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Post by daijahv on Mar 16, 2011 12:47:41 GMT -5
JD/Krimsyn:
You mentioned you are not looking to add too much drama BUT you have to have it! Here are my thoughts for them. The second child would not only cause tension between these two, but also the band. There was mention about Krisis wanting to quit and spend his time with Leigh and Lily, well if Krimsyn were to become pregnant, touring would be a strain on her after a few months and she’d have to take a small hiatus from the group which will open up the ability for Krisis to have a small break and a taste of the simple life also.
JD and Krimsyn’s relationship is great as it is now, but I would love to see JD more (haha this was one of the first things I said to you in the very first comment I ever made about this story) I love the man with the dreads! Hotness needs more face time! He is such a mystery to me. I think a storyline about Michaela becoming a woman would do this just fine too without having to give them more drama with a second kid.
I’d like to see more background on their family, where did he come from? How did they meet? That’s one thing I have made up several scenarios about because I just don’t know lol.
Krisis/Leigh/Lily:
Leigh is about to have a baby! There is soo much I want to see with this I don’t know where to begin! You’ve always gave us so much in Gluttony alone! The demands that baby will have, the constant urge for her to feed and the cravings for blood is enough to drive her insane. I’m going insane thinking about it! I’d love for her to have a child by Krisis because I know that’s what her heart desires. I do worry though about how she’d interact with Lily at the point her baby is born. I trust Leigh not to be an overly doting Mother to her own and ignore Lily but that is still something to think about. I’d hate for little Lily to feel ignored and start acting out THOUGH that could open up new ideas: the life of their vampire child (Lily) as she grows into her abilities and is feeling the need to get attention, what dangers will she bring into their lives because of that?
Krisis and the band, if Krimsyn were to take a break from the band for a second child, he’d have more time to be with Leigh BUT as Qui said there is also the added tension with groupies/paparazzi wanting to get the first shots of he and his new child or his future “bride”. Imagine the drama with another headline reading “Illegitimate Child of Rockstar KIDNAPPED”!
Michaela/Cameron:
I know when I first mentioned them I was thrown BUT that is the exact reaction you should look for! I think this will be an absolutely wonderful read and I would LOVE to see this happen. I can’t say this enough I LOVE LOVE LOVE Michaela and want to see tons of her (now I know how to vote teehee). You created such a wonderful personality in her. I’m dying to see if she has more of her Mom or Dad in her and how she would react to her budding interests and romance with someone close to her. You said that you had an idea about a love interest for her but it wasn’t Cameron, who did you have in mind at that time or is that too big of a spoiler?
Dev/El/Tamsyn:
Kill Tamsyn and let’s move on! But seriously, this Single White Female is nothing but trouble. She’s drama in every sense of the word and then some. I would love to see her on the run with the baby (not really but I would) because I want El to kick the ever loving turdies out of her! Like just bust the crap out of that smug little face and just BOOM! And finally get put in her place, prison, in a woman’s mental institution or something. She needs to be locked away for good. Chad/Blake’s life would be interesting if she were to have him for a few years and he thinks she’s his Mom. I’d hate for this to happen because I don’t want El and Dev to miss out on precious moments, but if this were to take place, seeing baby Blake get readjusted to life with his real parents would make an interesting read.
On the other hand, if he were to be recovered as a baby, we would see if his parents ever told him about the psycho that took him for a few days and how that shaped them being completely OVER protective of him because I can definitely see this happening in that case, especially with Dev! He’d never let the kid out of his sight!
Thornton:
Now I said this before I would LOVE to have him in the twins’ lives! I think they deserve to know the sacrifice he made for them and how he has always cared for them. They were never privy to anything other than the hurt they believed he caused their Mom which in essence left them with abandonment issues when she refused to care for them. I think they deserve the truth about this. And I LOVE how he speaks about Krimsyn. He is obviously VERY obviously a proud Papa. He has grandkids too that he should get to know. He would make a great addition to the main cast. This council being one of them as well…there was talk about him being kicked out because of his biased decisions regarding his kids. I’m right now imagining this guy in combat and if the council tried him, he’d be a VERY worthy opponent not to mention if he were to mend fences with his kids, he’d have them to fight with!
There is more I have questions about but some of it depends on responses of the above.  |
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Post by daijahv on Mar 16, 2011 12:58:03 GMT -5
whoa that was long...sorry
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Post by daijahv on Mar 16, 2011 13:32:40 GMT -5
More thoughts: I was curious behind the reason for your poll. Were you considering not using some characters next season? Were you doing less chapters? I know this wasn’t exactly a choice. You didn’t mention poor Beau at all, but I feel he is far from done. Tamsyn/Thornton/Beau: I changed my mind; I don’t want her to die. I like her and I think she adds an extra bit of tension whenever she’s around (I know I shot myself in the foot once asking about her…but I’m a glutton for punishment). I was thinking that she and Beau could work together. I’d really love to see him in action and unfortunately the council nipped that in the bud BUT: Can you imagine he and the other psycho plotting together to make psychotic plans of psychoticness?!? Every psycho needs a psycho lover! HAHA I wanted to see how much I could use that word before it stopped making sense. I think that if Tamsyn gets caught, she can escape the police and run into Beau and how delicious would it be when the one that caused the death of his brother become his lover and only AFTER that does he learn the truth? What would become of Tamsyn then?! OOoo I can only imagine how horrible he could make her existence. For Thornton’s role in this: This could be the straw that breaks the camels’ back with Thornton and the council. This could be the reason he is finally released from his position with the council. We know Krisis is supposed to be avoiding acting on his urge to murder him for what’s happened and take his revenge, what if it’s Thornton that instead does this on behalf of his child say as a way of proving his love/loyalty to the twins OR because he learns that Beau has not taken to heart what the council said and was plotting to get even with Krisis still and Thornton discovers that plan and tries to intercept! I had just started warming up to the idea of seeing him get his bad in and it was quickly over. I want to see what his mind has been brewing and how that will affect Krisis and Leigh’s search for the simple life because he can easily compel some people to mess with them and try to push Krisis over the edge on a daily basis. For instance the mailman constantly flirting with Leigh causing chaos in the Frost household but the mailman has no idea why he is constantly tempted by her. This could easily translate to a psychotic fan of Krisis, though I wouldn’t need compulsion myself to go after that redhead  |
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Post by qui on Mar 16, 2011 13:39:15 GMT -5
Lol we had to have a private meeting so I could wear her down more!!
Daijah's take on Thorton, I'm with it!! I can see Krisis' reaction now and it wouldn't be a smile!
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Post by daijahv on Mar 16, 2011 13:44:33 GMT -5
Should I have sent mine to PMs? It's too late right now because I can't edit posts at work  I hope I didn't mess anything up... Thornton in comabt is too awesome a thought isn't it Qui? |
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Post by qui on Mar 16, 2011 14:06:01 GMT -5
Their behind the spoiler so you have nothing to worry about. She'll probably PM you since these ideas are so awesome!
Thorton is that guy whose mean, nasty, and rude but turns you on in the process! I could bite him!
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 16, 2011 14:19:11 GMT -5
Not ignoring you guys. Just fighting with Leigh and Krisis. They refuse to cooperate today to take shots for the next prompts  |
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Post by qui on Mar 16, 2011 14:22:56 GMT -5
Deep breath...deep breath
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Post by daijahv on Mar 16, 2011 14:28:36 GMT -5
Put Leigh in a closet and spank Krisis O.o  > |
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Post by daijahv on Mar 16, 2011 22:27:14 GMT -5
Hmm...
Poor JD and Krimsyn and Thornton...not looking very good! I voted for Michaela!
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Leigh, Krisis and their brood
9 (56%)
Devon, Eloise, Tamsyn
4 (25%)
Michaela, Leo, Cameron
3 (18%)
William Thornton and his brood
0 (0%)
J.D. and Krimsyn
0 (0%)
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 17, 2011 1:28:55 GMT -5
DJ, I replied on PM Holley, yeah, the raw meat was out of the ordinary. Something's def up there.
Nah, Krisis wouldn't leave important detail like that. Krisis has never done anything to intentionally hurt Leigh. He's all about making her happy. The only "big" lie was the Council's decision, and that too he has his reasons. But he's not the type to leave out crucial information like that/
There was never a moment's thought on Leigh's part to keep this from Krisis. The reason she didn't tell him much sooner is because he was on tour, and she knew he'd drop everything to be with her. He's already in bad books with the band for the stunt he tried to pull when he wanted to come after her in Barnacle Bay, and the last thing she'd want is to cause a rift between him and his bandmates. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 17, 2011 6:02:54 GMT -5
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Post by daijahv on Mar 17, 2011 6:31:25 GMT -5
Trying to make me late for work again? Inside:
I can understand Devon's annoyance with Krisis always coming in to save the day, but he has to understand that's her lover.
I wish Devon could help but there is no way for him to understand what's happening with his sister and that has to be eating him up, that he cannot be her protector as he once was. Poor Devon <3
I do love that Krisis FORCED her ass to the doctors' though. She really is stubborn. I hate the idea of the feud being back on between Krisis and Dev because they seemed to work great together but if it must happen for them to help Leigh, I'm for it.
Fear: The twins are MORE than enough to satisfy the Council's rulings! Nothing more needed WOOT I love the torture Krisis is feeling about the instant connection to the twins over what he felt with Lily I suspected something like that would occur only I thought it would be Leigh! I hope he realizes it wasn't the baby he wanted no part of but Jackie and can overcome that guilt! Such a very stressful and happy moment here! I can't wait until Devon hears this!! I know El's reaction, she already told her to hurry up LOL and now their babies will grow up together! YAY Well if Tamsyn doesn't get away that is. Devon is about to blow a freaking fuse though!!! I'm glad you worked them in because those pictures of them were too darling! That last line is giving me hope about him turning her soon?!  Great updates!! Thank you! |
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Post by jillyson on Mar 17, 2011 7:05:06 GMT -5
I'm at my desk now, waiting to be busted, so I'll be quick!
Outstanding! There's his 2 vampires right there - the council is appeased!
Now, I'm wondering if he'll need to turn her to get her safely thru the pregnancy... Hmmmm
This should just thrill Dev's socks off! Lol! (It thrilled mine off!)
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 17, 2011 7:14:20 GMT -5
DJ, LOL.I know what you mean. I run late all the time if I have to start here. Inside: you're right he needs to accept that their relationship has changed. They have other people now in their lives, and Leigh's not the little girl he had to watch over.
Leigh's stubborn, that's for sure. But she's more tired than anything else right now, and she just wanted to sleep and rest. Let's hope she doesn't pass on the stubborness to the little ones.
Dev and Krisis, there'll be more of them soon if Leigh insists on being turned. Fear: Yay, they are. This should please the Council.
I'm glad his ambivelent feelings came through. I wasn't sure if I conveyed his guilt well enough. I hope so too, in his mind he knows he doesn't love Lily any less, but the fact that he missed out on so much before she was born because he didn't allow himself to get close to Jackie has made him rethink his actions.
I'm so thrilled you picked up on the stressful and happy moment, because the next prompt picks up along those lines. As much as they are both thrilled with the news, it's a lot to absorb, a lot to deal with, and they'll both process the news differently.
Mhhh, Devon won't be the happiest, but there's nothing he can do about it. The big one to send him over the edge is if Krisis turns Leigh, there he'll go mad, no two ways about it.
But then again having Vampire nephews/nieces might make him rethink his feelings towards the vamps.
Only if something happens to Leigh during the pregnancy. But if she carries them to full term without a problem, he'll be happy to carry on with things as they are. Jill, Yes, hallelujah! There's a light at the end of the tunnel! LOL. Let's hope he's not pushed into making that decision. Yeah, Devon will be pretty pleased! he he he. |
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