea was to make her write a huge police raid for Tamsyn and a happy reunion for Blake, mommy & daddy, then PM away!!!!
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Post by dblondepimpett on Mar 22, 2011 19:39:56 GMT -5
eeek!!!!!!!! You need to start on the next table!!!!
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Post by nygirl on Mar 22, 2011 23:47:52 GMT -5
Um Ny...would they not think you were insane if you duct taped your mouth strapped to a chair? Interesting but I share the sentiment They are going to think I am insane either way, at least my neighbors wouldn't' begin to wonder as I am shouting out loud about babies being stolen and hot vampires
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Post by daijahv on Mar 23, 2011 5:44:32 GMT -5
LOL so true
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Post by sweetdreams25 on Mar 23, 2011 12:18:40 GMT -5
loved the updates! Warm well devon definitely surprised me with his reaction. im glad he was mature about it and didn't start an argument. brothers are awesome...sometimes lol. aint that perfect timing! she just got done talking about how she's gonna miss being pregnant then BAM. here comes baby Cold oh crap...after all these happy updates i forgot about psycho lady! i feel eloise's pain...well if i was going thru labor i would feel her pain. you know what i mean! lol Outside ya know...she's really pretty like that. BUT STILL CRAZY! i hope he catches on before its too late Shade man i HOPE someone catches her! this crazy lady is really gonna try to steal their baby she needs some serious help with that brain of hers. Holiday ((((((((( i can't believe she actually did it! this better be a dream! Spring >:\ im so mad she got away with the baby. in a way i could kina feel for her when the woman asked about the baby. for all she knew it was adopted, but at the same time i hate tamsyn! she stole someone's child!! i cant wait for her to be caught!
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 24, 2011 3:47:20 GMT -5
Oh dear, I'm so behind with comments, I've replied to most though on Blogger, and all the ones left on the final prompt have been responded to. I just wanted to thank everyone for all your feedback, support, and encouragement throughout season 2 I know it didn't end on a good note, most likely left a bitter taste in your mouths, and your heads spinning, but the fact that you all still managed to leave me feedback, has left me speechless. You are all awesome, so thank you again. Season 3 is still an idea, nothing solid yet, haven't even begun outlining it. RL has taken so many dramatic turns, I find myself with less computer time and honestly I'm exhausted, so I'll be taking it easy for a few days
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Post by daijahv on Mar 24, 2011 6:37:11 GMT -5
Take care of yourself first, we all understand <3 I wish you the best Besides imagination is funny. At this time I am watching Tamsyn's face frying on the grill at a local diner and being served up to a few stray dogs! BTW I remembered you were looking for dreads a while back, I don't know if you ever found any but in my quest for Christopher's ideal hair I came across a few at DP: (I think the first is JD'S)
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 24, 2011 6:45:43 GMT -5
OMG I love the 3rd one, is there a retexture?
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Post by daijahv on Mar 24, 2011 6:59:55 GMT -5
Not that I found, it was originally created by Nouk and posted on Skeletal Screams, but I don't see the other files for it sorry
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