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Post by coop on Apr 18, 2011 14:01:03 GMT -5
Wow its been a while since i read Krysis now its almost impossible for me to catch up, but i did read today's chapter AMAZING as always  When i found out that Devon and Eloise lost their child before they even thought of Tamsyn i thought of her lol. And i haven't read in a while mind you, but i knew that crazy girl would return. And Leigh ok omg she was pregnant and second omg is she having the baby early!!!  !!! Sigh oh how u keep us on the edge, LOVE IT!! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 18, 2011 15:07:55 GMT -5
Qui, I'm so glad you mentioned that, because that's exactly how she'll react. She won't back off. And sadly for her, if she's not careful the pregnancy may not end well.
You're right, about El, if that's what she was thinking. Remember that was just Devon's perception, they are both highly emotional, and in their state it would be easy to misunderstand things. Plus since Blake went missing, they haven't gotten a chance to be alone and talk things through and reassure each other. It's just been one questioning session after another. Earlier in that scene too Eloise thought Devon blamed her, "she could swear she could see the blame in his eyes". And later again she couldn't look him in the eye because she was so ashamed of herself. So, it's just a misunderstanding, that can grow into something big ad ugly if not addressed.
That's very true. Jonah was not that impressed with Crystal, but like you said, her emotions may drive her to work harder.
LOL @ "random" But you're right. Especially since he's so attached to them already.
Were you the only one who said you don't like naughty? LOL! Jenn, It doesn't look good for Leigh and the twins.
I know. It pains me too to see them in so much pain and despair. Thank you. I wasn't too sure about this chapter and if any of their emotions came across well.
I agree. He needs to listen to his gut feeling and tell all about Tamsyn. Whoa! Do I hear pitchforks being sharpened now for Tamsyn? LOL.
Thanks for reading.
Nicky, wow, thank you for getting back to Krisis. I appreciate that. And yes you were right, evil Tamsyn's on the loose. Leigh and Krisis need to stop stressing and all will be well. |
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Post by qui on Apr 18, 2011 15:22:44 GMT -5
Me? Don't like naughty? "Don't be ridiculous" Freedom!
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 19, 2011 1:47:25 GMT -5
I cracked up when I saw that Qui  , for a second there you sounded like Chippy |
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Post by qui on Apr 19, 2011 9:27:56 GMT -5
HA! I bet! Chippy lines are the best!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Apr 19, 2011 11:09:36 GMT -5
 ~ Oh no!,not the twins!
~ The last thing she needs,is stress!
~ Poor Dev and El,I hope they survive what that BITCH has done to their happy family,I hope their love is strong enough to endure this!!!!
~ Very sad,but well portrayed!(",)
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holleyberry
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Post by holleyberry on Apr 19, 2011 12:35:25 GMT -5
Argh! Devon! Tell the police about the woman! At this point it's about getting your son back. I hate how they both think the other hates them, when they themselves are feeling the guilt. this stuff can tear apart families. I hope Eloise and Devon are strong enough to get through his. Oh No! Is Leigh having the babies? Speaking of, i am still waiting for a certain PicSpam thread Loved it as usual Val. I love the details in your pictures. you have so much more patience there then I do. |
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Post by jillyson on Apr 19, 2011 18:47:44 GMT -5
Ahhhhh!!!!!! *screams running from the thread..,comes back
Dev and El are just heartbreaking to watch - you very masterfully portrayed the self blame they are going thru making them think they see blame in the others eyes, when in reality, it's all the same guilt.
I'm SO relieved they have a name to chase down, and with the chaos of Frostlets looming, I hope Dev doesn't forget to mention he also had a Tamsyn sighting! That would definitely place the focus on finding her!
The police...Hello, Jonah! I hope he and Crystal will follow up on that lead - they seem to really have a good line on Dev and El being innocent, and hopefully that means they'll investigate any lead, no matter how small!
Speaking of Frostlets... PLEASE let those sweet babies be ok! With so much stress, it's a miracle she's carried them as long as she has with no problems!
I'd tell you I was chewing my nails waiting for the next chapter, but my nails were toast a long time ago, thanks to your terrific writing!
I absolutely can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 22, 2011 6:00:44 GMT -5
Sorry guys it took me so long to respond. Been working on two Fallen story lines I'm thinking of turning into spinoffs and that's taken most of my week. But here we go... Karima, -Yeah, it doesn't look good for the Frostlets as Jill calls them
-I couldn't agree more about stress. Her pregnancy is abnormal as it is.
-This is the real test isn't it. If they can live through this without killing each other first then they'll be okay.
-Thank you. I hate writing sad stuff. But then again, sadness is part of life.
Thanks so much for getting back to this, and for all your support, always! Holley, You're right, it is about Blake, and he should be his priority. He should just suck it up and tell the cops. He'll deal with El's reaction later, that's if there is one. She's just lost in her misery and her guilt to worry about anything else, Exactly, if they can just talk, they'll both see what the other feels and they'll see it's not really blame but their own guilt. I hope so too. No, she's not having the Frostlets early. Just a big scare and more revelations, that's all. Ah man, I'll get onto the pic spam ASAP. Thank you, that means a lot to me. I love clutter that's all Jill, I know, and I'm sorry to have to put you through this  Thank you, that means a lot to me, especially since I struggle with givig the side characters' their voices. The name should help, Tamsyn certainly looks suspicious, and it was the watch that really gave her away. She had no idea Eloise was with Devon when he bought it for her. And you're right with all the chaos happening with Leigh, it can easily slip his mind. Let's hope it doesn't. And let's hope Krimsyn adds her own two cents worth I know. Krisis' blood must be super strong to have held her together for so long. This is a major scare, one that will hopefully make them realize what's important. And I promise I'll send you for a manicure once all the stories are wrapped up! Sweetdreams, you have every reason to be concerned, Leigh losing blood isn't a good sign. I know, they can never seem to catch a break. Hopefully when this is all over they'll all go on a nice holiday somewhere, who knows, maybe there'll be one or two weddings, or even three. Just saying the future doesn't look so bleak!
If Dev and El live through this, they'll be fine. But you're right blaming each other or themselves isn't helping anyone.
Thanks for reading.
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 24, 2011 17:29:10 GMT -5
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Post by daijahv on Apr 24, 2011 18:38:54 GMT -5
Um...update that main page Chica!! I almost missed this!!! HAHAHAHA I love that man! YAY!!! I cannot wait for baby Kris! He is too adorable  Not saying the others aren't because of course they are, I'm just more a baby boy kind of person (Qui knows that LOL sorry) I'm surrounded by women in my family UGH too much! So I avoid that as much as possible! I am happy Leigh is doing well!!! YAY!!! I'm surprised she hasn't developed a form of diabetes also with the triplets now! Those seem to go hand in hand. I'm so glad to hear Krisis will use all of his resources to rescue Blake! I love that man! Thank you for the update! That redhead and his future twin...sinful! I love them both to bits! I can't wait for their birth, the trouble they are going to cause will be epic! |
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Post by qui on Apr 24, 2011 20:58:17 GMT -5
I love how you wrote that in! The complication is very perfect and of course fitting.
Although Dev doesn't favor Krisis to much I'm sure he'd appreciate the help if it resulted in his son's return. Safe return.
Council...Thorton? *crosses fingers*
A son! Awww I can see Krisis now, proud to have a son to do manly things with such as fart and scratch their butts. All those women would drive him crazy!
These shots were perfectly beautiful! I told you, there is no such thing as poor shots as far as you're concerned. It just isn't possible! |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Apr 24, 2011 21:22:42 GMT -5
~ I already saw the pics and was a tad confused,but know I know why there were three, instead of two new toddlers playing, at the activity table!lol!
~ They are all extremely cute!
~ So relieved that everything is alright with the new brood!
~ loved it, as always!(going to do pics now! lol!)(",)
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Post by dblondepimpett on Apr 25, 2011 1:24:56 GMT -5
eek I see more prompts being posted!! I'm just going to wait until after finals and then read |
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Post by nygirl on Apr 26, 2011 1:14:40 GMT -5
So relieved that Leigh and the triplets are doing ok! Now to keep Krisis calm! I am also glad to see Krisis get his wish for a son...that would be far too many women in one household for any man to withstand! |
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