danasaur(:
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Post by danasaur(: on Dec 15, 2009 21:29:19 GMT -5
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 16, 2009 2:04:03 GMT -5
Danaaah, this had better be coming soon. Don't leave us hanging like you did with In My Place. I love, love love the intro. Somehow your prologues/intros always haunt me and leave me wanting more. Love the cover BTW.
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danasaur(:
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Post by danasaur(: on Dec 16, 2009 15:59:13 GMT -5
HEHEHEHE. CHAPTER 1-3 IS OUTTT.
By the way, i am SOOO showwie for In My Place. My computer deleted the plot, and i was no longer interested in writing it. Aka, I was ticked off. xP
Enjoy!! x]]]
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 17, 2009 11:07:01 GMT -5
Wow...awesome three chapters Danaah. I loved them all. I was a bit shocked when I saw there were no pictures but the content is so awesome that it made up for the lack of pics. I felt like I was reading an actual book. The plot is off to an intriguing start and I can't wait to see where Zee and Damon are headed. The two seem to have a lot of baggage from their past but when they are together things seem to fall into place. I really, really enjoyed it. I like Josie and Aaron's characters. They seem like the cute little charmed couple. Tell me you'll see this one through. |
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Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Dec 17, 2009 11:34:02 GMT -5
I think I'm going to hold off reading this until it IS finished...lol. I hate starting to read a good story and then never get to see an ending. It has happened SO many times in these situations. Keep going Dana! You go girl! Finish this one so I can have a good read...  |
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danasaur(:
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Post by danasaur(: on Dec 17, 2009 17:06:26 GMT -5
hehehehe!!!
THANK CHUUUU ♥ ♥
Chapter Four is up alreadyyyy x]]]]
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Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Dec 17, 2009 18:49:04 GMT -5
You go, girl! |
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Post by jillyson on Dec 17, 2009 22:54:26 GMT -5
I'll get around to reading this asap!
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 18, 2009 5:08:02 GMT -5
Whoa! Chapter 4's such a dramatic chapter Danaaah...Whoa !
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Dec 18, 2009 18:59:28 GMT -5
I like it! I can't wait to see more about Damon's past!
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Post by NoReins on Dec 19, 2009 21:22:34 GMT -5
All I can say is Wow! Your characters are extremely well developed and I love your diction. I can tell this story is going to be fantastic. I can't wait for more.
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cubanray36
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Post by cubanray36 on Dec 21, 2009 12:15:55 GMT -5
OMG i read alll of them today and just...wow haha Dana i always knew you where an AMAZING writer but you really have out done yourself with this one. I couldn't stop reading! You better keep this one up kid lol
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danasaur(:
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Post by danasaur(: on Dec 21, 2009 19:36:04 GMT -5
AWWWWWWWWH xx Thank chu alllll!!!! -gives glomp to everyone-
**Updated with Chapter Five**
[[[x I'm really pleased at how people can relate to the charries. I actually HAD to do that, or else I'd get super bored of writing it. I have to relate to the charries and not have them be like sixteen and speak like a forty year old. that's horrible. So, yeah. x]]]
BUTTT.
I can honestly say - I hate chapter five.
So beware. ((:
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Post by cubanray36 on Dec 21, 2009 22:31:33 GMT -5
You can't be serious when you say you hate chp 5 .... that was by far the best chapter yet! All i have to say is that I didn't expect HALF that stuff to happen. Wow reallyy good job Dana.
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 22, 2009 3:02:02 GMT -5
Whoa ...chapter five was SHOCKING...plot and language alike. WHOA. I didn't see that one coming about Logan. He really is messed up and his messed-upness has found its way to Zay...poor girl, I'm surprised she hasn't gone off her head with all the drama going on in her life. And such a shame about Damon's mom's tragic accident  I did pick up a few typos and some confusion between "their" and "they"/"they're". E.g "I have the kind of fantasies where their holding hands" I think that should have read "I have the kind of fantasies where they're holding hands" You might wany to go over the chapter again and correct those. Overall though, another great chapter and the plot definitely thickens with every chapter on this one! ;D |
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