jillyson
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[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Mar 21, 2011 20:34:30 GMT -5
WHAT?  WHAT grabbed her? I love the team work and the banter between these two, and I know this is going to be a great, great ride, but... WHAT GRABBED HER? ? I thought maybe the step daughter was a goth-type, so being a small town, they figured her for a witch that could do something like that. No idea why that popped into my head.  |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 22, 2011 1:54:47 GMT -5
You know, I can just kill you for that cliff hanger. LOL. Just kidding, maybe not kill. But you're bad. Just when we get to the extra good stuff you leave us hanging.
Love the chemistry between your main characters. It will be interesting to see what it does for their "working" relationship.
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Post by sweetdreams25 on Mar 24, 2011 15:17:28 GMT -5
I thought maybe the step daughter was a goth-type, so being a small town, they figured her for a witch that could do something like that. No idea why that popped into my head. you are VERY close with your thoughts! lol as for what grabbed her...haha well you'll be like B| when you see it lol thanks for commenting! LOL please don't kill me Freedom. Cliffhangers are just fun I tell ya! You'll be happy to know the next part isn't really a cliff hanger  ! lol thanks for reading!! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 24, 2011 15:26:13 GMT -5
WHOA! First, first. I hope I am... Your shots are beautiful. I'm glad it was just a cat, and not some demon, that grabbed her. It's sad what happened to Maria, but if I was Crystal I'd be curious as to why Jason didn't mention anything about her death, and why they left the place so quickly. What's he hiding?
Wonder how many of the possessed are roaming the town?
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Post by daijahv on Mar 24, 2011 17:26:53 GMT -5
OMG AN UPDATE?!?! WHAT?!? Reading...
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Post by qui on Mar 24, 2011 18:37:56 GMT -5
OMG action packed! I was happy it was only a cat that jumped at her but wtf is up with those possessed? people?
So sad about Maria!
Jason has me curious now.
CLIFFHANGERS... I'm going to shake you!!!
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Post by jillyson on Mar 24, 2011 19:49:30 GMT -5
A cat!!!! (or WAS it??? Maybe a demon that changed form before she saw it???)
And so sad about Maria, but Jason doesn't seem to be acting like I'd think he would...Hmmmmmm.
And Sarah must know they're onto her, if she's sending all these possessed souls after them. (and Maria?) Or is this Madame Lily setting her up? So many possibilities!
So much action - I love this!
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Post by sweetdreams25 on Mar 24, 2011 22:11:45 GMT -5
WHOA! First, first. I hope I am... Yep! You were first!! *hands giant cookie* I hope you like cookies o.O lol you'll have to excuse me. I'm sleepy and a little delirious now. You know, I was SO pumped about doing the fight scene. lol That was the only part I wanted to do. After finding the amazing pose box for it I was done. lol Jason may or may not be hiding something. Hunters definitely like to keep their secrets. It's a bit fishy though that's for sure. The town isn't completely covered with the possessed, but if they don't move fast enough it will be Qui I can feeeel the love! lol
Don't shake me!!! I thought I did less of a cliff hanger that time. lol
the possessed people, they'll be explained a little better in the next part or the one after that. They're just a tad bit crazy =p lol Jilly Lol! Yea it was just a cat, but you've given me some ideas...
Jason is acting a little fishy isn't he?
Lady you're giving me all kinds of ideas with your comments! I love it! Thank you all for commenting! |
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Post by daijahv on Mar 25, 2011 19:49:01 GMT -5
SahWeet Dee! I commented earlier...last night I think but it seemed to have not gone through anyway um... I LMAO at the cat!! HAHA There is always a stupid cat lurking in the shadows somewhere!!! Great comic relief there. I'm sorry poor Crystal kind of got embarrassed in front of Foxy (damn that man's eyes are awesome!) She's hearing her Mom's voice? WTF? Why is her Mom haunting her? Or does she have vital information but Crystal is refusing to open herself up to her? I cannot wait to see what this reveals!!! It seems like a great backstory! Holy crap! It was the girl?  Interesting turn of events! The cops may not be as dumb as I thought! BUT how are they going to find out the truth? LOL I kind of like that she took it upon herself to get revenge on her abuser and I LOVE the way he died (because I'm a little sick in the head) but she is messing with power she has no idea about! Karma and all will come back in a big way! We already saw some of this when the possessed people starting popping up from nowhere! I wonder what else her careless use of magic has stirred up!! The Madame has a few tricks up her sleeve I'm sure! Everything has a price! Is she using Sara as part of her endgame for something? She wants revenge on the town or someone in the town and is using Sara so that she won't have a hand in their death? Or so that it can't be traced back to her? It's interesting to me how Sara openly believed in this whole magic thing but then again I suppose when you're abused you kind of make your own world in your head maybe all of this seemed real? And if that's the case I wonder what else her imagination will come up with and if they will possibly come to life now that she has magic on her side? That'll only cause more problems and work for Jason and Crystal! They make a great team by the way!! I really enjoyed the fight scene! That was badass! It was great seeing her take care of business and I think she kind of saved face showing Jason that she could handle her own especially since he thought it was funny that she fired at a cat. I'm wondering why they didn't search the house, Jason seemed rather quick to get away from the scene. Did he find something that he is trying to keep from Crystal? Something important that explains exactly what the heck killed poor Maria and why? He also didn't seem to mourn as I thought he would  Is he keeping a straight face for Crystals' sake or has his heart really hardened like that from being around death as he has? P.S. I'm loving his little names for her! Crystal seems to shrug it off as she should since he has a womanizing personality, but I think it's cute! "Suga"  Um...perhaps I should tell you I kinda have a way of rambling...sorry for the long comment. |
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Post by sweetdreams25 on Mar 25, 2011 20:40:41 GMT -5
Daijah...girl boo! don't apoligize for leaving a long comment! i love your comment! lol yea i didn't want to throw too many crazies in too soon so i figured id just have a random cat bust in. those sneaky devils! im glad you like his eyes. let me tell you i spent at least thirty minutes alone trying to find the right eyes for him! it was definitely her mom's voice that she was hearing, but... argh! i can't say too much without giving away anything. yeah the cops just so happened to be right about sara, though they really don't know it (if that makes sense). lol eh we're all a little sick in the head. i was trying to think of the craziest way to go. sara is definitely to blame for everything thats happening in the town, but she's only a pawn in the master plan!!! her's is coming. the madame...she'll be popping up soon and hopefully her part will be explained well enough jason and crystal are my favorite characters to work with. they are so different yet the same dang girl...you really hit the nail on the head with a lot of what you said especially about jason. im trying my best to not spill the beans! lol thank you for the comment! |
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Post by daijahv on Apr 5, 2011 19:55:49 GMT -5
WOW! So much happened this chapter I don’t know where to begin! (Jason’s hot!) Ok so I still am really enjoying the playful banter between Crystal and Jason (and I love “Crys” it’s cute). I love that he was able to express himself (SHOWER SCENE!!!!) and get his emotions out while he could. I really did think he was cold to the fact that his friend died but he was right, everyone grieves differently and it’s nice seeing the non chauvinist side of him (and the front too ). ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS shots in this! Just beautiful work with the pictures! They blew me away! I’m thrilled Maria was able to point Jason in the right direction! That explains why he lingered inside the house the night Crystal was attacked! I was shocked when the demon took over Sara but even more surprised that Crystal tried saving her rather than following her gut and Jason’s words of wisdom. Maybe it was the familial sense in her to try and save the young girl, but that demon had already taken her, there was no going back. The eyes were freaky by the way and I loved it! I did feel bad for the girl too. She had no one and was only doing what she thought she had to in order to protect her Mom. It was sweet, but she should have read the fine print. Jason’s seriously falling for Crystal and it’s sweet. He needs a woman that’s not a one night stand and can hold her own against the monsters they face! Jason is too funny and perverted lol but I love it. OMG OMG Cliffhanger?! You evil woman! I can’t believe he found his brother! But I can’t help but wonder if this is some sort of trick! Why is he at Lily’s? Why did he appear AFTER the burst of bright light? Is he a monster? A Demon? A ghost like the voice Crystal hears of her Mom? So many questions and I can’t wait to see where this goes! (By the way, the hotness runs in Jason’s family, may I say DAYUM!) P.S. Don’t forget to update this post also with your update! I found it in the pic/spam, but that can easily be overlooked Great chapter and I’m dying for more! |
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Post by jillyson on Apr 5, 2011 20:21:40 GMT -5
WHAT??? WHAT? His brother? OMG!!!! I love, love love this - I think I probably say that too much, but I am SO enjoying this ride! I love that he calls her Crys, and I like that he did grieve in his own way for Maria. You've given them both such great personalities, and you always stay true to who they are. (and Crystal + Jason = AWESOME) I can't wait to see what's going to happen now - where's Crystal? Is his brother real? Is Madame Lily behind his reappearance? I absolutely cannot wait to see what happens next! ROCKING cliffhanger, by the way! |
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Post by sweetdreams25 on Apr 5, 2011 20:30:32 GMT -5
WOW! So much happened this chapter I don’t know where to begin! (Jason’s hot!) Ok so I still am really enjoying the playful banter between Crystal and Jason (and I love “Crys” it’s cute). I love that he was able to express himself (SHOWER SCENE!!!!) and get his emotions out while he could. I really did think he was cold to the fact that his friend died but he was right, everyone grieves differently and it’s nice seeing the non chauvinist side of him (and the front too ). ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS shots in this! Just beautiful work with the pictures! They blew me away! I’m thrilled Maria was able to point Jason in the right direction! That explains why he lingered inside the house the night Crystal was attacked! I was shocked when the demon took over Sara but even more surprised that Crystal tried saving her rather than following her gut and Jason’s words of wisdom. Maybe it was the familial sense in her to try and save the young girl, but that demon had already taken her, there was no going back. The eyes were freaky by the way and I loved it! I did feel bad for the girl too. She had no one and was only doing what she thought she had to in order to protect her Mom. It was sweet, but she should have read the fine print. Jason’s seriously falling for Crystal and it’s sweet. He needs a woman that’s not a one night stand and can hold her own against the monsters they face! Jason is too funny and perverted lol but I love it. OMG OMG Cliffhanger?! You evil woman! I can’t believe he found his brother! But I can’t help but wonder if this is some sort of trick! Why is he at Lily’s? Why did he appear AFTER the burst of bright light? Is he a monster? A Demon? A ghost like the voice Crystal hears of her Mom? So many questions and I can’t wait to see where this goes! (By the way, the hotness runs in Jason’s family, may I say DAYUM!) P.S. Don’t forget to update this post also with your update! I found it in the pic/spam, but that can easily be overlooked Great chapter and I’m dying for more! haha! gotta have at least one shower scene! being a hunter definitely does something to a person. over the years jason has seen a lot of good people die so he developed the hard exterior when it comes to grieving. he can't allow himself to be seen emotional or "weak". thats how i am. lol i refuse to cry in front of anyone XD thank you so much! im glad you like the pics!!! yep! i didn't want anyone to hate poor jason. he just had to find that info. crystal will do anything possible to save a person. she does this because she wasn't able to save others close to her and promised not to let it happen again. that will be explained better in the future. oh good you like the eyes! i thought they looked kinda like a rats eyes at first! lol thats the thing with demons. they paint a pretty picture to you to sell their products and after you use it you're pretty much screwed. they feed on weak-minded people like sara. LOL! he could definitely go for something more than a booty call. what makes jason like her even more is that she wont throw her panties at him like he thought . he's a bit on the egotistical side. yeaaa i had to throw another cliff hanger  it sure is a huge coincidence that his brother popped up now of all times...especially after being gone for so long. thank you thank you!! and thanks for the heads up about updating the post, because i definitely would not have thought about it. but i have one question...when you say updating the post you mean just bumping the thread? o.O im on the slow side. lol @ Jilly *BLUUSH* thank you! im glad you're enjoying it!!! thank you SO much! i always worry if i stray away from personalities and whatnot, but you have wiped those worries away! i love a guy thats a huge flirt (only with me tho lol) so i try to make jason the biggest flirt ever. im always tempted to give away a bunch of details with your comments! lol i will say this...lilly has a lot to do with everything!  lol once again thank you so much for reading! |
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Post by jillyson on Apr 5, 2011 21:05:05 GMT -5
She means click "modify" on your first post in this thread, and change the title to add "Updated 4/4/11", but it looks like you already figured it out! Lol! Plus you posted in the alert thread, so you covered all the bases. I forgot to leave the "biggest" comment... 
You deserve an award for the best-placed loaf of french bread EVER!!! I almost fell out of my chair laughing when I saw that! VERY impressive! ROTFL!
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Post by sweetdreams25 on Apr 5, 2011 21:31:21 GMT -5
She means click "modify" on your first post in this thread, and change the title to add "Updated 4/4/11", but it looks like you already figured it out! Lol! Plus you posted in the alert thread, so you covered all the bases. I forgot to leave the "biggest" comment...
You deserve an award for the best-placed loaf of french bread EVER!!! I almost fell out of my chair laughing when I saw that! VERY impressive! ROTFL!
OHHHHHH! okay! i never thought about putting the "Updated" thanks LOLOLOL!! *bows* thank you thank you =p |
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