jillyson
Diligent Librarian 
Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
Posts: 9,634
|
Post by jillyson on Dec 22, 2009 10:14:57 GMT -5
Wow! Didn't see that coming! Can't wait to see the fallout from this chapter!
I was just a little confused on the timeline. Did her parents catch them in her room a 2 am and then let them go back to the carnival at that time? And everything else happened right after that, correct?
|
|
danasaur(:
Proof Reader
[M0:35]my reason has a voice[ss:Teal Time!]
Posts: 59
|
Post by danasaur(: on Dec 26, 2009 16:03:32 GMT -5
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwhs xx I love you people!!!
Jilly -- her parents came home from the carnival at two, and then zaylie ran down without good ol' damon, and then damon came down anyway. so yeahyeah, the stuff damon told her and the stuff zaylie told him and what logan and stuff did happened after the 2 am thingy. (((((:
**Updated with Chapter Six**
I can honestly say this time - i kinda like this one. I spose. If you don't read this one, though, you'll be totally lost the rest of the series. ((:
|
|
|
|
Post by Pixx on Dec 26, 2009 19:28:09 GMT -5
Holy Cow...I've got a lot to catch up on
|
|
jillyson
Diligent Librarian
Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
Posts: 9,634
|
Post by jillyson on Dec 26, 2009 20:04:54 GMT -5
WOW!!! I sure got my question answered in this chapter! Lol! Now I can't wait to see what happens with all his cards on the table...
|
|
NoReins
Studious Secretary
[M0:12][ss:Teal Time!]
Posts: 114
|
Post by NoReins on Dec 27, 2009 13:54:19 GMT -5
Wow! I have to say this series keeps getting better. I really like how you connected the story to the living world with the dates and with the whole Twilight thing. I really hope you'll be taking pictures to go along with these chapters, but if not that's okay too because the story works well as a stand alone. Can't wait for the next chapter. ;D
|
|
|
|
Post by valpre1983 on Dec 27, 2009 16:18:31 GMT -5
Great update Dana. Loved it. I enjoyed this chapter more than the previous one!
|
|
cubanray36
Proof Reader
[M0:39]When will it end?...![ss:Coffee]
Posts: 52
|
Post by cubanray36 on Dec 27, 2009 16:56:48 GMT -5
ha wow really good job. Part 6 beats all the other chapters for me. Besides very few spelling mistakes/missing words it was perfect! Keep it up
|
|
danasaur(:
Proof Reader
[M0:35]my reason has a voice[ss:Teal Time!]
Posts: 59
|
Post by danasaur(: on Jan 12, 2010 17:54:31 GMT -5
i am super sorry i havent been updating in like a month soon. )):
i'm always so gosh darn busy. it's annoying and depressing, because i WANNA write it. i jus cant. GRRR.
so ima go write like NOW.
again, showwie for the non-update deal xx
|
|
danasaur(:
Proof Reader
[M0:35]my reason has a voice[ss:Teal Time!]
Posts: 59
|
Post by danasaur(: on Jan 19, 2010 19:42:53 GMT -5
showwie for double-posting, buttt UPDATED WITH CHAPTER SEVENNN. sorry its like so totally not organized and whatnot at the moment. it's being mean. XPPPP don't read this until you've finished reading: in case you're wondering, i have a reason for not putting captions where the German was. ((((((: again, im sorry I just now updated like a month ago. it's been so busyy...i literally put off a report to finish that. now i have to go do that report. joyus. -_- read happily! ♥ |
|
|
|
Post by valpre1983 on Jan 21, 2010 2:14:53 GMT -5
Chapter Seven was awesome Dana
|
|
danasaur(:
Proof Reader
[M0:35]my reason has a voice[ss:Teal Time!]
Posts: 59
|
Post by danasaur(: on Jan 29, 2010 23:22:38 GMT -5
**updated with chapter eight**
i quite love this chapter. besides the beginning. ((: thank chuu valpreeeeeeee xx
enjoyy <3
|
|
jillyson
Diligent Librarian
Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
Posts: 9,634
|
Post by jillyson on Jan 30, 2010 13:48:50 GMT -5
I've got a bunch of stuff I have to do, but I'll get back here and caught up ASAP!
|
|
danasaur(:
Proof Reader
[M0:35]my reason has a voice[ss:Teal Time!]
Posts: 59
|
Post by danasaur(: on Apr 30, 2010 20:44:13 GMT -5
BAZOOOMMMMM. ahaaa, i jumped from seven to freaking NINE. >8DDDDD in like four months but no one needs to know THAT much of it. geebus.
so, yes, there you have it. eight and nine. ten should be out shortly. its open atmo. ((:
happy readingg ♥
|
|
danasaur(:
Proof Reader
[M0:35]my reason has a voice[ss:Teal Time!]
Posts: 59
|
Post by danasaur(: on Jun 11, 2010 14:57:17 GMT -5
just here real quick to say i updated ((: enjoyyy <333
|
|
jillyson
Diligent Librarian
Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
Posts: 9,634
|
Post by jillyson on Jun 12, 2010 9:22:43 GMT -5
Wow! I can't wait to see what comes next! What a clff hanger!
|
|
