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Post by holleyberry on Mar 17, 2011 11:27:34 GMT -5
Inside: Looks like Devon isn't going to like the idea of Leigh being a vampire :(He's going to be FURIOUS when he finds out his sister craves his blood. Can you just imagine that conversation? Eeks! Qui is right, Leigh looks AWFUL! Of course I wish my stomach was "slightly swollen" like hers  LOL! Fear: I should make my comment before I read everyone elses because now I feel i'll just be a broken record.
I agree with Jill that Devon is NOT going to like this.
I also worry about Leigh, because Krisis is right, she's barely handling the pregnancy well now and she's only 4 weeks along. What happens when the twins (*squee* TWINS!) put too much starin on her body.
Hopefully now that they know what the problem is she can manage her health a little better. She should stay away from humans though. If she's not careful she's liable to hurt someone with her blood lust.
Great update!
I am glad to see there's some happy news for these two...for now. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 17, 2011 12:19:00 GMT -5
Beth, I'm glad the summaries helped. But they only cover the story until the prompt titled "Too much", so if you read this update after reading the summaries, the story might not make much sense. But I appreciate the time you took to read this. I'm flattered you feel that way about my work. I try to stick to the 'prompt' theme, but sometimes, no, in fact, most of the time I end up using the word in its literal sense. Thank you for your wonderful comments on here and on blogger. Holley, Inside: Yep. He's not going to be impressed when he finds that out, and her desire to be turned. Oh, El and the baby had better be far away when the siblings have that talk. And Krisis better hope he's on tour too  Success @ making Leigh horrible. LOL. I'm glad the makeup was convincing. She does look bad, eh  Fear: No worries Holley, and please don't feel obligated to leave a long comment if you really have nothing to add. I won't mind True. It's one thing being okay with his sister dating a vampire, it's another to know he'll be uncle to little vampires. It's a conversation that may not end well. Krisis has reason to worry. If it was just one baby she was carrying, it wouldn't have been so bad, but since it's twins it's bound to be brutal. She'll def be staying from humans. Hopefully, as her doctor suggested, plasma fruit and juice will help with her blood lust, or Krisis will have to go hunting full time! Oh, oh, I don't like that "for now", do you know something I don't? What are you not telling me? LOL. Thanks for reading. |
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 17, 2011 12:55:02 GMT -5
Oh, oh, I don't like that "for now", do you know something I don't? What are you not telling me? LOL.
Well, you know there's a crazy woman out to steal a baby!  Oh! Oh! Oh! Wouldn't it be AWESOME if Tamsyn is around during one of Leigh more strong "cravings" and accidently becomes dinner! I LIKE THIS IDEA! |
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Post by sweetdreams25 on Mar 17, 2011 13:09:28 GMT -5
i knew it!! i just knew she had to be preggo. it really sucks though that she has to eat the raw stuff, but hey five months aint that bad...or is it since she's carrying vampire babies. this makes me worry about how her brother will react. he was bout ready to bust some heads at the thought of his sister being turned and now he's gonna have to find out that his nieces and or nephews are part vampire. oh the drama! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 17, 2011 14:26:39 GMT -5
Holley, I like your idea. It made me so hard. You really want Tamsyn dead don't ya  Sweetdreams, Yeah, everyone knew she's pregnant since I put up some picspam of their babies a while back. But even if you didn't see that spam, I guess the signs were very noticeable. Her bloodlust was the big give away Devon will have a lot to take in over the next few chapters, not all of it has to do with his sister Instead of taking shots, this is what I ended up doing... Before  After  Amazing what you can do with lighting effects in Photoshop. Of course most will think it's amateurish, but I love how it turned out, or maybe it's just the model I love the most  |
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 17, 2011 14:45:08 GMT -5
Not necessarily, but it would be a convenient way to get rid of her |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 17, 2011 14:47:42 GMT -5
I'm all for convenience Qui, here's a shot of Leigh and Lily when she autonomously decided to teach her to walk.  They are in Krisis' kitchen. I thought it was so cute. They get along so well. |
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Post by daijahv on Mar 17, 2011 15:00:05 GMT -5
That is adorable!!! Awww I love this! And look at Lily not creeping me out! I need more of these! Close ups on her eyes scare the crap out of me but this is too cute!
And not amateurish! I can show you amateur! I SUCK at photo editing! Hence the overdone CC! I don't want to have to edit an image at all LOL The image looks great a "timeless beauty" sort of image! I love it!
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Post by qui on Mar 17, 2011 15:49:01 GMT -5
Awwwww!! I love that! Glad to know she doesn't look "positively vicious" to Dai anymore LOL Those shots are beautiful! I LOVE Krimsyn! I hope we do see more of her...through an explosive storyline  |
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Post by daijahv on Mar 17, 2011 16:19:45 GMT -5
LOL She is for reals cute in that image it's the closeups where her eyes are burning holes into my flesh that make me not want to snuggle her in my arms! |
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Post by qui on Mar 17, 2011 16:36:25 GMT -5
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! That still cracks me up!
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Post by jillyson on Mar 17, 2011 17:34:27 GMT -5
OK, here's my plot suggestion:
Tamsyn steals wrong baby - gets a tiny Frost. Tiny Frost munches Tamsyn, turning her into a vamp. Realizes her mistake, tries to switch Tiny Fost for Tiny Starlington. Almost gets caught, leaves with ZERO babies but runs into Beau. Beau sees her trying to cause the family turmoil and falls instantly in serious psycho love. Wackiness ensues...
Kidding, but I like the idea of these two hooking up!
I had such a good time reading everyone's hilarious suggestions! (and some, like Tamsyn/Beau and Michaela and Cam that made me go...Yeah...that could work...) Freedom, you'll NEVER be able to end this story! Your fans won't stand for it! Lol! BTW, I'm going to PM you an idea for Krisis & Leigh's "quiet" life. See the can of worms that got opened now? Poor Free is thinking "if one more person gives me a freaking idea that I never asked for..." |
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Post by qui on Mar 17, 2011 18:00:54 GMT -5
Jilly that is INSANE and would absolutely AWESOME!
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Post by jillyson on Mar 17, 2011 18:11:38 GMT -5
Naw, I PM'd her the good one! Lol! (hint William!) LOVE the Leigh/Lily spam. Seeing those two together gives me such joy. |
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Post by sb on Mar 17, 2011 19:12:19 GMT -5
I'm going to back out hard after this note but I wanted to try to clear up what I had read. This is a wonderful forum, some incredible writing and photography, way out of my league!!!
I do think I read it all and I understand. It is a wonderful story!! I wish you all the best, and you should look into publishing it. I think you could, it's that good!
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